You're a horrible cruel person. :(

Author's Response: Hahaha but with a favourite I gather that it wasn't all bad? :P Thank you so much for reviewing!

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Please please please update soon! I'll love you forever if you do! I'll even give you a box of assorted chocolates! It's just that Ariadne and Al are so cute adorable cute ajshnakw and I really really really love this story so sdfjgunerg. I await the next chapter very eagerly.

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Scorpius Malfoy is one of my favourite characters ever. He deserves the adoration of mankind.

Author's Response: Scorpius would definitely agree on that. Thanks for reviewing!

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GAYTFEYTEQFREWTFRFE! HE FINALLY KNOWS! WHGSDIYWRGFYERFG!!! AND THEY'RE FRIENDS AGAIN AND AKSHFSUAGYRGHFUI!

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WHY DOES SHE ALWAYS HAVE DOUBTS! It's extremely frustrating how indecisive she is.

Author's Response: Welcome to my life. Del has my incredibly inconveinient indecisive traits.

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Del is kind of a bitch. I mean, I get it that she had a terrible childhood and was bullied by people she thought were her friends, but shouldn't that make her realize how horrible it makes you feel instead of wanting revenge? And she obviously knows she's horrid if she was so convinced she could heartlessly crush people she bet her life on it. Also, I don't think it's very realistic that her friends turned on her because they realized she wasn't pretty. I mean, maybe they'd of stopped being friends with her but they wouldn't have any reason to bully her.
It's exciting and well-written though, and the plot is good.

Author's Response: Thank you for being entirely honest with this review! Mostly I just get, 'OMG THIS IS SO GOOD UPDATE QUICKLY', and I also just realized how incredibly arrogant that sounded. But regardless, thank you for being honest.

So, the bitch part. Keep in mind that you're only on Chapter 8. I'm probably not giving you too much of a spoiler by telling you that she realizes that revenge is bad later in the story. But you do make a good point with the horrid crushing thing. I am editing the story... I'd read back, it might make a bit more sense to you.

And again, I'm editing. I realize that the reason she was bullied, with the friend thing. But I have a plot that I need to pick up on, which is part of the reason why I'm editing.

~Delia

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Yay! I love stories about criminal empires and stuff! :D

Author's Response: I love them too :) Thanks for the review, I hope you carry on reading! :)

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You spelled "quite" right. So I love you. And this story. I absolutely adore and cherish this story in all it's glory!!! :D

Author's Response: Haha thank you! I'm so glad you like my story and my spelling/grammar skillz.

Thank you for this quite lovely review :)

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Facking hell and huofgwrhgruwehgeyf
no!

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There are so many psychotic students in this school it's borderline ridiculous.

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This is possibly one of the weirdest ideas for a fanfiction I have ever read. It's hilarious though, I love it!

Author's Response: I will agree, it is very strange haha Yay! I'm glad you think so! Thanks so much for reviewing and favouriting :)

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Wow. I'm reading this story in a sort of daze-like state because of how well written it is. It's fascinating and exciting, all i all quite amazing.

Author's Response: YOU'RE SO CUTE, thank you! that's so lovely of you to say, day = made x

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YES! YAHO! (in a non-Audrey-like way)

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I keep expecting her to run off and spend the rest of her life hiding in the chamber of secrets or something.

Author's Response: Hahaha :D She probably would do that if she knew where the Chamber is and if she knew how to speak Parseltongue. I'm horrible to her. I really am. ♥

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Will you marry my wife. I almost died laughing.

Author's Response: ahaha, well i'm glad you found it funny :D

ellie :) xx

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There is no way she can actually be that clueless.

Author's Response: well, she is. it's kind of ridiculous.

ellie :) xx

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I'm now slightly worried I have the same name as Ads' mother. I mean, it's not looking very promising for me. But jsdhgrbbe Al and Addie are so cute. So so so so so cute.

Author's Response: Do not be worried! Just cuz you share a name doesn't mean anything. And yes, Albie is so cute :3 thanks for reading!

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oh my god the innuendos almost killed me! I literally choked in laughter!

Author's Response: I love a good innuendo :D they make everything more funny! Thank you for reading!

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Yay for Scorpius's POV!!! But Rose is a bitch. A lovable one, but still...

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She should go for James. He notices her eyes... *looks dreamily into the distance*. But seriously, James.

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fastdfewtdfsgte They almost kissed! YEs!!! WOOHOO!!! I must celebrate with a butterbeer! YES!!|

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That is one of the creepiest effing things I have ever read. Brilliant, but goddamn traumatising!

Author's Response: Hehe, sorry about traumatising you! Honestly wasn't my intention. Just thought I'd try my hand at horror, ahha :)

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adjklghomqftury OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD NO! I didn't think she'd actually die... I may have to wait a few years before being coherent enough to write a proper review...

Author's Response: Sorry my dear! It was the only way it could actually end for me, I'm afraid. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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I LOVE ALEY! (spur of the moment ship name) They are perfect! And this story is fantastic. Mystery, tension, love, sexiness and MU-U-U-URDER, all in one!! :D :D Yes, like I said, perfection if I believed in such things. :D

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She should make Hugo wear bright colours for the rest of the year. And maybe go gay for a bit so Anna dumps him! :D

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