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Review #1, by EscapingExpectationsBadgers, Blushing and Gods of Lurve: Epilogue

24th April 2013:
*Excited gasp* That was AMAZING! I finished this story in a record (for me at least) 8 hours. I was enthralled I couldn't stop reading. You are amazing!
Since I'm a meany I'm gonna add in a few constructive criticisms.
The whole bad luck spell seemed a tad far fetched in my opinion. I didn't find it particularly believable. But it was a big part of your plot, well really it was your whole plot.
I also think you should have had a bit more focus around Albus. Yeah you had Katie being obsessed with him, but we didn't really find out much about his character throughout the story. Which I found a little disappointing.
But really it was very good. I'm a tiny bit disappointed that Fred and Katie didn't get married for real. I could just see them watching little Michelangelo and tiny Pez playing in their backyard. Of course they would name their child after the Frouse that brought them together.
Anyways my tiny daydream is a little of track. I really did love your story. I think Katie was an amazing character, and I'm impressed with the character development she had going for her. You're a good writer. Be proud. Thanks for the amazing story, and for giving Hufflepuffs a better name for themselves. They are not cowards, and you proved that.
Good job Layla.

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Review #2, by EscapingExpectationsThe Art of Breathing.: Endings.

9th February 2013:
Wow, just wow. I can honestly say I fell in love with this novel. It's breathtaking. I've read hundreds of books and hundreds of fanfics and a total of 2 have made me cry and feel the strongest emotions for characters. Those 2 novels are Finding Faith and The Art Of Breathing. I think you're an amazing writers. I think you're going to write a novel and have it published and change peoples lives with it. I'm beyond impressed.

Author's Response: EscapingExpectations, thank you so very very much. You are very very lovely and I adore you. Thank you sooo mucchhh :D



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Review #3, by EscapingExpectationsJust Quidditch: Late Night Chats and Insomniac Stats

31st January 2013:
I swear to Merlin, if Alex and Erik don't get married and have a dozen children I will hunt you down and Avada Kadava you *brandishes wand*.
This story is really great although it can be a bit difficult to distinguish which POV at first.
Can't wait for the next chapter :D

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Review #4, by EscapingExpectationsSimply Smashing: 10+5=? HELLS YEAH IT EQUALS CHAPTER 15.

23rd November 2012:
I really, really, really love this novel. It's so funny. I can't decided who I want Tiff to be with more, Nate or James. I'm leaning more towards James at the moment.

I think Jen needs to be put in her place and so does Addie. Tiff did nothing wrong and they are acting like 2 year olds! I hate jealous girls.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

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Review #5, by EscapingExpectationsLove Goddesses, Overprotective Brothers, and James Potter: Sun Vomit, Balloon Animals, and Eggplant Head

18th November 2012:
I think I might be in love with Ro. I've been laughing so much while reading my brother came in to see if I was dying. I don't have an attractive laugh :/ I should probably fix that.

I can't wait to see your next chapter. STAY WEIRD AND EAT CHEESECAKE

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Review #6, by EscapingExpectationsFinding Faith: Epilogue

14th November 2012:
Truly amazing. You're a brilliant writer.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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