I can't believe the baby's here!!!

I think this chapter might have been a little rushed and the first part could have been in the last chapter so this chapter just focused on the 3 months later and her giving birth. But that's just me.

I'm glad James got there considering it is his baby, but what about Alexia's parents, Surely they would have been there? and how did Rose get James so fast?

Just out of interest how do you pronounce her name, is it Ca-dance or Can-deece?

I really like this chapter, but I think a few things need to be thought through a bit more.

-Potterfan310
Soph :)

Author's Response: Yea, it could've been thought out a little better. Lexi's parents were there. It was them and Rose. Lexi sent Rose to get James. And Rose is Rose. She's pretty kick ass at doing things quickly
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I honestly don't know why it's taken me so long to read and review this, anywho I am back once again!

"Yes. I did. Just be lucky it wasn’t your face." - And this is just one of the reasons I love Chase/you!

I'm really curious about Chase's pen pal. I mean what if she starts spilling secrets or asking for advice on what to do about Louis (without mentioning his name) and it turns out to be Louis :)

OMG, WHAT!!! MACEY ACKERLY, IT WAS MACEY ACKERLY WHO DANNY SLEPT WITH. I can't process the information right now. Like what???

"Wonderboy and Macey Ackerly doing the horizontal hula." - Every time I read this story I always end with tears from laughing so much. Chase is seriously awesome sauce as are you! :D

ASDFGHJKL! THEY KISSSED, YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW EXCITED I AM RIGHT NOW! Chouis feels ♥ ♥

11/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x :)

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Yay an update :)

I love how Dom's insisting on the baby being called Dom
YAY, Al and Lexi kissed!

I really hope Al and Lexi get together, they're perfect for each other.

CC - Add a few more descriptions and try to extend their kiss, were his lips soft or hard, was the kiss light or did it deepen the longer it went on?

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph :)

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First review on the final chappie

OHMYGOD!!! The feels, aww baby Ryan sounds just bloomin' gorgeous not to mention adorable.

James is such a perfect dad ♥ and Reese is a great mummy ♥.

Eight pounds, bless Reese. Glad it was her not me lol. Although I do know people who've had nine pound babies as well as eleven pound babies. Ouch.

Haha Lily being blunt, I don't suppose that's what you want to hear after giving birth but good on Reese for not taking it to heart.

Aww he was born on the third. Snap, me too. Yay another person born on the third!!!

The last part, where Reese is reminiscing all I could think of was the song 'Everything Has Changed' by Taylor Swift and Ed Sheeran ♥. It might have something to do with the fact I've been listening to it non-stop or the fact the words kind to fit what Reese is saying as well as her relationship with James and the mother/child bond with Ryan ♥ ♥ ♥

I cried, awww. I am emotionally unstable right now, I mean it's over. The end, finite, finished. ASDFGHJJKL FEELS!! No more Jarissa :'(

Ryan, James, Reese, Rose, Louis, Lionel... My list could go on I AM GOING TO MISS THEM AND THIS STORY SO, SO MUCH!

You are welcome! I LOVE this story so much and I am so glad you never gave up on it. THANK YOU for writing it!

100/100

-Potterfan310
Soph x ♥♥

P.s Sequel?? or maybe a one-shot with them sending Ryan off to Hogwarts or even Rose and Scorpius' wedding??

Author's Response: Yes you are the first reviewer on the final chapter! I'm glad! :D

All babies are gorgeous, but Ryan is adorable! :'D

hahaha yeah, eight pounds is pretty big! But in his defence, Reese ate a lot while pregnant and he was a late baby! :p

One of my friend's sister had a ten pound baby! She's absolutely tiny (like ~150cm and the build of a 12 year old) and she popped out this monstrous child! :p But her son is absolutely gorgeous! :'D

Lily is always going to be blunt. It's one of the many things I love about her! :p

haha he was always going to be on Al's birthday but originally I had his birthday on the second but somehow I accidentally wrote the third so... :p

I really like that song. Ed Sheeran's voice is just dfjojdcefdjk ♥

I can see the link though! But I wrote this chapter before I'd heard the song so it's just a coincidence. :p

Aw, no don't cry! *hands you a tissue*

I'm going to miss them as well, but it is a bit of a relief that I finally finished my first novel!

Also, about the sequel: the simple answer is no.

HOWEVER, I am THINKING of writing a spin off. I'm going to use certain characters which will not be divulged and Ryan, Reese and James will feature in it, but they probably won't play a main role. Although, I am pretty pressed for time (yay for school -.-) so it probably won't be written for a while.

But I've been thinking about it and I can say almost certainly there will be SOMETHING. Just not too sure what! :p

Anyway, thank you so so so so much for all your amazing reviews! They always put a smile on my face!

- Kayla. ♥

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Aww Horatio and Molly ♥ ♥ I love how he's concerned about her splinching.

I really like Molly, she's a pretty awesome person!! I love that she's knitting the baby a blanket, so like her grandmother!! :)

Haha Horatio and Louis, they may have a bromance but I doubt it goes any further than that. Lol.

Can't wait to see more Louis and Freya action. And maybe some Molly/Horatio *hint hint* :)

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x

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Oh god Chase, she never fails to make me
laugh :) "I got really mad at Louis and tried to fornicate with Danny!"

I dunno why, but something popped into my head, was it Posey who was Danny's first. Is that why he's all secretive because she's such a witch.

Aww poor Rosie. Bless her little cotton socks. I feel so bad for her and just want to give her hugs. *Squishes her tightly*

Borden Cattermole what a name. Any relation to Mary and Reg from Deathly Hallows??

Holy crap, back up a minute. Trelawney's doing yoga. I nearly spat out my drink.

James so LOVES Maylin, he's cute when he's protective. Clearly he is madly in love with her which is so why he doesn't want his cousin dating her.

Well there goes my drink, oh my god. Out of all of them Al's is my favourite. I have tears from laughing, "Across from me is Professor Trelawney, who gives me the secret yoga lessons that are the reason I almost have a six pack."

Whoop Jamesie poo finally admitted his feelings!!! Hurray :)

This chapter is bloody brillaint, I really like the whole idea of the character building week and the stone idea. It's so original!!

Jaylin (James/Maylin) and Chois (Chase/Louis) really need to happen!! ♥ ♥

11/10

-Potterfan310
Soph x :D

Author's Response: I'm really happy that Chase is such a popular character with everyone who reads it :D

Posey, hmm, interesting idea ;)

When I write, I always feel bad making things sad for Rose. But it's important to the story, and at least she has awesome people around to help make her feel better!

For some reason Borden just seemed like a good name to me for a kinsmen of Reg and Mary from DH ;)

I love Yoga Trelawney with all my heart :D

Maybe you should stop drinking beverages when reading stories as absurd as this one?? Haha Albus + Trelawney + Yoga = My personal dream, lol.

Your reviews are always helpful, thank you so much! Keep reading and reviewing! x

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Bless Reese, I've heard being over-due is sooo not fun.

I love how Reese is acting: wanting to argue, the irony, the small jokes.

"I was eight days late. Funny, about seven or eight months ago I was saying that as well." - I LOVE this line simply because of the irony of it all. But part of me is glad Reese was eight days later otherwise there'd be no baby Potter on the way and certainly no amazing story!!

Albus, Albus, Albus. I bloody love him, walking in with his eyes shut. :D

OHMYGOD YAY!!! CONGRATS REESE AND JAMES! A boy, I thought a girl but then because of the whole stubborn ness thing at the start of the chapter I was getting an inkling. I can't believe Ryan Jordan Potter is here! ♥ ♥

I am so emotional right now, asdfghjkl. Feels for James and Reese and baby Ryan. Feels because it's the second to last chapter and just general feels. ♥ ♥

I am so gonna cry at the next chapter, I know it. Is it an epilogue or like a few days later?. Or am I just gonne have to wait and see? :)

Can not wait for the last one, tissues will be at the ready!!!

12/10

-Potterfan310
Soph xx :D

Author's Response: hahaha, I wouldn't know but I do know of people who were overdue and none of them ever liked it. :p

I was also an overdue baby, so that may or may not have been a factor haha. :p

I really liked that line as well. It's a bit of a giggle. :p

I love Albus, he's one of my favourite characters to write! :'D

hahaha, yes, he's a little boy! :'D And he's finally here!

Aw, don't be too sad! It's (hopefully) a good ending! ♥

You'll have to wait and see! ;) It won't be too long though, never fear!

Thanks for the lovely review, you're far too kind! ♥

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I've been wondering when this was going to be updated and I'm so glad it has. The wait was certainly worth it!!!

I LOVE your Marauder's descriptions, they're perfect and there's a really good picture of them been painted in my head. I actualy LOVE them all, even Peter. I mean they are spot on!!!

Haha, poor Remus. Although it sounds like something my friends (but minus the fancying part, we're such anti-social people boys are like another species to us. It'd probably be for some stupid reason) would get me to do, since I guess I'm sort of like Remus in a way.

Oooh I like that Amelia knows Petunia and that Vernon is her boss' son. I like the way you've incorperated them into Amelia's daily life. I'm curious about her being a witch if Lexi was a muggle, but I'm guessing like Lily she's a muggle born? If not, I'm curious about her knowledge about the wizarding world.

Hedgehog-boy and Dog girl-boy and Napkin boy, I love it!!! Amelia definitely has a good way with nicknaming people.

Oh no, Poor Lexi. Poor Sirius. I'm really intrigued about what happend to her and whether she really is dead or whether she's in hiding somewhere.

Can't wair for the next chapter!

11/10

-Potterfan310
Soph x ♥

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Ooo it's heating up!!

I Love Lily, she's such strong willed and wants things done there and then. I also think it's cute that she's the one protecting her older brother.

Oh god, so awkward. If I was Lily I would be cringing so bad. Totally awkward.

Even though Lily went nuts and then got embarrassed in front of the whole school I'm glad her and Phina bonded, I mean imagine if they were at each others throats. That would so not be good, although it would add a whole new dynamic to the story.

It's good that someone finally knows even if it isn't Al.

Fun fact, I was in placement and one of the little girls names is Seraphina and I just smiled to myself because all I could think of was Phina was this story :)

Can't wait for chapter 4!
10/10

-Potterfan310
Soph :D

P.s what year is Lily in?

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Oh my god, Fred!!! He's amazing, I love him and I think he's one of my favourites!!

"You’re a strong independent man who don’t need no woman!" - I am crying with laughter, there is no doubt that Fred is certainly like his namesake and father :D

YAY, Rose and Scorpius is slowly happening!

I love it!! Can't wait for the next one.

-Potterfan310
Soph :)

Author's Response: Haha, i never planned Fred to be this way, but oh well! To be honest, he's one of my favourites too! Even though he's one of the minor characters!

YAY for Rose and Scorpius, but i do have a lot planned out for them so watch out ;)

Thank you for reviewing Soph :)

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Haha I love that Louis chases after Lionel.

I will not cry, I will not cry...

Okay so I cried reading this, just aww. Losing someone close to you is so hard whether it be family or friend. I know how hard it is especially when it happens three times in the space of four years. It just doesn't sink it until you see or do something that you associated that person with and then it hits you hard.

I'm in agreement with Reece about the "'It’s going to get better.' People kept saying that but I felt like it never would." It does eventually get better but it takes a hell of long time for life to feel normal again.

Aww, Ryan Jordan Potter or Sasha Jordan Potter, they're both such nice names :D

I'm guessing the next chapter a certain baby Potter arrives but I could be wrong especially if it's like James and it wants to be stubborn and go over due.

This chapter just has so many feels ♥ ♥

12/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xx

Author's Response: hahaha Lionel is a cheeky lil muffin. :p

I've also lost three people in the space of four years (it's actually just over four and a half years) but it is hard.

Even though I've been through a lot of deaths, I always get the feeling that it won't get better. It always does, but those first few days/weeks are exceptionally hard and I wanted to reflect that. Especially with a friend, it is hard with a family member but with a family member you know you'll always remember them but with a friend you get scared you're going to forget them, that's part of the reason why I made the middle name Jordan. :)

Sorry for making you cry!

I'm glad you like the names! I quite like them as well! :D

hehehe maybe, maybe not. ;) I have just put it in the queue though, so we'll soon find out! :D

Thanks for the lovely review! ♥

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I dunno why but when Chase asks Danny about his V-card and then he changes the subject and he says "For having me talk to Professor Lupin." I dunno why but it lead to me think he and Teddy were getting cosy if you get what I mean, although I'm probably totally and utterly wrong since teacher/student is frowned upon here.

Haha, I love that Posey is actually innocent and now Scorpius has gone and told her what Rose feared she already knew.

Louis, I have mixed feelings about him right now :/

OMG, Chase I love her, I really do. Her angry warpath, Lol I don't suppose Danny minded being in it.

"But I'm already taking my pants off" - Brit picking, It'd be trousers not pants. Pants are like knickers/boxers.

Oh Chase you love Louis, get over it and then get under him ;)

Chase and Louis forever! Chouis ♥ ♥

10/10

-Potterfan310
Soph :D

Author's Response: Don't worry, there is no romantic relationship between Danny and Teddy, that was just a coincidence. Although I do admit that they would be a pretty epic couple :D

I wouldn't exactly call Posey "innocent", but it is ironic that Scorpius was the one to accidentally tell her, haha.

Lol, but isn't an angry warpath just SO Chase?? And I think you're quite right about Danny enjoying it xD

I really need to start checking my writing for American terms before updating! :/ thank you for always letting me know when I'm wrong!

LOL, "get over it and then get under him ;)"
That just made my day haha.
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Aww bless Louis, I think the realisation he's going to be a dad has just hit him.

I Louis, he's the sweetest :D Saving up his money to buy his daughter a present. Aww, the dress sounds adorable. I keep forgetting Louis' a Hufflepuff although I don't know why, I think it's really good gift as well and if she becomes a Hufflepuff when she goes to Hogwarts, I think it'll mean even more to Louis and his daughter.

Molly checking on Horatio and standing up to his brother. You go girl!!

Trust George to be the one to find the fact his elder brother is the first to be a grandfather. I love George, he's awesome sauce!!! I mean he's giving Louis a job when there isn't even one going. I love him, and like he said family stick together!!

I'm intrigued about Nikolas, and why he's afraid of Kieron. Should be interesting!

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x :D

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Aww poor Freddie, but I'm glad Roxy was there for him.

Annie is just so sweet but I can't help but feel bad for her because I think deep down Freddie is totally, madly in love with Ryan. And it'll break her heart if they break up.

"Though a good snog every once in a while doesn’t hurt."
I looked over and half her body was covered by my own pillow. "You know I’m not going anywhere, right?" - I dunno whether it was on purpose or it's just me but I swear Freddie is practically inviting Ryan to snog him since he's not going anywhere and for a minute I really though she was going to. Fryan feels ♥

Yay :D I can't believe Ryan got off her high horse, I'm so glad she's letting Freddie become more a part of the pregnancy and letting him go to an appointment.

Doctor Who reference :D Yay Freddie!!!

She's been cheating on him with Andrew hasn't she?? It's that stupid Parise isn't it? and I felt sorry for her, not so much now. Damn you Annie how can she just discard sweet, adorable, insane Freddie like that for that evil idiot.

But on the plus side that means Freddie can finally follow his heart to Ryan! yay! :D

Fryan needs to happen! ♥ ♥ and if it does at the doctor's appointment then even better :)

12/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x :)

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YAY!

I am so, so happy right now!!! Awww, this chapter is so adorable!!!

I love Leya ♥ ♥ and I'm so glad that Freya finally saw sense. I hope that Dom and Victoire will take care of her for Louis whilst he's still at school, and at least she'll have female company.

This chapter has made me so happy!! Can't wait for the next one!!

11/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xx

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I like the part about Billy Finnigan, so like his father. I love it when there's little things like that, especially as it seems to make background characters seem more real.

I like that Louis and James are the same age as well as best friends, because it's never normally done. :)

I have a sneaking suspicion that James really does have feelings for Maylin but he's trying to act all macho and deny them.

I KNEW IT! I thought that he was Victoire's baby daddy. Poor Teddy :(

Oh Chase, nice club name :) "Welcome to the My-Best-Friend-Impregnated-the-Girl-of-My-Dreams Club" - Love it!!!

Can't wait for the next one!!
10/10

-Potterfan310
Soph x

Author's Response: Thanks :D the little things in the background are my favorite parts of writing.

I know, Teddy's got it rough :(

Thanks for another great review! Keep reading and reviewing! x

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Haha drunk texts are the best!! It's probably a bad thing that I can read them without any trouble even if they make no sense.

I Love Reese, and for her choosing the second option, to be honest I would have as well. Much more fun :D

"He took his pants off and showed me the scratches" - I laughed so hard at this for no real reason, but I think you mean trousers rather than pants.

"Do I just throw it to you like a Quaffle? What the hell is 'catching' a baby?" - Oh god, funny thing is I could imagine them doing this though :)

Aww bless Reese for freaking out so much. Although if I was her I would probably be freaking out even more.

Awww, I got a fuzzy feeling inside when they Weasley women threw Reese a baby shower. That is so sweet!!

I love the whole Fred was meant to be a girl and Fleur thinking Dom was gonna be a boy. It just makes me laugh especially after the day I've had because we were on about it with our one tutor.

I'm with Reese baby clothes are too cute, I mean it's mad to think that something so small will into them.

Reece...Awww :'( juts aww, I could never imagine losing any one of my lot. Aww. ♥ Hugs to Reese.

10/10
-Potterfan310

P.s I can't believe it's nearly coming to an end :(

Author's Response: haha I personally haven't received any but I've seen drunk tweets and I just kind of popped my phone out and tried to text as if I was drunk. :p

Being mean is so fun. :p And James is a big boy, he can handle that!

Oh do trousers and pants actually mean something different in England? I thought they just meant the same thing, so I just left it. I'll change it soon! Thanks for pointing that out!

haha nooo! I doubt that they would throw their baby at each other! :p They're silly, but not THAT silly! I looked up a birth form on the net and that came up and I was SO confused. So I thought Reese and James would be too. :p

ahaha Reese is a bit of a loon, she's always going to be freaking out. She's a drama queen. ;)

The Weasley women are sweet, aren't they? I love writing them! :D

I actually read something online where people prepared to have a girl (because that was what they were told) and then the baby popping out as a boy. I thought it was so funny so I wanted to put that in there. And of course it would be Fred. :p

Whenever I see baby clothes I get so excited and squeal because they are always SO CUTE. I DON'T UNDERSTAND HOW CUTE THEY ARE. :'D

It's one of the hardest thing anyone ever goes through, losing a friend. I wanted to put that out there because a lot of people don't realise HOW hard it is, and how much your life changes because of it.

I know, it's so close! I don't know what I'm going to do after I finish it! The only thing that's ever on my mind is this fic! I don't know what I'm going to think about?!

Thank you for another amazing review! ♥

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I think it's quite sweet that Al has gone out of his way to track down Phina and sort of kidnap her just to tell her they need to talk.

"it isn't as if he's the one carrying a child that he's going to be pushing out of his . . . manly bits." - I love this, gotta love Phina :)

I love Lysander, he's definitely his mother's son. What's not to love.

I LOVE that Lily finds out, I mean slightly awkward because your baby's auntie finds out before their father but still I think it's great.

"It's like a ripping off a band-aid. Except, this time, the pain lasts for nine months instead of a few seconds." - This is another of my favourite lines, I mean it's true but funny at the same time. Although you might want to change Band-Aid to plaster as that's what they're called in the UK.

I love Phina and I love Lily, I can't wait for her reaction in thee next chapter!

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x :)

Author's Response: I love writing Seraphina, out of all of the stories that I'm writing so far, she's my favourite one to write because she's just so darn sarcastic and cynical.

The Scamander twins are mentioned very little in fanfiction and instead of creating new characters, I just figured that I might as well use the ones that are already there.

I never actually planned for Lily to find out before Albus but it ended up just happening that way in the end. I have to say, I enjoyed writing that scene.

Thank you for pointing out the band-aid thing! I often miss things like that and I always hope that someone will come across anything like that and point it out to me so that I can fix it. Sometimes, I just don't notice things. I'll get to fixing that as soon as possible if I don't forget.

Thanks for reviewing (again), I really appreciate it!

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This is really, really good!!
It's also really original, I've never read a story like this before so go you!! :D

I think your characterisation of James is really nice and the fact he was married and is now a dad. It'll be interesting how him and Kay's relationship with each other will play out, especially if they become more than brother and sister in laws.

I really like your OC's Kay and her best friend Aura (Awesome name by the way!!). I love that she's bubbly and happy and I like that her and her sister were never that close because of the magic thing and before the magic thing (I mean look at Petunia and Lily, they were close before Lily found out she was a witch)

When James was on the phone to Kay and he was shouting all I could of was Ron when he rang Harry at the Dursleys, I dunno if it was intentional or not but aww, I love it when there are little things like that, that relate to the books :D

Michaela is adorable, aww. Babies are so cute, especially if James Sirius is their daddy!

This is a really good start and I really, really like it so far, I also thought it was a nice touch that the Weasley's were there to support James.

I can't wait for the next chapter. Definitely adding this to my favourites!!

12/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x :D

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Ohmygod, yay an update!!!

James is just the cutest when he sleeps, aww. I love that he tries to hide under her bed, "Why is there a foot sticking out from under your bed?" Haha, love it.

Aww, James and Vi at the scan = asdfghjkl perfectness. ♥ ♥
seriously they need to date not pretend date. I will be over moon if they date but they have to become a couple!!

Cannot wait for the next chapter!!!

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xxx

Author's Response: Haha thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I'll try and get the next chapter out soon! :) xx

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"some cool peeps I could hang out with, yo. I should be a gangster. It works really well, yo." - This just had me giggling so much, but I'm not 100% sure why, although it may have something to do with my friend saying something like this when we were on the phone the other day :)

I absolutely love right now, it's so nice to see him in a different light and he and Nicole seem really good together.

Drunk James - I just want to pick him up and squish him, he truly makes an awesome drunk (if that's possible?)

Oh god, Scorp being British = best thing :D "It's just bollocks that you can't drink tonigh', innit" -No one can say bollocks quite like the British :)

OHMYGOD!!! SAY WHAT!!! Are you kidding me, Al is in love with Reese!
I'm not fond those Weasley boys right now, nothing can ever happen to Jarissa ♥ I genuinely though he was being serious and I kept whispering 'no'

Good on Reese for whacking them both around the head.

Awww, the ending aww. So sweet!! I love them so much, Jarissa ♥ ♥

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xxx

Author's Response: ahahaha I must be psychic! :p I just wanted to add it in because I'm a bit weird. :p

I'm guessing you meant Fred because of the Nicole thing, you've just forgotten his name. :p Yeah, they are sweet together. I really like writing them! :D

haha I just imagine Drunk!James to be the 'I love you' type. I always have haha. :p

That was my most favourite part. I think I'm going to write another scene where Scorpius is drunk just so I can write him again. It was SO fun to write! :p

hahaha there are so many fanfictions on the James/OC/Al love triangle so I thought I'd do a mini parody. I've never really liked those types of stories (mostly because I hate all love triangles :p) so I thought I'd pop that in there for a giggle. :p

I'm so glad you liked it!

Thanks for another amazing review! You're always so kind! ♥

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Aww Emma, awww. :'( Poor thing, I just want to give her a massive hug. *Hugs*

I like that Scorp went into big brother panic mode, "then I convinced him you weren’t dead" - Hehe, I don't know why but it made me giggle.

I really like that Emma spent time with Al, (there really isn't enough him) but I wished she told him how she felt.

James and Alice = yay!! I love these two.

WHAT! How can you leave me hanging like this. EMERALD!!! IS SHE OK, I HATE DRACO RIGHT NOW SO MUCH!

I have to know whether Emma's ok, I really do!!!Seriously cannot wait for the next chappie.

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! ^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter because I wasn't so sure (I never am -_-) but I like writing dramatic chapters :) It makes me really happy to see how you respond to different characters, it really helps me out, so thank you very much! :) xx

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I really like that there's information on her parents and that we've learnt more about them.

An American term caught my eye -
'sneakers and tied' - Trainers

I think her parents reactions were spot on although I really dislike her mother. Her father seemed a little too calm but he might not want to show his disappointment in front of her. I like her dad, he seems like he'll support Ava and stand by her, which I'm glad.

It'll be interesting to see if see tells James when she gets back, I can't wait for his reaction!!

10/10

-Potterfan310
Soph xx

Author's Response: I thought it was time for some background information on Ava, seeing as she's the main character.

Ugh, it really annoys me when I use American terms because I am actually British, but for some reason I call them sneakers(?) I mean those converse-type shoes, but I don't know if I can say "Converse" in case of copyright or something?

Yeah, I was aiming to get people to dislike Eloise :P Her dad is one of those calm, kind people, quite like Remus Lupin, actually, but he wouldn't go off on one in front of Ava like her mother did because he does genuinely love his daughter and she's actually quite a typical daddy's girl.

Ooh, you'll have to wait and see about James! I've not quite got to that bit in the next chapter yet and I'm still trying to formulate if she tells him or not.

OMIGOSH A TEN! Thank you so much! Hopefully it won't take as long to update for the next chapter

Summer x

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The truth is revealed, Nell and Louis!!! Yay :)

Ohmygod, ok if Scorp isn't gay and he's waiting for the right girl, please, please say he likes Rosie!!! They both like each other but neither will say, I hope Scorp goes to Coral for advice!

Haha, loving Rose's reaction to Coral's confession.

James and Fred doing yoga, now that's a very nice mental image ;)

Apart from my 'Albus doing drugs theory' I'm now thinking he might have gotten caught up in something with Abacus and he was trying to act 'hard' in front of him by being mean to James.

My favourite line - "You don’t choose the thug life.The thug life chooses you."

James and Fred are by far my favourites as well as Coral and Kenny.

Love it, can't wait for the next chapter!!! :)

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-Potterfan310
Soph xx :)

Author's Response: Hello Soph! :)

Haha Rose and Scorpius! I have so much planned out for them! :D

James and Fred doing yoga is indeed quite a nice image ;)

Hmm your Albus theory is pretty interesting too! Different and interesting! I wonder what it is... ;)

That was my favourite line too :D The next chapter may take a while but do keep reading :)

Thanks for reviewing! :)



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Oh god, I LOVE Scarlett, she's bloody brilliant. And she reminds me of myself (Minus the pregnant with James Potter's baby part).

I like that James says congrats as though it's no big deal.

"I see now, that thickness runs in the family." - Oh my god, that line, talk about making me giggle. By the seems of things it definitely does. I think it's kinda sweet they both say congrats and it makes them seem like they have an invisible bond/in the way they think.

It will be interesting to see James' actual reaction when he finally realises/the news sinks in.

Oh and yay for the formatting thing!! It's been happening to me as well but I think I've fixed it as well so yay!!

Can't wait for the next one!!!

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xx :)

P.s I've never done the pregnant thing but if you need help I do know a lot about it. Find me on the forums (potterfan310) or my blog, (links in my author's page).

Author's Response: thank you :)
and yeah, help with the pregnancy thing would be good. Christian schools like mine dont give us real information hahaha
but thanks :)

- RP

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