I really like this story! Please update soon, I really like these characters and the setting! they just seem so real, not the sterotypical Al/OC, please keep writing!

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Very cute and electric song fic! Taylor Swift is always very good! Love Al/OCs! It was a little confusing, but you did a good job! Loved it a lot!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I haven't been on in a while so I didn't see your review, sorry about that. I reread the fic and I'll go back and fix the errors that I caught once NaNoWriMo is over.

~WR
;)

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Hey I really like this story so far! You should definitely update it soon!!

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SooO good! Please update soon! Such an intense chapter!

Author's Response: i promise i will, i'm editing the next chapter now! haha, thank you(: x

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Amazing Story! I absolutely love it! The creeping thrills and the haunting shadows and nightmares are absolutely tantalizing and captivating! The romance between Al and Arabella is subtle, but enough that I want more! Please update soon!!

Author's Response: i love how you describe my story, that's too kind(: and i'm glad you think so, i dislike romances that are too obvious and cheesy, that sort of thing. but what a compliment, thank you! x

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Ahhh! Please update soon! Amazing chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks much! I'm trying :) I'll definitely have it posted by tomorrow.

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Just wanted to say that this is a really great story! Real nice plot line, right amount of complicated! Al/OC is my fav pairing and I'm currently writing one myself!! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's my fave, too :) I just updated yesterday so it should be validated soon.

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I really like this story! Please update soon! Really want to know who this Olivia chick is, and what's going to happen next with Anya and Al! < so cute btw! Love it!

Author's Response: Hey, thank you :) I will try and get the next chapter in tonight and then hopefully it will get through in time, before the staff go on holiday :) It's all going to be revealed at some point so keep reading ;) Thank you :)

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Great story, I love how she just skips right over wizard. Hilarious. I love these two together!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D

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Great chapter! Summer is being so stubborn though! I'm definitely team James, and Team Conner for meddling- I'm glad someone still has their head on straight!

Author's Response: thank you so much :D summer is a very stubborn person - annoyingly. but that's just the way she is. someone needed to meddle. they're too stupid on their own :P

ellie :) xx

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Team Albius all the way! Great story b.t.w's! Update soon!

Author's Response: I keep forgetting to mention this to you, but I love your username XD
I think Alibus has 60% compared to Jally with 40% It's a close count, but I think it's in the lead :}
Thank for the lovely review! I will update soon I promise, once my last year at college stops trying to murder me in stress! :}

~BlameItOnTheNargles

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AAAah! Please update! You can't leave us hanging like this!! So good! Update soon! Pretty pretty please!

Author's Response: the update will be very soon, i promise. the next chapter will hopefully solve a couple of things :D thank youuu,

ellie :) xx

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PLEASE UPDATE!! I'm dying here! Also, I would be okay if you updated either Breathless or Welcome to 1the Chase as well. Either or. ;-) Really loved this story!

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So good!! That was great!! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please Update ASAP!
James was great, but I still think there might be a chance that Penny could be pregnant... she seemed pretty sure of it though... Please Update!!!

Author's Response: aww, well thank you :) the update will be pretty soon, im making progress with it, though this chapter is hard to write. i love your penname! i feel like i may have said that before, but oh well. seriously. so clever.

ellie :) xx

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Oooohhh! Finally! He finally caught them! I think he's going to just think that its the funniest thing, while Summer and james are completely embarrased. He'll probably tell Dom, although I hope not, as she would tell everyone and the secret would be out! Please update soon! Great chapter!!!

Author's Response: yes, he finally did! hmm... so thats what you think he's going to do... interesting. the next chapter will be up very soon, so youll be able to see if youre right or not :D youre right - dom would tell everyone, if she found out.

ellie :) xx

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Finally! This was great! I love how Rose didn't even ask any big questions, just comforted her. I also love the confrontation in the grocery store when she knocks over the old lady! So funny! Bonnie is so cute! I miss Al! Please bring him back in the next chapter! Pretty please!

Author's Response: oh albus is definitley in the next chapter :D haha! glad you liked it :) sorry it took so long. i should have the next chapter in a week xx

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Awww! It's over??! Please write a sequel! I loved watching Olivia's progress over the story and seems like it finished so fast! She knows where she's going, but there's so much that could have happened! This story was great, I loved all the wand references and character depth. I loved James and Olivia's relationship and it's progresses and quirks! I'll miss this story!!

Author's Response: Awww, thank you! I'm glad you liked it :) Who knows, one day I might get back to this for a sequel!

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AAahhh! Why would she do that? It seems kind of stupid of her to just kiss him again with no warning! Not to mention they're in the middle of a huge prank with everybody around them! Please update fast!

Author's Response: I think we've established the fact that Elaquay is sort of stupid. And rash. And a bit psychotic. XD. Poor girl just keeps ripping apart her dignity. I'll update as soon as I can and thanks for the review :D

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Wow, big chapter! So much stuff to chew on! Great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update ASAP!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)

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Oooh! It's great that she'll be playing! good chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I'm glad you liked it!

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Good chapter! Please update soon!! The story is in a real interesting spot!

Author's Response: thank you! update will be soon :D

ellie :) xx

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Wow, that was fast! Pretty short, more of a filler. Good otherwise, I liked hearing about her different past Christmases. (I miss James) Please update soon!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review :) I'm glad you liked it!

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AHHH! Finally! and can I just say, it wasn't even cheesy! It wasn't the least bit romantic, which is perfect for Scorpius and Rose! Love it!

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wow, that's cool about how Ollivander gave her the book.
Rose and Scorpius. suspicious!
I want to punch James! That sucks that he was snogging that girl!
Good chapter!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review :) Rose and Scorpius are completely hilarious I find, I love writing the small mentions of them.

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Good story so far! The writing is really well done, and the story seems interesting! I was a little confused about what's actually wrong with her leg, and a little disappointed that she would cry so easily, but you know the character better than I do!
8.5/10

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review.

There's a lot of backstory about her leg, I did actually mention the condition itself in there (foot drop). As for why she cried, I hinted at things to do with her mother, and I think, from my own personal experience, that someone facing the end of their career, when their career had basically been their life, would be absolutely distraught.

I'll keep it in mind though :)

Thanks for the review!

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