I'll admit, a lot of the time your plot confuses me. Lily sort of came out of nowhere into the story and there are other little inconsistencies which for other stories are enough to make me look for another. But I know I'm going to finish this story because it's hilarious. Nellie is great, she's just so funny. I'm enjoying the randomness and hilarity. Also the Regulus backstory is very original and that dynamic interests me. But I mostly reviewed to applaud you on the creation of Nellie (and Izzie, she's good too). Report Review
Know how you feel, crushes are nothing but irritation, on a positive note however it's damn convenient for the chapter...Author's Response: Haha, isn't it just! :) Report Review
Glad to have my nagging acknowledged. Very good chapter and I look forward to the romance, not sure how Heather would ever manage romance so it should be interesting.Author's Response: Haha, thank you!! :D Yes, it should be quite the adventure for her :P Report Review
I kind of read this a while ago however I am hoping a review will cause the update to come faster? Well anyway you should know I don't usually wait for authors to post but as this is hilarious you're one of the few exceptions where I will continue to read and the great thing is - I like to review. How awesome am I?Author's Response: Haha, you are very awesome indeed! I'm in the process of updating at this very moment :D Report Review
Purple is an awesome! :) 10/10Author's Response: Not too girly? ;) Emily x Report Review
YAY! *smiles* as a suggestion you could write more...Author's Response: No plans to expand, but thank you so much! :) --Jenna Report Review
their's a fourth act?!?!?! Is it about Lily and James because you handled it like a pro. Loved it. Okay I'm going to go read fourth act now YAY. :) 10/10Author's Response: It's about Remus/Sirius actually. :) Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. And thanks for leaving a review. --Jenna Report Review
I like it but your grammar is a little off. Sometimes you use the wrong version of a word and even though I know what you mean it for some reason annoys me. I'm easily annoyed. Anyway I do love James though. Report Review
this made me smile. :)Author's Response: Oh yay! I love it when i make people smile! ;) thanks for your review Report Review
I will forgive you for ignoring the Deathly Hallows ONLY because this is awesome. 9/10 Report Review
LOL, thats all I can say. LOLAuthor's Response: I'm going to take that as a big compliment and say thanks :D Report Review
hahahahahaha. I really like this, I'm hooked on Heather but I just have one question -what does she look like? Like I get she's unfit, but is she fat or just unfit, and I didnt get a description of her in general.unless I just missed it. Anyway 7/10 and as 7 is a magically powerful number I reckon pretty soon you'll get a 10Author's Response: Thank you :D No, you didn't miss it - she's sort of getting described as I go along, but I think most of it comes in the next chapter. Basically she's average height, not fat (sort of average, again), just very unfit, and ginger :) Report Review
And now I'm intensely curious. Report Review
lol I love it when Percy doesn't get what he wants. Although someone liking Marietta is a little beyond me - if we're talking about the same Marietta. I'm going to keep reading and see how it goes, so far its pretty good.Author's Response: :) Thank you for the review! I hope you are liking it so far! -Sarah Report Review
this is really interesting. Odd but interesting. I'm not really sure what I think of it at the moment but I'll keep reading. Report Review
ahahahahahaha! I swear the authour's notes are as entertaining as the story! you would be an interesting person to get to know. I like the story but i want longer chapters!?! Demanding aren't i? Report Review
yay! New chapter! Loved it btw ava is the best.curious to see what they do with the girlfriend...awks. 10/10Author's Response: Yay new chapter! aha, it took sooo long to get validated! But it's up now. :) Yes the girlfriend will be a tad awkward, but will Ava be good or...bad? ;) Thanks muchly for the review :) Emily x Report Review
(Bellatrix. this is my account name) I decided to read more of your stuff. You're good. Keep writing.Author's Response: Oh hai! ;) Aww thank you - though I'm sorry there's not that much more ;) Thanks muchly for the reviews :) Emily x Report Review
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