THANK MERLIN THAT LITTLE TWIT IS GONE!
But ittle Ronnikins had better keep his hands off George's girl :|
Very clever plan :D Really great chapter!!
10.10Author's Response: Thank you so much! Ah I know it's great to have Lavender out of the picture she was so annoying! Well whether Ron plans on doing that or not we shall see, won't we? Thanks a million for yet another amazing review I really appreciate it! Jenna :) Report Review
That snow fight > Everything.
I couldn't stop smiling! Until Ron, the King jerk face stepped in. Bah humbug, to Ronald :P
10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much! I loved the snow scene and I had an impossible amount of fun writing it! Ron is sweet really, somewhere deep, deep down and you will see it sure enough I'm sure! But for now I cannot agree more he is such an idiot! As my friends would say I hope he rots in a deep dark hole! But then I have no idea what i would do with my story so I guess he can't rot...yet...lol! Thanks again I love your reviews! Jenna :) Report Review
That little twit! I'm ashamed to admit that I have the same last name as that..that..Bimbo, Lavender Brown (Brown-Omand Family Represent!)
Fred's plan :') Genius.
Really, really, REALLY enjoyed this chapter!
Can't wait to read more!
Peace out, home dogs.Author's Response: Oh God Sydney for a second I thought you might use a lot worse language than that! Thank you so much for the lovely review! Aw Sydney don't be ashamed you made something awful completely awesome! That's a good thing, don't worry. Fred is a genius and he's funny and completely gorgeous, impossibly handsome with deep brown eyes, fiery red hair and.I'M BACK! Sorry about that it's just a small and slightly unhealthy obsession with a fictional character...I'm getting therapy don't worry! lol! Thanks a million for the brilliant review you are far too kind! Jenna :)
ps.Home dog? Really? :P Report Review
That's so cute! I really liked this chapter, and I'm interested in reading about Astoria!
Keep up the good work!
10/10 :)Author's Response: thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Report Review
Wow! This is really good!
I wonder what the small package is..?
I think it might be a jewellery box? ;)
Or maybe I'm totally off, and it's some kind of dark object..
10/10 Please post more :D Report Review
I wonder how Hermione will react...
Really, really, REEEAAALY good :)
10/10Author's Response: thank you so much :) check back soon to find out! Report Review
darn you Dumbledore! Really great, can't wait until chapter twelve!
1o0/10Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review! :) It's so wonderful to see you're continuing to read. Chapter 12 will be posted rather promptly tomorrow, and I hope you'll return for it! ♥ Report Review
I was reading Hey there Delilah while I read this chapter! It was really good :)
10/10 madam!Author's Response: SydneyBlack,
Ah, what a sweet song, indeed. The inspiration for 'Delilah' in my story came from an ancestor. It was my Great-Grandmother's middle name.
I really enjoyed writing "If my eyes are sad." It seemed deep and a bit poetic for him to admit to her.
Thank you so much for your generous 10! :D
Dark Whisper Report Review
I'm glad you had Fred stay alive...
ANYWAY, here comes the feels..
MERLIN HELP ME. THAT WAS AMAZING. UGH, MERLIN, WHY IS IT OVER?!
10/10 I really, really, really enjoyed reading your fanfiction. I'm quite surprised that this is your first Fan-fic, as it was REALLY good! I can't wait for your next fanfiction! :)Author's Response: Thanks a million Sydney! I know I couldn't bring myself to kill Fred I just didn't have the heart to do it! I don't know how J.K lives with herself! I know, I know I'm sad to see it end too but all things must come to an end! And anyway there will be a sequel so it's not really over! Thanks so much I'm really flattered that you thought so! Thanks a million for all the amazing reviews and I hope to hear from you again in the future! Until next time! Jenna :)
ps. Can't wait to read more of your story! Report Review
WHAT THE HECK.
WHAT. JUST. HAPPENED?
I WAS HOPING FOR A HAPPY ENDING! COME ONE MAN!
UGHH.. EXCUSE ME WHILE I GO cRY MY EYES OUT! Report Review
I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT!!
Right when I read that I was like "Cue Ron's tantrum".
OH. MY. GOD.
DRACO'S A DADDY! AND RON'S GONNA FREAK OUT!
10/10 for you, madame!Author's Response: Haha I love the enthusiasm(: thanks for the review ! Report Review
Why Ronald, why? :(
10/10 :DAuthor's Response: Thanks Sydney! Last chapter is on its way! Thanks so much for all the amazing reviews! Jenna :) Report Review
10/10 :) Report Review
YAY!! OH YEAH! 10/10 Ma'am. (Or Sir.)Author's Response: ahaha thanks! :'D it's madam. :3 Report Review
:C Don't go Hermione..
YAY! New chapter (Or maybe I'm just late in seeing it)!!
Really, really great!
10/10Author's Response: Thanks a million Sydney! I know :'( How depressing, right? I'm so glad you enjoyed it and don't worry you're never late as long as you get round to reading and reviewing at some point. Thanks so much as always Sydney for all the lovely reviews! Jenna :) Report Review
I miss the conversations between Beth and Severus :C
But it's still really interesting to read about the time before James and Lily..'kicked the bucket'.
10/10 :)Author's Response: I REALLY miss writing good Beth/Severus interactions in this story -- call it a weak theory, but this book's taking me slightly longer than the other two to write, pace-wise, and I think that's why. :D I actually only have ten more chapters to write, though! Time flies...
This isn't a solely Beth/Severus story, as you've obviously recognized, and I'm so glad you like the James/Lily aspect of it, too. ♥ I wanted to encompass the whole First Wizarding War panorama, as it were, and not just telescope into a ship of my own devising.
ANYWAY. Now you know a bit more than you might have bargained for. Thank you again for taking the time to review! ♥ Report Review
No, no, no, no, no, no, no!
NO! You did it for BETHY! NOT LILY! :C
10/10Author's Response: No fear! ♥ Severus has to think Lily's a factor, now that Beth is hazy, or he wouldn't be a double agent for the Order at all, would he? There is light at the end of the tunnel yet!
Thank you for taking the time to leave a review on this chapter! And I truly do mean that. :) I'm looking forward to hearing more from you, too! Report Review
D': Gaah..the tears...
Maaann...I just..I can't even.. I HAVE NO WORDS!
10/10 :'DAuthor's Response: Oh no Sydney! I'm so so sorry! Please don't cry! My writing can't be that bad, can it? I'm only joking! Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it so much! Thanks a million for all the lovely reviews and support! Jenna :) Report Review
:| I can't decide which pairing I like better! Beth/Severus or Beth/Sirius D:
My life is so conflicted!
10/10Author's Response: It's okay to be conflicted! Conflict was intentionally introduced in this book where those pairings are concerned, and you definitely aren't the only person who couldn't choose. :D Things will work themselves out in the end, I promise!
I'm excited you seem to be enjoying the story thus far, anyway! ♥ Thank you so much for taking the time to review!! Report Review
I'm going to make a prediction!!
I think that Sirius has a crush on Beth :)
So, I've just found this story today, and find it really good! So I'm, going to hurry up and read the rest :D
10/10Author's Response: Ah, that is an interesting prediction... And you'll see whether or not it's true eventually, although perhaps later rather than sooner. ;) But I don't want to give too much away!
I'm so happy you're enjoying the story so far! ♥ Thank you so much for taking the time to review, too. I'm really looking forward to hearing your opinion on the rest!! Report Review
SO MUCH DRAMIONE!!
I'm dying :)
So good :D
PLLLEEAAASSSEEE WRITE MOORE!!
10/10Author's Response: SydneyBlack,
Thank you for the great review. I'm so glad you like this chapter!! I'll be posting again soon!
Meg Report Review
Aw man. Aw man. Aw man. aw man. Aw man.
I LOVE THIS STORY!
PLEASE UPDATE! Report Review
We were so close! So close to a kiss!!
Great chapter :)
Happy Valentines day :DAuthor's Response: Haha thanks a million Sydney! Yes so close but so far I'm afraid! Happy Valentines day! Jenna :) Report Review
I just died a little..
Darn you! One of my favourite pairs and no happy ending!
10/10 :) Report Review
I just finished reading all 15 chapters posted! You are going on my favourite author list!!
PLEASEEE POOSSSTTT MOREE!
100 000/100 000Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter is written but waiting for another story to be edited before I can post it. Should be within a couple days :) Report Review
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