AW this is so funny. This is more 'real' to read than other stories who are all like "we made love, it was perfect." It's never perfect.
Awesome, as always.

ilj.

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I'm writing a review for the last few chapters. I read them on my phone (yes, I was that desperate!) and the reviews wouldn't 'load' or 'submit' so here's my apology review.

However. Calliope's birthday was wonderful. Though only the main points were elaborated, the love and adoration that Remus has for her was obvious and the gift was a delight to read about.

Now, the big 'L' word. I almost shook with anticipation. Calliope's 'love speech' as she called it was brave and sincere and she's come out of her shell and it's so exciting to read! Remus kissing her was perfect and how she grudgingly accepted it interrupting her speech was adorable and 'couply'.

It's been nice reading about Melody finding out and being concerned with Calliope's relationship with Remus - and for all of the Marauders + girlfriends being outside the Hospital Wing for her. It was very cute and well written.

Finally, the flashbacks with Anna have made me well up, though they aren't even sad. To have Calliope remembering the sweet yet precious time she had with Anna was lovely to read and I'm glad you added some information about her previous personality and characteristics when you had the chance.

The past few chapters have flown really well and I'm still inevitably hooked. Can't believe there's only 3 more chapters and an epilogue! I'm jumping straight onto your other pieces of writing as soon as this one has finished.

Seriously? This story is incredible, my first Remus/OC and I can definitely say I will be reading a lot more of them in the future.

ilj.

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This. Was. Amazing.

Have to say, have waited a few chapters to review because I literally couldn't stop - had to read more! Calliope getting the courage before Remus = amazing. I love them together.

How cute is this chapter though. And the Marauders finding out. I'm literally grinning. Adore everything about this story.

ilj.

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad to hear you got caught up in it. So glad you like the story! It means so much to me.

Maisy

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LOVE. LOVE. LOVE.

ilj.

Author's Response: Yay! So glad.

Maisy

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I love this chapter. I love Remus. I love you for creating it.

ilj.

Author's Response: Whoop! Glad you like it. It was a foxy chapter if I do say so myself.

Maisy

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CHAPTER 11.
WONDERFUL.
I smiled the whole way through.
It's 22 minutes past midnight, and I can't wait to read more.

ilj.

Author's Response: I really like this chapter a lot too. It was super fun to write!

Thank you!
Maisy

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I LOVE SIRIUS BLACK.
This chapter proves it.

ilj.

Author's Response: Hahaha. Right on. He's great!

Maisy

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Remus' POV is very intelligent and well written - I love seeing his concern for Calliope. I'm genuinely wishing for Calliope, Lily and Melody to be good friends and for Emmeline to fall off the Astronomy tower. Love you work.

ilj.

Author's Response: I really enjoy Remus. Especially when he can be rational and Calliope cannot. That's a big difference between them that doesn't get noticed too much. Remus is very open but very thoughtful. Calliope is very guarded and very emotion driven.
ANYWAYS. Glad you enjoy the story!

Maisy

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ADORE this chapter. Such an original idea about using the Prefects' bathroom for late night swims. Lovely idea. LOVE the cupboard scene too.

ilj.

Author's Response: Awww yay! This chapter was embarrassingly girly for me, but I'm so glad it's been fun for everyone reading. Thanks!

Maisy

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I loved this chapter. Saw your warning in the previous chapter about reviews but I had to leave one. Calliope is a beautiful representation of a character, you should be proud. I can't wait to read the rest and see how this all pans out! :)

ilj.

Author's Response: Aw thank you! I really appreciate it. And look! Two years later your review get's answered after all.

Maisy

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Aw! I enjoyed this - very cute. Cliffhanger ending though - but we all know she loves him - hence the general Harry Potter world we all live in. Seriously lovely though, this has made my day :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) You review in turn has made my day! :)
I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
xx P2P

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Oh my gosh I didn't even look into any of that and think she'd be PREGNANT. Wow, nice touch! Love this story, thanks for the update :) x

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I think this is wonderful.

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Aw this was a lovely chapter - she's so funny and hormonal!I personally think it would be perfect if they had twin girls - Oliver would spoil them rotten and they'd be his little girls - awh, it would be adorable! Then Kenna could be all cool and think about having rhyming names for twins - Daisy and Maisy, Jen and Hen, Sara and Tara.. The list goes on. Awesome story, btw! x

Author's Response: Thank you! Haha. Ollie as a father. You're right. He would spoil his baby girls. It would exasperate Kenna to no end, but he'd do it. :)

Hahahahaha. Well. I already have names picked out, both first and middle. The middle names are sort of rhyme-y, but the first names definitely have a sort of theme. It'll be more obvious once the children are born. :)

I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing!

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This chapter was adorable - they're both so sweet together. Both erratic and pure nutcases, but that's the beauty! I'm adoring this sequel :) xx

Author's Response: Thank you! That's a great part of why I love them so much. I'm so glad you're enjoying it, and I hope you continue to do so!

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I love this - it's quirky and nice with lots of hidden things that I'm already hoping will come true ;)

Author's Response: Hahaha, thanks again. I'm glad you're enjoying it, and thanks for reviewing!

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Already, I'm in love! Can't wait to read the rest x

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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I love this
She thinks like me and my best friend do
It's awesome
10/10

Author's Response: That's actually a little scary that there are people who think like Susie :D But yeah, I know what you mean. Susie is VERY loosely based on a close friend of mine. VERY loosely.

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mm, sirius black. thats my idea of a good wedding:)

Author's Response: Yeah, I'll never be able to think about weddings like before.

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I LIVE IN BRISTOL, IT'S AWESOME :O
i like this story :)
x

Author's Response: You DO!? :D Oh my GAWD, seriously!? I'm so sorry if I've totally made it all wrong, even if there's not much about Bristol in this story, just mentioned. BUT STILL :D How is it in Bristol?

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This was beautiful
I love the whole 'Scorpius sucks' image - love isn't always ladida :)
Perfect
10/10

Author's Response: Awe, thanks so much for the lovely review :)

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Perfect chapter, as always.

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The layout rocks. Where is the pic of Sirius though?! Surely there should be one?! :(
This was a lovely chapter, again. I love this story :)

Author's Response: I keep refreshing it because every time I do a new character comes up. I didn't see Hermione until I logged on this morning and I'd been messing with it a lot yesterday, ,so you never know. You'll probably just look up one time you're on and there he'll be! Thanks!

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Still as fantastic as ever :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it :)

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LOL
I actually love this. Hahahahhaa!
What an awesome idea!
x

Author's Response: Haha, sadly, the ideas aren't mine; they belong to every person who's ever written a story with one or more (more like twelve) of these cliches and been serious about it.

Thanks for reviewing!

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