NO WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME THINGS WERE FINALLY LOVELY YOU HAVE BROKEN MY HEART ALL OVER AGAIN.

(lovely chapter!)

Author's Response: bahahaha thanks... I think? I promise it'll get better! don't hate me yet!

 Report Review

YES. You, my dear, are the best. Your updates make me happy (and provide a much welcomed distraction from essay writing)! SHE LOVES HIM THEY'RE GONNA GET MARRIED AND HAVE SO MANY BABIES WELL MAYBE JUST ONE. Super happy you've been writing heaps. Does this mean we'll have more frequent updates? If it does not, I might just throw a tantrum. Update NOW.

Also.

"About lilies... they're perfect," James shrugged, his eyes sliding over to meet mine, that damn devilish twinkle making my breath stop in my chest. "Don't you think?"

I melted.

Author's Response: aw hurray!! I'm glad you liked that bit. I thought it might be a bit much, but sometimes I like cheesy :P And yes! Hopefully I'll have more frequent updates! As long as I can keep writing lots haha. Glad you liked it, though :)

 Report Review

OH MY GOODNESS HOW DID YOU UPDATE AND I NOT NOTICE? Bad me. Holey moley, this was the best. I was hanging on every word and my eyes kept flitting over to the scroll bar. I would wince every time it got closer and closer to the bottom. YOU'RE AWAKENING MY 14 YEAR OLD OBSESSIVE SELF! I'm like all giddy. omgomgomgomgomgOMG. I want to live in this story.

Author's Response: bahahaha I'm glad you enjoyed that :) Yeah, sometimes I really wish I lived in harry potter... hence my love for writing fan fiction :P But hurray! I'm glad you liked it and I'll have the next chapter up as soon as I can :)

 Report Review

DON'T LIE JAMES YOU LOVE HER YOU LOVE THE CRAP OUT OF HER

Author's Response: bwahahahaha every time. I love your comments. glad you liked it (i think?). More soon :)

 Report Review

I am really not okay with there not being any more of this. Please, PLEASE update soon.

Author's Response: I'm sorry! I'm going as fast as my muse will allow! :D

 Report Review

You are fantastic. This is fantastic.

Author's Response: YOU are fantastic, utterly and completely. Thanks for reviewing!

 Report Review

No, seriously, why is this so good?

Author's Response: I honestly don't know, especially since it's written by yours truly.

Thanks for reviewing!

 Report Review

NO JAMES I WILL HEAL YOU WITH MY LOVE

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHA!

Oh my goodness, I am just loving all of your reviews. You're so magnificent.

 Report Review

I HAVE RETURNED ohmygod anarchy

Author's Response: YES YOU HAVE! So has capslock I see. /Good/

Thanks for reviewing!

 Report Review

crapballs I have to go to bed. I shall return!

Author's Response: I hope so! Your reviews are entertaining.

 Report Review

This has nothing to do with this chapter, but I forgot to mention it like two chapters ago: shirtless James. Nice.

Author's Response: Obligatory, obviously. Can't have an J/L without at least one!

 Report Review

I should probably explain my last review as it must seem highly irrelevant. I was making tea to accompany this lovely story... Because tea is my favourite, and now so is this. You see. Perfectly reasonable.

Author's Response: Yes, very reasonable indeed.

 Report Review

I might make myself some tea.

Author's Response: You should do that and then give me some.

 Report Review

Okay, I figure I should actually leave a proper review. But! I'll be brief because I'm itching for the next chapter. So. This is the best. You're amazing. The end.

Author's Response: Thank you muchly!

 Report Review

HOLEY MOLEY... (apparentlyreviewsneedtobe20characterslong.)

Author's Response: Haha, thank you.

 Report Review

NO I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT.

Author's Response: Good! I'm glad I can keep readers on their toes!

 Report Review

"James cast Lily a look not unlike a look a solider might give his lover before departing for war."

Yes.

Author's Response: I'm assuming you liked that line. Thank you!

 Report Review

WHY AM I ONLY DISCOVERING THIS NOW?

Author's Response: I DON'T KNOW BUT I HOPE THAT MEANS YOU LIKE IT!

 Report Review

Yesyesyesyesyes. Guess who's not doing the assignment that's due today? That's right, me. Instead, I'M READING THIS! Although... once I finish this review... Let's not think about that right now. This is the best. I'm loving all of these James/Lily moments and I'm so desperate for them to continue. Lily and James... Alone in York... Is York romantic? I certainly hope so! Regardless, I hope you make it romantic! James' point of view is going to blow my mind. Post it soon, or... else.

Author's Response: haha oh geez, so no pressure or anything? I like the James chapters, but I'm not sure if I did them justice or not... There's 2 of them, the first is ok, but I do actually love the 2nd one :) I don't know how to make the first better though :/ oh well, I'll let you decide haha. ANYways, I'm glad you liked it :) There will be PLENTY of Lily/James moments to come! Thanks for the review!

 Report Review

Yes yes yes yes yes. So, half way through James and Lily's conversation I remembered about the tender moment and WAS SO EXCITED I HAD TO GO TO THE BATHROOM. I love James. He is nice. So, so nice. And cuddly. Snuggly warm.

God damnit I love your story. I'm going to tell my grandchildren about it.

Author's Response: hahaha your review just made me laugh out loud. tell your grandchildren about it... classic. I keep meaning to read your latest chapter of dreamcatcher and I will, but I'm currently stealing internet from the bar across the street so my internet access is a tad limited haha. Anyways, I'll have more of this story up soon so you won't have to wait too long :)

 Report Review

Once again, BEST PART OF MY DAY. Tender James/Lily moment? WHEN? WHERE? NOW? Good. This was lovely. Except, of course, for Celia. She needs to GET OUT. There is too much shouting in this review. I've also noticed that I review in short, sharp sentences. WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME? I'm just excited. Maybe I need more tea? Yes. But to the point: Good chapter! It was nice and long and nice. I like Sirius. I like James. Not Celia, though. I like Peter more than Celia. DO YOU KNOW WHAT I HATE ABOUT WRITING MARAUDERS FANFICTION? Having to make Peter tolerable. And friendly. And... have them like him. Bah! It plagues me. Just thought I'd share that... Ahem. I insist you update right this minute. I'm basically living from chapter to chapter of this story.

Tea.

Author's Response: bahahahaha oh my god I love your reviews so much. But I totally agree about Peter... I don't like when stories cut him out completely but I haven't quite gotten the hang of HOW to write him yet... so I just kind of throw him in there every so often. ANYWAYS, glad you liked it :) I'll have the very tender james/lily moment up soon :) Cheers!

 Report Review

WHY IS THIS SO GOOD?

Author's Response: E, I'm just ecstatic you think that! I'm often quite on the fence about my writing, so again, I'm just thrilled you like this enough to tell me (and in all caps lock, too!). Thank you for reading! (:

 Report Review

YES. I LIKE THIS. THIS IS GOOD.

Author's Response: Ha ha, thank you! I'm thrilled you like it enough to post in all caps. :P

 Report Review

I BETTER GET MY JAMES FIX IN THE NEXT FEW CHAPTERS. Ahem. Anyway. That was amazing. You're amazing. I love waking up to updates from you; it makes my day (how sad is my life...). Daw I love Remus. And Sirius. Mostly James. Not Peter. You make every character so wonderful in your stories! They're so fleshed out. I think that's why I like your fanfiction so much. It's a lot... realer... than a lot of other fanfiction. And I'm all for deluding myself. Pleasepleaseplease update again soon. I need it.

Author's Response: hahahaha thanks so much! I absolutely love your reviews, have I mentioned that? And don't worry, for the next like, 5 chapters you'll have your James fix :) His POV chapters are coming up soon-ish! And Thank you so much for all your lovely compliments :) It makes writing so much easier and fun knowing how much people like my stories! Thanks! I'll have more up soon!

 Report Review

Finally saw the movie. Must fill hole in heart with fanfiction. This is good. Need more. (Can't make rational sentences).

Author's Response: saw it twice. Cried the entire last half, I'm not ashamed to say it. So many emotions. And denial. it'll never end. Anyways, I'm glad you liked it (I think...). I'll have more up as soon as I can :)

 Report Review