you're amazing, this is amazing, the ending was amazing and i've really enjoyed sitting behind my computer screen reading this! i'm pretty sure i've increased my vocabulary by at least one word (MEGA!). anyway, i sort of love how you ended it will albus and flora not really together (though i'm still finger-crossing (it's secretly a verb) for future floral children) and scarred flora (because fanfic people are usually too damn perfect) and undead lightning-powered scorpius is the best thing since trolley ladies on magical trains. thank you for writing this!Author's Response: You are also amazing for leaving such a lovely review! And I'm glad I've slipped 'mega' into so many people's vocabularies ;D
When you say 'future floral children'...I imagining some sort of cross between a child and an upholstered armchair. Please don't ask. It's been a long day's revising and I'm going a bit mad here.
Thank you so much for reviewing! ♥ Report Review
all of this was amazing! argh, they are so cute. anyway, you did a brilliant job and so thank you for writing this!Author's Response: And thank you for your lovely review! ♥ this really was my favourite story that I've written, probably because I've put so much of myself in it, so thank you for your lovely review :) Report Review
brilliant. utterly brilliant. LILY AND SCORPIUS ARE SUCH... ugh. unnameably awful.
I love this so much, Rosie and Teddy and everyone are so perfect and the structure (I know, kind of random) is awesome.
don't stop writing :DAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! :D It's always super-fantastic to hear when readers enjoy the ending of this story and its overall structure. It was a lot of fun to write and it means a lot that you think that it's brilliant! Report Review
Albus! You adorable thing! I love you! Don't run screaming! James is a prat! So is AnnoyingRosie! I love Scorpius too! And Faith, and Kitty and TEDDY and Harry, and just about everybody excluding those named above.
Sorry, I just REALLY needed to get that out. I loved every chapter of this, like wowza.
eck. i'm so eloquent.
anyway, this was just to say how much I enjoyed reading this and to tell you to never stop writing.. ever. Report Review
this has made me laugh so much. I love June and Albus is seriously adorable (he really needs to learn how to treat his crushes - if that makes sense)
I loved how you made fun of all the cliches that I swear are way more present in next gen fanfiction than any other time.
p.s. this is probably really creepy because i'm stalking your stories, it's just cause they're so great! Report Review
haha. this is amazing! though I was holding out for them all to shout somewhat crazily at James, I understand (slightly sadly) that this way was much more productive. anyway, I loved Josie and Daphne the most, but they were all wonderful and I love how they each had so many different reasons to do this.
I loved it. Report Review
I'm a little lost cos I've forgotten some previous information, but it's still as funny as ever - James is a terrible apoligiser (is that a word?), but I guess it makes it adorable and therefore a good apology? Albus/Ray - God, Ray is so oblivious! love it though
ugh Fred is so damn sdkjf762trsd2fs8 (I don't know what I'm saying either) - but I must say I doubt his future as a gangster. Poor Roxanne... and boyfriend, I guess... (pfft. totally his fault)
can't wait for the next update Report Review
yes, that was my brain imploding. I HOLD YOU ACCOUNTABLE! that was a brilliant plot point, I completely didn't expect that :D (but I never do, I'm pretty slow...)
I love Spencer, because I'm also terribly inexperienced and feel the same way a lot of the time... but she is hilarious!
Anyway, update soon - I can't wait!Author's Response: DON'T LET YOUR BRAIN IMPLODE AHHH And you're not slow, no one picked up on that (at least if they did, they didn't tell me). Thank you so much for reading and reviewing; I'm so glad that you enjoyed it and the next chapter is up :D Report Review
Let me just get it out that I think you are bloody brilliant! Seriously, I'm loving Every. Single. Word.
Anyway, I thought I would put in my favourite quotes :D
"You see, my cat, Chester, is cooler than your cat. He is cuter than your cat. He is more badass than your cat. And to top it off, you wish that you could trade your piece of shit cat for the glorious being that is my cat."
"I bet you one million pounds that if I could read his thoughts every time I entered the room, it would go something along the lines of: "Oh God, it's her."
Good thing he's fat as fuck and can't outrun me."
You made me laugh SO FREAKING MUCH!
Everything is just so cute and sweet at the same time that it's hilarious.
So, I adore Spencer and James (aww), Robyn, her mother (who is bloody ballistic) and maybe even Freddy? I can't believe he wrote that on her forehead - and that she went out in public with it still there: sigh, some people have no shame. But I think she's awesome so it's okay. I'm excited that James is back! Wooh! Go Spencer/James -the best couple evverr (insert irritating voice)! Exclamation mark!
I can't wait for an update :D
P.S. I'm glad that (at least for now) it's all about the actual 'romance' and not about conflicting feelings over muggle/magical dude pairing. Gasp! Shock horror!Author's Response: Aw, thank you, that's so sweet of you to say! I'm happy to see that the story makes you laugh and that you're enjoying it!
Yeah, for right now the story is just gonna focus on James and Spencer as a couple but eventually it's gonna have to go into the obstaces they'll face because of the fact that he's a wizard and she's a muggle. But I don't think that'll happen for a while.
Thanks for reading and for the review! Chapter 8 is in the queue! :D Report Review
I keep on hoping that if I keep refreshing the page chapter 21 will magically materialize.
It's not working :(
anyway, Imma inna lovin' mooda for this now. and I don't know if that made sense, but I meant I LOVE THIS SO FAR!
she makes me laugh so much (I adore this OC) and Al makes me drool and Burly and Blue eyes are such dumbarses and I love Emma and Rose and Scorpius! and, even though it is so dramatic, her situation with her family actually makes kinda sense - I mean, usually I HATE stories with things like that cos it strikes me as so... unlikely? but this doesn't.
I realise I just rambled a hellaofalotta, but I needed to get that out!
P.S. Ariadne's name is awesome, it's always been one of my favourites - but in my dumbarse brain I didn't even know it was greek mythology.
Bya! and (pretty) please update as soon as possible (also with Pretty Boy - which I love and read first but hadn't reviewed yet and then ended up reading this and reviewing first) Report Review
wow, what's up with Rose? I didn't think people would care as
they did about Albus/fake relationship. And ha! I love that Stella has more of a backbone in response to James arseholeness and I have no idea how I feel about Eve. hmmm, though I may be leaning towards dislike...
Ray makes me laugh :D Al is a lost cause
anyway, I conclude that this is a BLOODY AMAZINGLY AMAZING STORY (with a brilliant OC)... and that I should probably stop gushing
definitely favedAuthor's Response: Rose is only mad because her and Albus have been fighting, and Stella is supposed to be her best friend, so she's pretty angry about that. I'm so glad you like it!! The enthusiasm is so great to read :) xx Report Review
"Scotti stared at the blonde haired, grey eyed beauty. Yes, everyone is described as beautiful because well everyone at Hogwarts is HOT, but not as HOT as Scotti of course. Well everyone except for Molly Weasley, we never forgave her dad for being a pompous twit so we decided to take it out on her instead and make her BUTT-UGLY, with a shitty personality. However we are not evil, so we decided to make her sister Lucy average but not as fit as the rest of the Weasley clan that somehow all of a sudden just ooze sex appeal."
You are a bloody genius! I'm kinda getting sick of how gorgeous everyone is with their grey flecked with green/purple/gold eyes! Flecked? What the hell is going on there?
Anyway, I loved the use of overused cliches exaggerated into hell (Rule 1: main guy must be toned and tanned and play Quidditch)
Sorry, I babbled. yeah...Author's Response: LOL yes, everyone must be very attractive that is the golden rule!!! And multi-coloured eyes :). Glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for the review!! Report Review
Alexa, Alexa... tut. tut. tut. accidentally groping Albus Potter's nose :D aww! and I actually have no idea why that is 'aww'able, frankly strange actually! nah, I really like her too.
anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Yes, it is quite strange;) and I'm glad you like her!
the next chapter is validating at the moment so it should be up soon:D Report Review
absolutely amazing story :)
sorry about not reviewing earlier, but I was consumed by how wondrously amazing this is!
there were some things I found confusing, but I think I understand them now.
I have to say though, not quite sure if I like any of the characters in the alternate universe (with (not any more) "evil" Harry), including that Harry and Maeby, apart from the Potters.
definitely not meant as an insult, I probably just have bad taste! Read the entire thing listening to depressing music to go along with it :D
anyway, I hope to read more from you! Good luck! eww... these exclamation marks...Author's Response: I know this story is confusing at times. I've actually been going back and editing things to make them a little clearer. Also, I think it would be easy to dislike Maeby and AU Harry because they're not always realistic (though I did try... again, something to edit), and they're actually pretty selfish and unfriendly people. Thank you for your review! Report Review
that was ADORABLE!!
aww, my love for James II and Lily II are growing by the second.
(P.S I especially loved your summary and the end line)
anyway, I can't work out how to work my account properly (I'm terrible with this stuff) but if I could I would favourite the little arse off of this oneshot.
good luck with writing more!Author's Response: awww thanks for that. That's really sweet! I've never written a one-shot before, and I'm glad you liked it. I was actually in a terrible mood and I came on here to read a good story, but your review made me all happy again. Thanks! And thanks for the review! Maybe I'll write another one soon! Report Review
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