oh man she really needs to grow a backbone, it's so torturous to read. That being said I really like it, it brings out my emotions which is a sign of a good story.
I can't wait to find out the ending
xx :)Author's Response: If it's torturous to read it's definitely a million times worse to write. I'm more like Molly with the fact that I'm really blunt, so the fact that Tash is being so difficult and passive makes me want to shake her.
I'm so glad you like the story though and I'm super happy it brings out emotions in you!
Thanks for reviewing :)
-Rebecca Report Review
I really liked this chapter. It was well written.
Lily and Maddie are my favourites.
I think I know what he is going to do, he's going to teach at hogwarts isn't he?
Looking forward to the next chapter xxAuthor's Response: Glad you like Lily and Maddie, I have far too much fun writing them! I couldn't possibly comment on James' future, but the next few chapters should reveal a few more clues :) Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Oh this made me so happy :D
So cute and so much fluff xx Report Review
The photos, sketches and ring thing is so sweet. You had me almost in tears for some of it and in other parts I couldn't help but smile.
I really like how you have portrayed James' parents, an their interaction with her dad.
Update soon xx Report Review
wow it is excellent. I haven't read anything like it before. well not anything from Filch's point of view. I love it. :)
Liana xxAuthor's Response: Thank you! There are some great Filch stories out there if you take some time and look around. Glad you enjoyed reading mine :)
-Amanda Report Review
Loving the story :)
update soon please.
Liana xx Report Review
Ahhh more love triangle-ness. I just want her to break up with josh and get with james already.
Another great chapter :)
Liana xxAuthor's Response: Haha. Well, you'll have to wait and see what happens ^^
Thanks for the review (: Report Review
Another great chapter :D
Good job xxAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
I love it. It's fantastic. I love the idea behind it and how their relationship is developing.
Luke is probably my favourite character.
Good work, keep writing and I hope uni is going well.
Liana xx Report Review
You had me sobbing by the end of this. A beautiful story inspired by a beautiful song.
Liana :) xxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it! Report Review
OOooo wow! I'm so excited to see how this turns out.
Her dream definitely has something to do with her not being able to work for a year and being injured. Is it how she got hurt?
I think I am really going to like Addison, she is so relatable. I'm seriously looking forward to how she whips James in to shape. To me she seems to be sort of aggressive and controlling but in the this-is-for-your-own-good sort of way.
If you keep writing like this it's going to be a great story.
Good Luck xx :)Author's Response: Hey :)
Thanks so much for your enthusiasm!
Addison's dream, though related to her dismissal, is more symbollical than anything, so, no. ;)
That's an excellent description...like she's a mum who.d force the kids to eat their veggies for their own health. James is in for some major lifestyle-change.
I am definitely going to do my best to keep writing like this. 8)
Have a nice day!
-Akansha. Report Review
what? WHAT?? you can't just leave it at that. I hate cliff-hangers. Why did he leave her? Was it really him in the first place? Why do you do this to me?
hurry up and update xxx Report Review
Great first chapter. Really excellent characters thought it felt like the introductions were a bit rushed and incoherent.
I feel that could be improved by leaving out some information and let them build over the course of the story, revealing little bits at a time.
Possibly keep it to physical descriptions. Actions and how they interact with other characters build their personality more than descriptions.
I hope I helped and wasn't too harsh. I really did enjoy reading it.
Keep writing and update soon xx :) Report Review
Oh this was gorgeous. I loved it. keep up the good work xx :)Author's Response: you're too sweet (: thank you for reading and reviewing! Report Review
So much inner conflict on Summer's part, but the end bit, so cute, definitely one of those finally moments. Keep up the good work. :) xx Report Review
This made me so happy. Well done for writing another amazing chapter. :) xxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! :D Report Review
Loving the story, I hope you update soon :)
Cliffhanger, oh my gosh, though I can't wait to meet James even if he's a bit of a dick.
In the chapter where you were talking about Jacob's girlfriend you kept switching between Jacob and Jake and Violet and Viola. It's just a small thing and the names are similar so its easy to understand who it was. I don't remember what chapter it was, I was too engrossed in the story. :)
Keep up the good work. xx :) Report Review
WOW! this is the best story I've read in a while, and its killing me that you haven't updated this in ages. I love it so much I can't even express it in words. The ideas and the plot line are completely unique and unlike anything I've seen before. I'm seriously hoping and praying that you get over the writers block and get back to writing this story.
Loony xx :D Report Review
Really great story you've got going here. Connie is gorgeous.
I hope you keep writing it. Good luck with the writers block xx :) Report Review
Loving the story, especially how you put Charlie in it we never hear enough about him. I'm really like the story line at the moment.
I really like how you have presented the characters. I love them all.
James can cook?!?! That pretty much made the story for me.
Keep up the good work and update soon. xx Report Review
Absolutely loving the story.
Natasha has finally said no to her mother, I am so proud of her.
There is definitely something going on between Molly and Gryffin. There is no denying that. I think it's so sweet.
Update soon. xxAuthor's Response: Yay! I'm so happy you love the story :)
And yes, Natasha did say no, although she didn't so much say it as she just kind of hid and let her actions say no for her.
Hm funny that you see something between Molly and Gryffin. I've had a plan for the both of them since the beginning, but whether that be together or separate is something you'll have to find out! muah hah ha
Thank you for reviewing :)
-Rebecca Report Review
Arrg! So much goodness in one story. I sat and read this straight through, I finished it at 5:30am, which to me is an indication that it's a good story.
I love the comedy brought by Holly and Adam. It makes it much less morbid than it would be if they weren't in it.
Keep up the good work and update soon.
xx Loony Report Review
Really, really liked this story. The mystery surrounding the family has me intrigued as to what will happen. I also like the concept of them be able to transform into a dragon. It's a really original concept that I haven't seen before.
There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes, which I can easily overlook, thanks to the sheer amazing-ness of this story. Just about every story I read has a few, so it's nothing to really worry about.
Zane is possibly my favorite character. I'd love to see more of him. I really love the awareness he has to what is going on and the quiet, cool, intelligent, semi-manipulative vibe I get off him, whether or not you intended it to be that way.
My gut feeling is that somehow Danny and Andrei know each other. Maybe part of the same family or something. They just remind me of one another. It might also be the fact that Danny just showed up 'again' as Narizza is visiting Andrei. It's probably not right, but I like to speculate.
I know it's been about a year since you updated this story but I really hope you do soon and that it hasn't been abandoned. Keep up the good work, people are still reading it.
PS. Sorry for the length of this and the number of 'really's I used.
PPS. It's killing me not knowing what comes next.Author's Response: I don't know if you'll ever see this, but if you do, you have no idea what reading you comment just did to me. I haven't been on this site in a long time, but I do in fact still write on the story. Randomly logging inn again and seeing that someone has read what I have written is incredibly motivating. The thing is, as I published it here it went so long between updating so I decided to just complete it and then publish it when it was all done. So if you do see this, please hold on a little longer and more will come. Hopefully the spelling has improved a little too, hehe. Report Review
Love the story. It's nicely written. Please update soon xx Report Review
Please, please, please update soon. It's killing me not knowing what happens. I really like your story it's well written, I love the characters and the plot is really interesting I hope you continue it :) Report Review
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