That was beautiful and such a great take on Remus as a young boy. When he thought he was going to be put in a cage I teared up. Remus has allways been my favorite marauder. The last part about the sunset was very well written and beautiful. You are an excellent author and I can not wait to read more. Report Review
This story is amazing! I love your writing!Author's Response: Thanks! It means a lot to have the opportunity to hear what readers think of my writing. I apologize for such a long stretch of time between updates - I'm almost done the next chapter. Thank you for your feedback! It's greatly appreciated! Report Review
I love her personality and the premises of the story. Report Review
That was very good! I loved James's insecurity and Teddy's big brother attitude. Report Review
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