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Review #1, by HermioneJadeZabini:

20th April 2012:
Just so everyone knows, I am waiting on my beta for chapters 14 and 15

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Review #2, by HermioneJadeZabiniThe Potions Master's Daughter : Chapter Six: A Propechy Revealed

19th March 2010:
L.
Well, this story is full of raw emotion and it definitely tugs at heartstrings. Wonderful job dear. I can't wait for your next update. I love the changes to hermione's look and I love the triplet idea (great minds think alike, 'eh?). lol. I think Draco's personality is fitting. Btw, nice spin with making Pansy a good person, most stories you find her being.not-so-nice :). Keep up the AMAZING work!
12/10
~Kitty

Author's Response: K.
I'm gonna be re-writing the current chapters to make flow a little better but I'm thankful for you comment.

L.


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Review #3, by HermioneJadeZabiniSimply Irresistible: Gustav

14th March 2010:
holy crap! this is amazing so far!! please hurry! I cant wait for the next chapter! I love the way you brought us up to speed on the camaraderie, but kept it in the same time. Gustav was brilliant and i cant wait for Ron/Sadie reaction!! 100/10!!! Amazing!! Please post next chapter sooon!

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Review #4, by HermioneJadeZabiniAbove the Clouds: Flying

8th March 2010:
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that you have a TON of grammar and spelling issues in your story. I'm up to chapter 28 and it's really confusing sometimes, but I manage to get the gist of it. You really need to carefully read over your story before submitting it.

Other than that, this is an absolutely AMAZING story, it takes my breath away. I had a similar idea for a small part in my story which I recently published, (the flying part, nothing else) So it seems great minds think alike after all, eh? lol. Anyway, I love the way you portray Blaise, he seems very child-like and it suits him. The portrayal of Draco is also very well done, a tormented soul trying to be good. It's perfect. Keep up the good work, just remember to read it over carefully for grammar and spelling issues.
~KittyKiss AKA HermioneJadeZabini

Author's Response: Hey!
Yes, well, English isn't my first language, and therefor the grammar can be quite confusing. I'll have all the chapters edited and beta'ed once I've finished the story, though :)

I'm really glad you're enjoying the story, though! I'm glad you like what I've done to the characters, :)

Thank you,
- Cathy


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Review #5, by HermioneJadeZabiniHardboiled: Hardboiled

22nd September 2009:
damn, that was so funny! it's genious! i laughed so hard i cried. it's like a dective movie gone bad! ha ha!! i love love love it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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