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7th August 2010:
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{reviewid: 2377075, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
12th July 2010:
omg so funny. i want more.
Author's Response: thanks! i'm writing more now :)
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{reviewid: 2377073, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
12th July 2010:
omg thats so funny. i kept busting out in random laughter. i look forward to more
Author's Response: thanks so much! more is on the way :)
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{reviewid: 2367134, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
24th June 2010:
yay! a new chapter. i like it. keep em coming (:
Author's Response: Thank you. I certainly will :D --Jenna
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{reviewid: 2361532, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
14th June 2010:
loving this story so far. it is written appropriately and loyal to the characteristics of the slytherin boys. i feel like im there. brava
Author's Response: Woot! Thank you. I always feel weary writing my Slytherins because even I get the urge to go stereotype on them sometimes -y'know, the Slytherin=bad one- and I really struggle with their balance. --Jenna
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{reviewid: 2361527, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
14th June 2010:
good job with this chapter. and yes i enjoyed the torture of evean rosier. lol
good stuff. i enjoy reading this. hope to see more good stuff from you
Author's Response: Thank you. Well, I hope you continue to enjoy the stuff from me. :D Thank you for all of your time in this. --Jenna
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{reviewid: 2361525, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
14th June 2010:
i like the direction youre going and i think i see anthony's future involvement in the story.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you already see a place for him. --Jenna
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{reviewid: 2361522, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
14th June 2010:
well i like regulus. but i like death eaters the best so go figure. i didnt like the whole snape bashing though ):
otherwise a good story so far
Author's Response: Oh, man if you don't like Snape bashing you're in for some shock later on. As it is planned, I won't ever actually write Snape, so it won't be too harsh. :D Thanks you. --Jenna
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{reviewid: 2361520, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
14th June 2010:
im starting to like this story more and more. good job.
Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate your taking time to review. --Jenna
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{reviewid: 2361519, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
14th June 2010:
very good beginning and i adore you for sticking to a basically canon story line. most people mess it up by going all au on us. good job 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you. While I do like AUs on occassion, I'm not fond of them, so I like to keep things canon within reason. For instance, some things might seem AU a tiny bit, but there is always logical backing for it. :D Thank you for choosing to read and I hope you continue to enjoy. --Jenna
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{reviewid: 2359140, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
9th June 2010:
pretty good story. id like to see it finished of course. but very good. over all i give the whole thing a 9/10
Author's Response: Thank you, it will get finished! (:
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{reviewid: 2359135, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
9th June 2010:
i liked this chapter. mainly because i like dueling in stories lol. very well written so far. i look forward to the rest
Author's Response: Thank you, I rather liked this chapter! (:
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{reviewid: 2359127, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
9th June 2010:
i like the idea of harry being the new dark lord and draco his second. but i dont really like the whole romance angel. i figure the dark lord would frown upon harry having a wife and definitely wouldnt suggest it. i think these fanfics are over saturated with romance anyway. but still i like the story so i guess take it as constructive criticism. 8/10
Author's Response: Well, thank you for reading and thank you for the constructive criticism.
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{reviewid: 2359125, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
9th June 2010:
eh this one was ok. just i didnt really agree with the use of muggle weapons and such seeing the darl lord's hatred of anything to do with muggles. other than that a good story.
Author's Response: Voldemort doesn't protest to how Harry gets the job done, just that he does.
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{reviewid: 2359123, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
9th June 2010:
wow i like this. its a cool change of pace from other stories. i like the idea of voldemort taking harry to raise rather than the whole enemy thing. good start i look forward to reading it all. my only gripe is the fact that it's a bit short. but thats ok. lol
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2359120, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
9th June 2010:
oooh i really like this story. it is very well written and does a good job getting into its characters minds. id like to see it finished. (: 10/10
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{reviewid: 2358734, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
8th June 2010:
very good story. i like how you portrayed lord voldemort. all i ever see are romances with him and none like this. 10/10
well done
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{reviewid: 2357846, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
6th June 2010:
that was a pretty good story. i think you should do a sequel. maybe make a normal story then towards the middle it turns absurd lol good story
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{reviewid: 2357806, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
6th June 2010:
i like where its going and also i like the change of pace in this chapter. funny to normal in one move. bravo. lol
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{reviewid: 2357799, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
6th June 2010:
still pretty funny lol
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{reviewid: 2357798, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
6th June 2010:
omg that was so funny. i was laughing out loud alot and people were looking at me weiurd lol. but i dont care its funny as hell. im reading it all. i hope its all as funny as this opening chapter
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{reviewid: 2356970, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
5th June 2010:
wow this was amazing. i actually teared up while reading it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2356213, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
4th June 2010:
i found this to be brilliantly written and a very good read. you can feel the emotion in the story.
wonderful piece. 10/10
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{reviewid: 2355980, reviewer: 'richard_snape'}
3rd June 2010:
i really like the beginning. it makes me want to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks. Hope you like the succeeding chapter too
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