Love it! Write more please, please, please, please, please!!! With sugar on top! I love the story, the characters, and how Rose is coming out of her shell. I really want to read more. If you have a heart you will write. LOLAuthor's Response: Dang! I must not have a heart at the moment! D: haha, loljk. I'm taking a little break from HP fanfics at the moment, but I'll update as soon as I can :)
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Love this story, though I do wish you would update more. Report Review
Love it! Keep writing! 8) Report Review
OMG Freakin' awesome chapter! Wow you are a really good writer worth the wait I absolutely love it! Report Review
About time Teddy broke up with that little ho. Lily is sooo cute! I wish someone would get me a hippogriff. Great chapter!Author's Response: Lol, Victoire is rather evil :P I love lily too, sh eis my absolute favorite charecter! Glad you liked it
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You update like crazy and I love it! Magnificent chapter very well done. I do hate the cliff hanger but I'll probably find out tomorrow! Love your writing! Love the chapter! Great work!Author's Response: lol, thankyou, I am amazed by the super quick validating times too :D I will post the next chapter right now and it should be up by sunday :P Thankyou so much for liking the story so much
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I love it! It's super cute. I don't really think anything was missing from it, I thought that it was really good.Author's Response: Yay! Thank you. :)
Thanks, I wasn't sure myself but if you don't think there's anything mssing then I think I'm just going crazy. :)
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Write more! I love the story it's great! I want some Rose/Scorpius action NOW!Author's Response: Hahaha, thank you so much! Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you're feeling the suspense/tension :) I'll update as soon as I can--I'm really busy with school right now though! Gaahh I wish I had time to update. Report Review
Great chapter, short but Hermione and Draco are finally getting somewhere. I love your story it's so cute. Usually I'm a Rose/Scorpius fan but I love Violet and I love that you gave her a flower name just like her grandmother and great aunt. I really hope to read more of Rose's pregnancy in the next few chapters and I am ecstatic that you update fast. Love it! 10/10Author's Response: Thankyou so much, it's great to get a new reviewer! I am pleased that you like the story and where it's going, as well as my little thing about flower names. This is mainly because I had originally intended to write stories about Rose and Lily (II) as well, but in the end decided not to. I will, however, soon post a new shortish story about Lily, so look out for it :D
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Cute! I wish you would write more!Author's Response: Hello Binka!
Thank you for leaving a review! I will certainly write more ;) Report Review
It's a great chapter. Very funny and your descriptions of James is just how I imagine him, he's just like the original James. I also love that Victoire has black hair, she should have apparent veela genes but they would be too dilluted for her to look just like one. Hermione was good too, she's so controlling. Alot of times authors describe Hermione and Ron's relationship to be very rocky and Hermione is always wrapped up in work and Ron has become unhappy. Your description that they are still happily married is much better. I loved it! Report Review
I loved all of the chapters up until this one, it wasn't that great. The others are filled with emotions but this one just isn't as good as I thought it would be. However, the previous chapters were amazing so I trust that this chapter will lead into a better one. Love the writing and I encourage you to keep writing because the story is FANTASTIC! Report Review
Aww I'm crying! Please finish, please please please! I absoluteley adore your story and I think that building up the relationship from rude aquaintences to best friends was great. I hope that he asks her to the dance soon, or she asks him I don't care I just want them to be together. Rose is absolutely clueless and even though it is a fictional character it is rather comical because there are actually people out there that can't take a hint, it's hilarious. But back to the point, you must post the next chapter or else! I love Rose/Scorpius pairings and yours is just too cute. What I really love is that you stick with that actual family names and don't just make up some random ones! Although I must ask, why does Alice have violet eyes? Or is that just sort of a wizard thing that you came up with, sort of like how Draco has gray eyes when really no one can have actual gray eyes. Finally Scorpius is showing signs of being a Slytherin. When Rose said that he was a Death Eater he took it so personal. Not like he doesn't have a reason to want to take it personally but when he called her a blood traitor, like he just had to get back at her. Anyways I love the story and would very much appreciate it if you were to put up the next chapter NOW!Author's Response: Aw, really? I was hoping that some people would find this sad.
I will, I promise, I can't give it up now. :) Thank you!
I know what you mean! Lol.
Lol,, yeah, I know what you mean about that too! Some people are CLUELESS and it IS funny. :)
Oh God, I could never go off of JK's law. :) It's her world andI love it, if I changed this it wouldn't really be that much of her world. :)
Umm... Interesting quesiton actually. :) I just think that I wanted her to be different. Like, I'm not sure if people noticed but she didn't have any other friends before hand and quickly melted into the group because the other (more judgemental) wizards and witches thought she was strange. Sort of like showing that the Weasleys accept everyone, without is, after all, pretty important for this story. :)
I hope I didn't just confuse you! :)
Yeah, I always imagined that he would take it cooly even though he would still be upset, but, this being Rose, I wanted to show that he definitely takes everything she says seriously, incredibly seriously. And getting back at Rose is sort of like his instincts, especially seeing as how they used to argue a lot before they started this year of Hogwarts. :)
I shall post Chapter 10 ASAP, I think I'll try and get it up tonight, actually, instead of updating my other story (which is in need of updating desperately, but still...). :)
THANK YOU SO SO SO SO SO MUCH FOR THIS TOTALLY AMAZING REVIEW. :)
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I am smiling it was adorable. I think I know who it is. But you never know! Love the chapter!Author's Response: Thanks!
Yeah, you never know do you??
I'm pretty sure you know on this one, but it's still good to be doubtful!
Thanks so much for the review!
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Yay! I'm so glad you added another chapter! I love it. It's like they are finally realizing that they have feelings for each other. It's so cute.Author's Response: yep thats what i was going for! keep on reading, and thanks so much for the review! Report Review
I like the story, but you should've looked up the Weasley family tree. The Weasleys have more than enough cousins to add as characters for instance George marries Angelina Johnson and they have Fred and Roxanne, Bill and Fleur have Victorie, Dominique and Louis, Percy marries Audrey and they have Molly and Lucy, Neville marries Hannah Abbott and Luna marries Rolf Scamander and their children are Lorcan and Lysander Scamander. I LOVE that Arthur gave Rose an iPod that was cool. I will add to faves, it's a good story I anticipate more chapters.Author's Response: Ah... yeah, sorry about that. I thought maybe someone would realize that it doesn't follow JKR's format, but you're the first so far. I know all about the family tree (know it by heart, kind of), but I wanted to improvise on this one... It's a fanfiction, after all. :] Thanks for favorite-ing and all! Report Review
Wow! This is so great. Very interesting. The plot is amazing. Please write more!! This is amazing, it's like the Founders era is repeating itself. I love it!!! Report Review
Please put the next chapter up! I want to know what happens at the dance and with the rest of the games!!! Please write more! I will love you forever!! Great job :)Author's Response: haha thanks so much! don't worry I have a lot written in advance, I hope you stay with me through this! Report Review
Oh my freaking God! I'm crying. Seriously, crying. You have to write more. Your story is amazing. I am totally in love with it. You write so beautifully. When Rose felt sad I felt sad, when she felt happy or nervous I felt the same way. It is undoubtedly the best Rose/Scorpius fan fic I've ever read. Most of them are just love and romance but yours has conflict. Not just Romeo and Juliet style conflict but actual conflict. It's exciting. I adore it. Please finish it. Everything in this story is amazing I love it. I can't say it enough. It's just so extraordinary.Author's Response: Yay! :D Best review ever! Thanks so much and no worries I will totally keep writing it's people like you that keep me going ha! XD Report Review
I like it. Write more! Report Review
Yay another chapter!!! Bless you! Keep writing now it's getting really good. I love this story. It's about time Al and Lily try and help them.Author's Response: Ahahaha I've started the next chapter already, but I have a one shot to go in. I'll try to update soon!!! Report Review
That's so cute. I wish you would've written more though. Report Review
Not to be mean, but none of this made any sense at all.Author's Response: Well, with the H/D, you would have to read "The Black Rose" or something of their romance to understand it. And with Scorpius...well, sometimes you feel like sitting down and sorting out your worries, like starting school. He was just having one of those "thinking" moments. Report Review
That was adorable! Sooo cute:) Report Review
Cute, I love the vegetarian thing :)Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D Report Review
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