You! You've successfully ripped my heart out and shredded it into pieces... This chapter. Gah..

I love that Hermione came to him full of concern and a desire to take away all his pain, isn't that what we all want for the people we love?

And then for her to drop that bombshell and say that she loved him leads to one of those, "Well, now what?" moments for us readers because we know how torn he is already and how desperately he wants to keep her safe, but her telling him she loves him just makes it that much more difficult for him to do so.

AND THEN he has to be the "good guy" and show her his "true colors" because it's the right thing to do. And while yes, it was the right thing to do, it's such awful timing that it hurts. Gahh.

Now it's all a big mess and he said that he loved her back and she couldn't even tell him that saying she hated him was only a heat of the moment thing and that she was just shocked and angry because he'd left out the truth for so long.

OH MY GOSH!

Okay... I need to stop repeating everything that happened back to you and just tell you how bloody fantastic this chapter was. I know you were scared that it wouldn't turn out right and didn't know how to do all the specifics, but you did an absolutely wonderful job and I applaud you on that. Keep up the good work, I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter, I know from here out it's going to be heavy stuff, but gahh... Keep up the amazing work.

~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: Mischief managed18,

First, can I say how much I adore your reviews? How can I thank you? You always make it so hard for me to respond. :D

Awe, I shredded your heart? Oh my, sorry for that. This is sad, indeed. I just want to cry for them, especially now that we have reached this pivotal moment in time.

You are so right. We want to protect those we love and take their pain away. So true.

Oh, yes... She just came out and admitted her true feelings for him. She offered herself, but did so out of love for him. And you are so right... "Now what?" What in the world is this torn gentleman to do? Well, now we know. We have this glimpse of him being a truly "good man" because it is the right thing, but terrible, awful timing. It's just heartbreaking, truly and I'm glad as a writer that all of that came across correctly. But of course, he is still flawed at using an Unforgivable on her.

The end of this chapter was planned since day 1. It is now a 'big mess,' just as you said. Draco thinks she cannot love him and that miscommunication will bring him much pain. and she will regret saying that she hated him, because it just simply isn't true.

And the tragic thing is that she won't just be able to tell him in the morning. His time at Hogwarts is over. The war has begun and there is much "heavy stuff" coming as you have expertly predicted.

Thank you sincerly for faithfully returning for more and sending me such lovely comments.

Much appreciated,
Dark Whisper

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OH MY GOD! I love that Sirius tried to get her to wear a little skimpy dress. xD

But... ugh. I'm so conflicted with your darn story! It's so beyond fantastic, I don't even have the words for it, but bloody hell. Like, I want her with Sirius or Lupin because they're both freaking amazing and then this Ivan guy steps in and I want to punch him. There's something about him that I absolutely can't stand and I don't know if that's me being overly cautious of characters or just a bad feeling I get from the guy, but I don't like him one bit! :p

And I feel so bad for Elaina. Poor girl has no idea what to think about anyone or anything and yet being able to know what each person is "feeling" is such a blessing and a curse. And the whole Ivan thing and then her mind constantly going back to Sirius and not knowing if he cares or not. OPEN YOU DAMN EYES, ELAINA! HE CARES YOU JUST DON'T SEE IT! Gahh.

I nearly screamed when I realized you'd updated and read the chapter in about ten minutes. You're fantastic and I love your story. I know I've told you countless times, but I really do. I can't wait for the next chapter! :) Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: YOU MAKE MY DAY WITH YOUR REVIEWS. Like literally half the time I think that I'm writing just to see what you have to say haha.

Also, I'm glad that you're noticing that while Sirius is beginning to care for Elaina, he isn't in LOVE with her. Most people would jump to that conclusion. NO.

You're the best reviewer ever. Like ever ever.

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Oh my goodness! Loving where this is going so far!! Can't wait to read what you have in mind next, again keep me posted if you want the help. It would be an honor!! :)
~Mischief_managed18

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Again, I absolutely love where this is going and find the idea to be quite entreating and would love to help you out!! :) Keep up the good work!
~Mischief_managed18

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Why hello there dear, it's Mischief_managed18! So I enjoy where this story is going so far but I would absolutely LOVE to offer you some pointers and tips and help you fix grammar issues and such. If you would like, you can go to the page "Pottehead for Life" on Facebook and send a message to the page asking for Rose and I can talk to you to possibly set something up? :D Let me know!! :)
~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: Oh my gosh! I would absolutely love the help... I am so "uneducated" on how this should go. I really need help on making edits and such.

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Argh! This chapter was so wonderfully well written, I can't even know where to begin. I loved the whole scene with Draco and his father, as well as with his mother and with Goyle. I love that you made the whole argument with his father all those years ago about a mudblood that he'd brought up to question his father's teachings and his whole upbringing and that it was Hermione. This chapter was so moving and so sad on so many levels, but I absolutely loved it. I cannot wait to see all of what he ends up telling Hermione and how she reacts to it all. Keep up the amazing work!

I'm sorry to hear about your losses this past year. I know how painful it is to lose someone. Keep your head up, dear.

~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: Dearest Mischief,

Thank you so much for your wonderful review. It makes my heart smile so much.

I'm glad you liked the scene with Lucius. He is so... despicable. But his mother isn't too bad and Goyle, well we get a glimpse of what it is like to really be him. :(

I'm glad that you didn't mind the fight starting with Hermione. I was almost afraid of it being too cheesy. I actually still am with this next chapter. I want it to be done right and it is giving me a bit of trouble, I will admit. There is much riding on this next chapter... emotions, things said, their actions, and feelings. It's going to take a lot for me to get it right.

Thank you so much for your kind condolences. It is much appreciated.

My apologies for taking so long to respond. I'm finally get back into this story and your words are such inspiration.

Thank you dearly,
Dark Whisper



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Poor Mary. I swear that girl can't seem to catch a break... I hope things at least get normal/ better ish for her for a while. Gahh! Sorry this review is so short and just blah, I want to keep reading!!!
~Mischief_managed18

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Gahh! I love her relationship with her brother, it's freaking adorable. As to the rest of the chapter, poor Mary. I couldn't imagine what it would be like in this situation and I'd say overall, she's handling it like a champ. I love the tension between her and Sirius and I know that this story is going to end up pulling every flippin' heart string at some point or another and to that I say: "BRING IT!" Off to the next chapter, you're a fantastic writer. :)
~Mischief_managed18

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Gahh!! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! WHY IS NATE THERE AND WHAT'S WRONG WITH HER?! GAHHH!!! I absolutely love this story so far!! I love the "chemistry" between her and Sirius and I love that they were paired up. :P This shall be a good read!
~Mischief_managed18

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Ahh! Oh my goodness... So I know it's been a while but I'm back and ready to read it all! I knew something was up with her subtle comments about a death date and such but oh my goodness, that must be horrible. Knowing you have something that you can't cure, I can only imagine how hard that must be. And I already love Nate! Gahh. I cannot wait to see where the rest of this story goes but I can already tell it will eventually be a tear jerk-er. Off to the next chapter!
~Mischief_managed18

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Gahh! I love Draco... and I love the tension between the two and just their general attitude towards each other. Malfoy reading Shakespeare? *swoons* Have I mentioned that I love him? I love that he pulled a little prank on her, I thought that was awesome. xD I cannot wait to see where this story goes, I get more and more excited with each chapter! :) Did I mention I love Draco? If not... I love Draco. That is all. :P Keep it up!

~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: I love Draco too! That's why I focus a little more on him, since he's my favorite. In one of the next couple chapters, I'm going to pull something with him where it's only from his perspective, and it's a big deal to him! If you have any ideas for me to put in later, I would love to hear them and might use them (and of course give you credit!) Thanks again! :)

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Ahh Lily. Such a little spit-fire, I love it! I can totally picture this whole scene happening, quite well done my dear! :D I loved reading it and the whole thing totally played out in my head as I read. :) Keep up the good work! :D
~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: Haha, yep. Spit-fire is a perfect description. This was just a song that I felt needed a fic to it and Lily definitely fit my bill. Also, this was just REALLY fun to write. Thanks for the review!

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Hello dear! :D So excited to see where you go with this. I love the table for seventh years and the wall with all the names of those who were lost, I think they were lovely touches. :) I love the way you describe things. There were a few lines that were awkwardly worded but nothing too major. This story has a lot of potential and I'm excited to see what happens next. Keep up the good work!
~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted to make it unique and not like the rest of the Dramiones that happen during Hogwarts post-battle. I'm deciding whether or not to throw in a twist, but either way it started in this chapter! the next will be up as soon as I finish writing it! :)

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So freaking excited to see where this story goes! One suggestion, make sure that they stay in character? Hermione seems to speak a little differently than she would in the series, but maybe that's just me and it wasn't the whole time, just a couple moments. Other than that, the story line seems to be falling into place and I look forward to see what you do with it. :)
~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: About the editing thing, I actually just made my account on the forums, so once I am upgraded I will look into the beta reading forum and see what I can do there. Hopefully that will make it easier for this to work! :)

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Ahh! :D Well hello there dear! You reviewed Fairytaled for me and offered to help me edit and all that jazz and I would be delighted. :) Send me a message on my formspring (MischiefMngd18) and we can figure something out. :)

Anyways, as a review to your story, I cannot wait to see where this goes! I'm such a sucker for Dramione so anytime I see one that's actually decently written, I'm excited. I think this has a lot of potential and I'm excited to watch the magic unfold. :P Keep it up! Off to read the next chapter.

~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: Awesome! I actually don't have a formspring, but I do have facebook! What could we do to make it work best for you? :) I am also replying to your second review for the story.thank you for the suggestion on the speaking, I just kind of wrote it without thinking too much about how she talks, so I will definitely keep that in mind! Any suggestions you have as to plot twists would be welcome too! I'm about halfway through writing the third chapter and I'm already working in something most people won't see coming! Thanks for reviewing :)

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Gah! Oh my goodness gracious my love. Yet another fabulous chapter from one of the best authors ever! :D

Seriously, I only go on here about once a week or so now and check everything and when I saw you'd updated and it was a new chapter, I just about died from happiness.

It's bloody amazing. I love that you can tell she's developing some sort of attraction to Siruis whether or not she can admit it to herself. And then you through a double bomb shell in there. Not only is her mom engaged, but she's pregnant, with twins! Definitely didn't see that one coming! Glad he's a wizard and Elaina didn't ruin something, though it would have been entertaining. Gahh. Poor Elaina. I don't know what I would do in that situation. I mean you have to be happy for your mom being happy, but then it's like you're being completely replaced. Your mom is getting married and their having not just one, but two babies? I would freak out and I'm surprised at how well she held it together.

Okay, you seriously are a fantastic writer and I'm in love with your story, as I've said time and time and I'll say time and time again. I love the characters you've created and I absolutely love this plot. You have a gift my dear, use it! :) I can't wait for the next update, I'll be patiently awaiting it. S2

~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: Aw, shucks. One of the best authors ever?! Wowza. As always, I think you flatter me way more than I deserve.

As for Elaina holding it together...we'll be seeing her drop it all within the next chapter. Lots and lots of letting it all go.

Thanks, hun! And thank you for being so loyal to this story and me. It's people like you that keep me going! S2

~TFM

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Why hello there my dear! :D I was so excited to see that you've updated! Gahh. I love that this chapter was in Draco's POV, it was awesome and I absolutely love him. I can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve, I can tell it's going to be absolutely amazing as usual. There were some typos throughout, but nothing too major. :P Update soon! :)
~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: Hey missy!!! I know! there will be more Draco chapters i promise, but they may not be for a while. I love him too *sigh* Bahh, I hate typos!!! I shall go fix them right after I answer the other reviews.

I just did! :)
jaz xoxo

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Holy crap child. Seriously I love you right now... so much. You really are so beyond talented, it's not even funny. Again, I will say that this is by far my favorite Dramione story and I check quite frequently for updates. I'm so glad to see you updating again, and this chapter was just bloody brilliant. I love the whole bath scene. Probably way more than I should. I love the chemistry you've created between them and I love the way they interact. Someone please get me a Draco. Like seriously... Gahh. I love all the little moments between Draco and Blaise as well. Little "bro" moments. I just love this whole story far too much. Keep up the brilliant work, I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon!! S2
~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: Mischief managed18,

Ah, see? I don't even know how to respond to that. Your review makes me want to run into a pile of fallen leaves, fall down, and wave my arms and legs, creating an autumn version of a snow angel as the author spirit within me soars far above the ground. Thank you for that!

Have I made Draco too perfect? Yes, probably so. But regardless, I said a prayer for you today... for God to send you a Draco. :) He knows who you are, even though I do not. Even so, I care and wish you love beyond measure (when the time is right).

With heart-felt sincerity,
Dark Whisper

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Oh my goodness!! I totally understand the whole writer's block thing, it seems to be my problem as of late. Anywho, yet another AMAZING chapter. Seriously, you have some real talent and I absolutely love this story. It is by far my favorite Dramione and I'm so in love with where everything is headed. I love that she went more into the story and that she managed to send a message to Draco without even knowing she was doing so. GAHH! okay I'm trying not to freak out but I'm so bloody excited that there's another chapter. OFF TO THE NEXT ONE! Brilliant job. :)
~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: Mischief managed18,

Oh, how I do love your reviews. You always render me a bit speechless and I never know how to respond.

I'm so happy that you like all of the story points that you mentioned and how/where everything is heading. All of these feelings and times being together (and apart) are truly heading somewhere. I do have a plan. I just wish it wouldn't take me so long to write them.

You truly give me AMAZING compliments and I cannot thank you enough.

With heart-felt thanks,
Dark Whisper

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Sorry I haven't been around, but I'm back! :D
Lovely chapter. I love the moment she had with her parents while fishing and just the overall way she interacts with them. It was quite well done and I loved it. The ending made me sad, but I think it means the story is moving on, which is always good. :P You're a lovely writer m'dear. :) Keep up the good work!
One thing I'd try if I were you is to have a Beta or to have a friend go through and edit the story. There were several typos and grammatical errors, other than that, I absolutely loved it. :)
~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: It's okay Mischief_Managed, I haven't read yours in a while either. I'll do that soon, i saw there were quite a few chapters added since last time.
Thank you. I love that moment too. Oh why did it make you sad? Thank you again, and so are you! :)
I've been trying to get on the forums, but I've been having trouble. it keeps telling me I'm restricted from everything. I can't even look at me profile. :/ So until I can get one, I'll just go back later and fix them. Thank you for another review. :)
jaz xoxo

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Oh my goodness. As I've said before, every time I come on this website I check to see if this story has been updated and each time I see it has been I get unbelievably excited.

This was an incredible chapter in so many ways. I think it's probably one of my favorites and I absolutely loved everything that happened in this chapter.

Poor Hermione. All she wants is a way for the two of them to be together and at the same time stop the prejudice she's been receiving since her arrival at Hogwarts.

The whole flower thing and Draco's animagus. Gahhh It was amazing and so sad and horrible that he had to sit there and listen to everything that went on between Hermione and McGonagall.

This chapter was so full of emotion with Hermione, McGonagall, Mr. Filtch's story (wonderfully done by the way), and Draco. I teared up several times during this chapter, it was amazing.

Keep up the good work, I can't wait for the next chapter! You are utterly fantastic. :)

~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: Mischief_managed18,

How does one really say 'thank you' for such wonderfully encouraging words? You never fail to lift my spirits like a hug and I thank you so much.

This chapter is one of your favorites? Really? There really was a lot said about how Hermione really felt... the unfairness of it all and the inability to fix it. I'm so glad you liked it. :)

The flower thing... that was my 'magical element' of the chapter. It was something small and simple, but I thought linking the flowers to Draco's emotions would be something different and serve as a visual for what he was feeling throughout such a sad conversation. Thank you for mentioning it. :)

Ah, Filch... yes. When thinking of some people having magic while others do not, I thought of him being a squib, but still at Hogwarts. I asked myself 'why'? Why would he roam Hogwarts? And so I made up a bit of backstory for him so that McGonagall could use it to help Hermione through her questions and contemplations of why things happen the way they do. The unfairness of having a twin with magic, would've been terribly tragic. I'm glad you liked what I wrote about it. :)

Thank you from my heart for reviewing like you do.
Dark Whisper

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No!! It can't be your last story for a while! That makes me sad. :( Though I understand the whole not being motivated thing. It happens to me, I just push through it until I find that spark of inspiration and go with it.

Anyways, brilliant ending to this wonderful story. I'm so sad that it's over but I think the ending was perfect. Gahhh they are just too cute together. And I loved their whole conversation in the closet before he kissed her. I also loved how you did the whole "clicking into place" part with her realizing each thing just proved that he loved her and vice versa.

Oh! And the part towards the end with them promising to make Sirius the godfather of their first child. *sigh* perfect addition.

You my dear are a fantastic writer and have done a wonderful job with this story as well as your others. Even if you don't update or write for a while, I'll be checking up quite frequently to see if you have. This story was wonderful from beginning to end. Great job. :)

S2 S2,
Until next time,
~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: Sorry, I just... haven't been writing as often as I'd like to. I don't want to be one of those authors that writes a chapter and then leaves the story sitting for months, then comes back with another chapter because I think that's mean.

:D Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I did wonder if I was making it too fast, but then decided that she'd been secretly in love with him for a while and was just too oblivious to realize it. :D

Yeah, I just had to throw that in there, just for my own personal satiafaction. :D

I thank you very much and would like to add that you are a wonderful writer yourself. I hope I'll be able to get something out there for you, but not until I have a few chapters for some of the beginnings of stories I have written.

Thank you!!!

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AH!! Gin-gin!! My goodness.
I'm speechless. SOMEONE HAS CANCER! I seriously thought it was her and it was going to turn into a walk to remember sort of story and I nearly had a heart attack.
I absolutely loved Draco in this chapter. He was rude and unpleasant but knew he was doing so and didn't want to continue to hurt her. Pretty much how I picture him in my head as well. Gah!! That's all I can say. I can't wait for the next chapter of this. And Ship of Dreams!! Grrr update woman! S2
~Mischief_managed18

P.S. Fallin' is going into the queue today! There will most likely be this one, one more chapter, and an epilogue. *sigh* my baby is coming to a close.
Love you an your brilliant writing!

Author's Response: Mischief! Im speechless because your speechless! I KNOW! WHO COULED IT BE! No it isnt her, theres enough fics like that. Im actually watching a walk to remember right know. ITS SO SAD! D: I love him too! I kind of hate myself for making them suffer. WE PICTURE DRACO THE SAME. The next chapter is half way done and 2000 words! Its gonna be my longes chapter! Then Ill update Ship of Dreams. S2, much love, Gin-gin Ps. Yay! But only 3 chapters left! :( I love your writing too! Much love again, S2 S2 Gin-gin

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Gah... this chapter was so sad...
I think you did a wonderful job. The whole part with Remus and the whole funeral scene was done brilliantly. Not over the top sad, just right. And her routine afterwards seemed fitting. I know I would be acting the same way if I were in her shoes. Poor thing. I couldn't even imagine. GAHHH
Thank god Sirius wasn't in charge of planning her outfit. Yay for Marly.
Her telling Alice must've taken a lot of courage, especially after it'd been so long. :/
And Sirius! Oh my bloody god, locking them in what I'm assuming is a closet or something along those lines?! WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN!? AH I CAN'T WAIT!
I love you. You're brilliant and you did a wonderful job with this chapter. Keep up the good work.
~Mischief_managed18

Author's Response: :D Thank you very much. Your review made me happy!
I was hoping that was going to seem alright because I've never been to a funeral except when I was about 7, and I wasn't paying uch attemtion because I didn't know the person.
I know, I would be acting that way too. D'X
Yeah, but you have to admit, that's totally something Sirius would do. Both the outfit, and the closet.
YOU'LL JUST HAVE TO WAIT AND SEE! MWAHAHAHAHA!!!

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Oh my goodness my dear. You've done it again. Written another brilliant chapter. I absolutely loved it! Gahhh Dom can't get over Aidan. I love them together. Poor Aidan. :/ But gah!! AGGY AND JAMES. OH MY ROWLING I LOVE THOSE TWO. Gahh. That's all I have to say. GAH!!
I love you. I love this story. You're amazing. That is all.
~Mischief_managed18

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