This chapter was so sad! I loved it though. I've never thought about what it must have been like when Frank and Alice got tortured by Bellatrix. Definitely do not want this story to end. Report Review
I was rolling in laughter this entire chapter, trying and failing to be silent as it's a bit late and my roommates sleeping. She woke up and asked if I was having a seizure. Worth it though. I truly love this fic and how you portray the characters, especially Scorpius and Ron. I feel like you got them all just right, straight out of the books. Well, Ron and Hermione from the books at least. I'm rambling. Should sleep. Won't. Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Sorry, roommate. No seizures. Just fanfiction and snogging.
I'm really glad you are enjoying the story so far. Ron was really important to me in this story because he is my favorite HP character. So it was a blast writing him.
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Hello, I'm still here and loving this story! Will there be a sequel, or will it just be ending? I really love Elena and Simon's relationship, as well as her relationship with Corinne. Gah this story is so good! I decided just before bed that I would check my favorited stories to see if any had been updated and when I saw this story had I literally gasped aloud. Great chapter!Author's Response: Hi! And thank you so much for being patient with my infrequent updates. And for leaving a review ♥
I don't know if there can be a sequel, exactly, to this, but I have thought about writing a shorter novella about Corinne. I have several ideas about what happened to her before this story and what happens after that would be interesting to write I think. (And even though it wouldn't be Elena's story, doesn't mean that she wouldn't show up). That's not 100 percent though. But definitely something I'm considering :)
I'm glad that you checked then and it's great to hear that you were excited :D
Thanks again and I'll try to update more quickly this time :) Report Review
I came across this just now in the feeds and I absolutely love it! It's so different from the typical James/Lily story, and I can already tell it's going to be great :) Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :) this review made me so happy! :D Report Review
Dundundun...poor Javery :( Freddy and the cats though! I love cats, and Freddy. That just made me love him more :) I love the introduction of Mason and Shelby! Can't wait till the plot thickens even more. Great chapter, I'll be eagerly awaiting for more! Oh, and if you were referring to me at the beginning, then thanks so much!Author's Response: Haha, I feel like if Amy wasn't around Freddie would be a marvelous cat lady. Don't you think?
And yes, I was :)
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This was a great chapter. I really love your take on Fred II. Most people depict him as a manwhore who doesn't take anything seriously, and I don't think that's exactly realistic. I'm sorry to hear you've been under the weather! I've found Little Yellow Spider by Devendra Banhart to cheer me up :)Author's Response: I'm glad you like my Fred. For some reason he has resonated with me a lot. I don't like the idea of manwhore characters. I just don't think it's realistic ... or creative. So I'm glad you like him.
Thank you so much for the review! Report Review
2:30am, just caught up. You're rather good at cliffhangers! Thank God you don't do it more often :) You do an excellent job describing the battles and the action, please keep going!Author's Response: Hi again!
You read fast! I know that a ton happens from chapter 16-22, (at some point, it becomes this continuous 4-chapter-long scene) so it's probably a lot of plot to process. And cliff hangers--they are way too much fun to write (especially in serialized stuff that's posted a chapter at a time) but I know that it's maybe not so much fun for readers. Anyways, I have the next chapter written (I just need to quickly edit it) and then a draft of the chapter after that. So hopefully there shall be updates soon!
Again, it's really a great complement to hear that you read this entire story all the way through. And I can't thank you enough for letting me know that you did by leaving a review.
--Haley Report Review
Hello, I just wanted to say that this is one of the most suspenseful, wonderful stories on this site I have ever read! I've been reading for hours. I LOVE mystery and action, and it's so hard to find that sort of thing on here as a lot of it is drama or angst or fluffy romance. Not that I don't love a bit of romance; I'm rambling. I just wanted you to know that I am a huge supporter of this, and I'm going to keep reading now, even though it's 1am! Nice twist at the end of the chappie by the way :)Author's Response: Hi!
Thank you so much for leaving a review! It's great to hear that you just stumbled on this story and that you liked it enough to keep reading. I'm glad that there are people like you who enjoy mystery and action because I am definitely not great at writing fluffy romance. And it's fine--rambling is to be expected in reviews (and review responses =] ).
Anyways, thank you so much again! Report Review
Hello, I've been following your story since...well, the beginning of BTQC I suppose! I only recently got an account so this is the first review I've ever left you :) Your writing is phenomenal and I absolutely love this story and this chapter. I lost it at 'douchecanoes' hahaha, it made my night! Cannot wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: First review of the new year! Look at that :)
I'm so glad you made an account and you're reviewing! It means a lot! Thank you so much for your kind words and I really, really hope you like the rest of the sequel! Report Review
I love this plot twist! And I love this story so much! It really needs some more attention, seriously. Please keep posting!Author's Response: Thanks! I agree that it needs more writing, but I'm running through a patch of 'writer's block' and I can't post any more chapters due to the administrators' holidays or something!
Cheers, SW. Report Review
This story seems like it's one of those that will just make me laugh out loud like a lunatic! I really enjoy Willow's character, and you have a very nice plot set up happening! Love it!Author's Response: Awww thanks that was the point of it, making people laugh!
Thanks for reviewing, SW. Report Review
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