Hey, the story was pretty good, and I loved the ending. I think it could've been a little longer just because of the plot line, but otherwise, good! You should write a sequel with that happened to the husband. Report Review
The ending was confusing! Will there be another installemnt? Report Review
AWW! That story was just beautiful!Author's Response: Thank you; that means a lot since this is the second version of it. Before this was posted I wrote the same story, but it didn't save and was lost somewhere in my computer so this is my re-write of it. :) Much love, BritishBoysLover Report Review
I liked it, but the fight scene and the many times Ron wanted to tell Hermione were drawn out a bit. Report Review
I like it! You should write a sequel to this if you already haven't! Report Review
LOVED it! That was excatly what i thought would happen! Keep writing! Report Review
I loved this story! This genre is my all time fave, and this story excelled! Please write more like this one, HaHaURTall! Report Review
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