Ok I like this paragraph format much better. It's more open and feels like your reading a book not an essay. And I do not believe I saw any typos. And finally they talked yay!!! Great story. I love it. Update soon. :) Report Review
Ok I really like the story so far, but try to open up the paragraphs. They are very boxy. And some simple typos are in there as well. But great story. Really love it. Report Review
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