Hello! This is REALLY late, sorry. My holiday season has been INSANE. First of all, thanks for entering my challenge!
Anyways, this story is cute! I think Molly is fun and bubbly, and her thoughts are hilarious to follow. Also, good characterization on Lucy and the other Weasley family members.
I think this was a good introduction and first chapter, keep it up! Results should be posted soon in the challenge section. :)
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Soo cuute! :D I liked how well the phrase flowed with the story. The story was very believable, and everyone was in character. I can totally see Tonks wanting to learn how to knit! Great job overall and thanks so much for entering my challenge!! :) :)Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It was an awesome challenge, by the way. I really enjoyed writing for it! Report Review
Aw, I liked it! It was short and to the point, which was good. Also, the lack of names didn't bother me at all, because you described them nicely enough without it. Overall, good job! I think you did great :)Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you thought it worked, thanks for reviewing! :) Report Review
Tag! Aw, this story is very cute and you got the characters spot on. Other than a few typos, this was a good. I love how they meet, and I could definitely see this happening in canon. Great story! :)
-madkatrob01Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! Glad you liked it! :D Report Review
Oooh, this is interesting! I can't wait to see what happens next! Did Gabby do it, or was it all an accident? Great story, 10/10 :)Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad that you found it to be interesting :) Report Review
I LOVE it!! It's so cute, and I love Colin in this story. It is so like him to sneak into Fred and George's workshop and get a picture of it! Hahaha. I also like how he looks back and remembers about stalking Harry... ah. And is that a little crush on Ginny we see? Hehe. This was excellent. Great job :D
-madkatrobAuthor's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
I loved writing about Colin. I don't often attempt Hogwarts era stories, because I don't think there's a lot that you can change, but I absolutely fell in love Colin.
He makes me smile. :) Report Review
This was a really good story! I loved the chararcterization of Lucius and Narcissa. From Harry's point of view we always see them as cruel, hateful people, but I've always thought that they were loving to each other, and this story proves that. I also like the way Narcissa feels about her sisters and parents; they seem really realistic. Overall, great job! :DAuthor's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for your kind review :) I'm glad you liked the story and that it gave you a new perspective on the Malfoys. I agree that they seem to love one another more than we realize from canon.
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Well, this was extremely well-written chapter, even if it is a little short. I love how Narcissa was portrayed, and her relationship with her sisters. I agree with you that lying to Voldemort to save Harry and ultimately the Wizarding world was a great thing, even if she wasn't the greatest person before. Great job :)Author's Response: Hello!! I am glad you found this little piece good! Thank you so much for reading & reviewing :D I love Review Tag haha xD Report Review
This story is so touching and at the same time really depressing. It's sad to see Lavender how she is in this fic: In the hospital, so depressed she can't even speak. We knew her as the silly, shallow girly-girl at Hogwarts who annoys the heck out of most of us, but you portrayed her as someone much deeper. Great job! :DAuthor's Response: Oh, thank you so much! :) I wanted to start on a major down note, but she does get to a somewhat better place eventually. Report Review
This was so cute! I love how Seamus acted, being sweet but awkward, and how he was just like a boy in ignoring his date at the Yule Ball. -_- Haha I really enjoyed this! Keep it up :)Author's Response: I wanted to make Seamus an average boy, and average boys are terrible dates! Glad you liked it! Report Review
Aww! This is really sweet! I love how you get us so into character and we can really feel what Teddy's thinking and feeling. Great job, keep it up! :)Author's Response: :) Thank you very much! Report Review
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