I do however want to praise you on the amazing yet very subtle character development you've given James over the course of the 2 stories. I thought to myself the other day that James hasn't changed that much (and he hasn't to an extent) but I read back through BTTQ and the difference between James in the beggining of that story and the James we see now is outstanding
Though James isn't coping all that well, he's doing a lot better than the James from BTTQ would have. James is now at least facing his problems head on whilst the old James would have got drunk, made a fort and hexed poor Wesley
I miss Wes actually, more than I thought he would. Can he pop up again soon?
So, anyway, yeah I feel like James is also a lot nicer now. Before he was kind of a loveable jerk who had the occasional nice moment but now he's a nice guy who can still be a bit of a jerk sometimes. He's really come a long way, matured (though he still has a long way to go) yet stayed the same dorky and clumsy guy underneath
Yes, sorry James, no matter how hard you try and hide it you are a massive dork underneath all of that male bravado. But it's okay, because you're hot. And if there's anything chicks love it's hot nerds. Embrace you inner dork boy!
On to Avery, I just love the relationship between her and James no matter what the hell is going on. Whether they're friends, a couple or not even talking the dynamic between them is always fantastic and very believable. Given I am a girl who at the age of 18 fell in love with her best friend of six years I can totally relate to all of this (bar the Quidditch and my dad's not a douche)
I really can't think what I'd do if I was Javery in this situation. James worked so hard to get to where he is now and nearly lost it all once before so I'd hate to see him loose it again. Also, he hides a lot of emotions and seems to repress them so I'd be concerned that one more bad thing could just tip him over the edge and then we'll have to see (read, whatever) him breakdown and cry
Which would be horrible yet amazing at the same time
Brilliant work here, you've convinced me that as much as this is a love story between James and Avery it is also James Potter's coming of age story (and I consider it canon to the main series) Report Review
Love this story! I'm completely fascinated by Al as a character and what makes him tick. I can't wait until the part where he realizes he isn't gods gift and, hopefully, becomes a better person. There does seem to be traces of someone decent that has crept threw at various points Report Review
I love this story and having read through it all again today I have also come to the conclusion that:
I LOVE AIDAN BENNET
Can I please have him? He's such a sweetie and my favourite character in this whole story Report Review
Ah, the Javery feels!!
I love reading this story but it always makes me feel sad. Because I reach the end of a chapter and James still isn't real. Or my boyfriend. And Avery still isn't real. Or my best friend
Javery should be together so much. Avery keeps James grounded and calm so well and let's face it he does tend to get a little bit. mentally ill at timesAuthor's Response: Aw! That makes my heart hurt. I will put in a good word to james for you.
Mentally ill. HAHA. Seriously. That's the best way of describing it. Laughing so hard.
Thank you :) Enjoy the rest! (don't be too sad) Report Review
Not gonna lie that story about Nathan made me tear up just a little
I love your James Potter - he's such a decent, kind and nice person compared to a lot of James II's in FanFiction who are complete A-holes
Oh, and I love Ali too but still shipping Javery all the way
Keep up the good workAuthor's Response: You and me both. That was an unplanned moment, as have been a lot of things in BTQC and DTTT. I'm so happy you're liking James. He has a lot of complexes, but above all else he has a heart of gold.
Thank you! Report Review
Absolutely loved it! Best chapter yet. I adore the relationship between Aggy and Aidan Report Review
I really like this!
Riley seems lovely, though I'm still not sure if he has another motive or not? Hope he doesn't he seems incredibly sweet
Well doneAuthor's Response: Thank you! I guess we'll have to see(x Report Review
I loved this! Wish it was a full storyAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I'm sorry to say this will only ever be a oneshot, but I'm glad that you enjoyed it enough to wish it were longer! :) Report Review
I enjoyed this chapter! Bless Scorpious but who says the right thing to a girl they like aged 11 anywaysAuthor's Response: Thanks! I loved Scorpius even more after writing this chapter, and I hope you did too!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
:-) Report Review
I didn't read the first version of this story so can't compare but I really like what I've read so farAuthor's Response: YEAH! FIRST REVIEWER!! Honestly, you aren't missing out on anything because the other version was a bit "eh". Report Review
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