You have written a GREAT story here. I've been engrossed in it for a few hours now. [[Ever though I have to get up in less than six hours!]] I do have a few questions though.
When the war is brought up for one thing. I know that Remus and Sirius's second fight brought along the whole issue of Vampires vs. Werewolves, but I thought it was mentioned that Artifex declared that there would be a truce? Then after the vamp hunter shot Sirius...the war is back on again? I was a little bit confused about that.
Secondly, is Sirius not mourning his friends? Not in the sense that they are dead, but as he is missing them. Are they corresponding in anyway? Why has he not expressed any more urges to go back to Hogwarts?
Thirdly (?), what happened to Tacitus's wife, Beth? How did she die?
Sorry..I was full of questions!!! Again, you have written a riveting story and I can't wait to read more! I love to read different people's takes on Vampires and how they live and such. It's amazing:)Author's Response: :D Thanks for such an amazing review!!
Right, questions, I'll answer as best as I can but often even I don't know what's actually going on with the charcaters; often-times they have minds of their own :D
The war. Well, basically vampires like fighting, and they hate the werewolves so it seems like a brilliant idea to them to fight WITH the werewolves. Artifex, however, is not impressed by this idea and tries as best she can to stop a war from happening. However, although he is very influential, once the vampires decide to do something, they are very likely going to do it. Artifex tried to call a truce but it has been stirring for a long time and he's now accepted that there's nothing he can do and so the war is approaching fster now. < Hope that helped :)
Sirius. Ah...well, he doesn't really miss his friends at the moment because he's very preoccupied with the vampires and the coven; he finds them very interesting and so he is kept busy. Also, he and James did not part company on the best of footing so Sirius is trying not to think of them. As well as that, the story isn't real time and in the moments where SIrius isn't actually in the chapters I'm sure he is missing them, but he tries to hide it. To be honest, it's mainly because there's a lot for him to do so he has less time to dwell :)
And Beth. Hmmm...I'm not entirely sure about her. I said before that the characters have minds of their own and it's very much like they're real in my mind. I generally don't find stuff out unless one of them 'tells' me. It sounds crazy, I guess, but that's how I write. So I'm not sure about Beth because Tacitus never mentioned her, and now he can't however I'm fairly certain that Tacitus was in some way responsible for her death...Maybe he tried to turn her but didn't manage? I'm not sure, to be honest :) Useless, aren't I? *sighs*
lol, anyway I hope I helped, at least somewhat, and if you have anymore questions feel free to ask! I don't really think about them because my friend Jess and I are always discussing them, so on our end all of the questions are covered :D Report Review
You've taken this story to places I never would have imagined.it is an absolutely great story and you are a splendid writer!!! Report Review
What a GREAT story!!! I'm loving everything about it! I just love Draco's attitude about everything. How he's so nonchalant about some things and just horrified at others. I love the Weasley's rescue mission for Hermione, the Dark Mark banner, the fact that Ginny has apparently become a death eater, and ya know, the whole Draco Chosen One thing. ABSURD! And the fact that Draco thinks Hermione's biggest problem with the engagement is that he didn't officially propose!!! Just hilarious!!! And I, for some morbid unknown reason, love that Harry is trying to kill himself off every other minute and hardly anyone notices!!! I have been laughing so hard I was crying at some parts. I was very unsure if I even wanted to start the story, it just didn't really seem my type, but I am so glad I did!!! Wow, sorry about the rambling. I blame it on the lateness of the hour. Anywho, I can not wait to read more!!! Report Review
FABULOUS fabulous story!!! I absolutely loved it! And for some reason I really liked the "new and improved" Lucius. Just a great story all around!!!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the new Lucius lol I know he was ridiculous and not at all like the real one, but this is fanfiction after all, right? ;)
Thank you again for the lovely review! Report Review
I'm loving it so far! You are right, the whole 13 year old thing is hard to imagine but people can cope through amazingly tough things so its believeable! Will we learn about Ambers parents and where they are soon? Can't wait for the first encounter with the marauders! Its sure to be worth it!!! :)Author's Response: Well it affects Amber alot (the 13 year old thing)... but she obviously has alot of stuff to deal with... you know, having a kid and all. But later on she confieds in someone (not telling who) and you find out about her rents, and rebecca: the early years. Thanks for the review I look forward to many more.
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Oh my what a wonderful story!!!
As sad as I am that Sirius died, I can't WAIT for Aurelia and Sirius's reunion, as well as his and Regulus's reunion also!
That will probably be the one to make me cry because I've come close to it in all four chapters!!!
This is a great storyline and I can't wait to read more!!!
It is so very intriguing.
And also incredibly original, I've yet to come across a story on hpff like it!!!
Till next chapter!!!
:)Author's Response: thank you very much! and thanks for the 10/10! :)
the chapter on Sirius' reunion with Aurelia will actually be a bit delayed, because I'm currently starting to outline their relationship in life in my other story, Moonlight, and then of course I'm planning companion fic to that point in Moonlight for a more in-depth story of their relationship in life called Aurelia (which has not been posted yet, because I have not yet begun it) but anyhow, kind of wanted to get that out first before posting their reunion in THIS story, because then I feel like it'd be happier to see the happy ending AFTER they've already seen the painful separation. but, not to worry, it will definitely be a chapter worth waiting for! Report Review
Wow. This clearly took a lot of planning out and I love it! I happen to be quite the Dramione fan BUT I really like your storyline. I love an evil Draco!!! Which is kinda ironic because of the whole Dramione thing. Wow I'm rambling!The story is so descriptive (sp?) and intriguing, I can't wait to get more! Although the whole time travel thing is clearly hurting my head because it is so late ( 3am in fact). But i'm sure I'll figure it all out! You are a great writer and I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
I can totally see Voldy doing something as effed up as that! And what happened to Scorpius!? He clearly disappeared!Author's Response: Ahh, the Scorpius mystery is another little storyline, coming in about 2 chapters time.
Its nice for someone to appriciate just how long it took to make it work lol!
Thanks a million; please keep reading! Report Review
Wow. This is an amazing story! I'm so confused but i can't stop reading! I've never read a story like it. It is wonderful! Can't wait for more!!!Author's Response: Thank you!
I've never read a story like it.
That's just what I like to hear. :D Report Review
Very interesting story! I've never read one like it. As for some ideas...definately the Marauders! Well other than Peter of course because you've already covered him. Especially with Sirius coming from a dark pureblood family and Remus being a werewolf. Those kinds of things definately would have come into play!!! Again, great story and I can't wait to read more!!! :)Author's Response: I'm definitely planning to write about Remus and Sirius, so thanks for your suggestions! I really appreciate your review!!! Report Review
Wow. That is probably one of the most compelling stories I have read on this site. It was fabulous!!! Sooo many twists and turns. Just when you think you know whats going to happen...something completely different does. And here i thought halfway through I could never think of Draco the same again...instead he did rise up! Again, great story. You are a fantastic writer. Keep it up!!! I'm looking forward to more!!! Report Review
Oh god...the thought of Draco as a "mini-human" is HILARIOUS! I was laughing so hard that whole chapter!!! What a fantastic story!!!Author's Response: thank you it was hard to write that chapter as i couldn't stop laughing! so funny isn't it? i'm glad you like the story so far! emma :) Report Review
A great new chapter!!! I LOVED the Draco as Mione's pillow part...hilarious!!! Can't wait for more!!!Author's Response: hehe :) Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story so much! It means a lot to me to get such great feedback! Will update ASAP! Report Review
Absolutely love the story! Can't wait for more...its completly addicting!!! I love the Dramione encounters like in Hermione's room...they are hilarious!!!Author's Response: I know. Thanks. Loves. Report Review
What a great story!!! This was actually one of the first few stories I started to read when I signed up here and I have followed to the end! It was so beautifully written and the ending was fabulous!!! Keep it up!!!Author's Response: Thank you for reading and sticking with the story til the last chapter.
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Of course it's good enough to continue!!! And you had better!! :) It really is a great start to the second part of your story. I can't wait to see what sorts of things happen as Sera & Co. return to school!!! Can't wait for more...Author's Response: Thanks so much. I will. Report Review
What a GREAT story!!! I've read it up to chap. 24 in one sitting and I can't wait to read more. I also absolutely LOVE your banner!!! It's gorgerous!!! I can't wait for the upbringing of Hogwarts! :) You are a great writer!!!Author's Response: Thank you. You must love the story to have read all that in 1 go! Well, the banner is all thanks to marauderbynight :) Thanks so much for your review! Report Review
Great story!!! It is beautifully written and I can't wait to read more!!! Thanks for a great story!!!
10/10 of course :)Author's Response: Thanks so much. Report Review
Another great chapter!!! Can't wait to see what the theatre production will be about...
I would love to be apart of the mailing list. My e-mail is Ashleylynne87@yahoo.com
Thanks so much!!!
10/10 yet again!!! :)Author's Response: awww! Thanks again! Really glad you like it so much and thanks you for the awesome review and rating! I'll add your e-mail add to the list and will keep you up to date on the progress of the story! Report Review
So effin absurd...All of it. But still a GREAT and HILARIOUS story. Freakin awesome!!! Congrats on a fabulous story!!!
10/10Author's Response: LOL! Thank you! I need to write another insane one, I think. Report Review
Awesome AWESOME story. I love reading stories of the wilder side of the Hogwarts girls, afterall they can't have been goody two shoes their whole school career!!! Haha. Can't wait to read more!!! Report Review
"You were mine first."
What a line!!!
Whatever will Blaise do?!? And the thing is...I don't even know who I want to be together!!! Fabulously written story!!! I've been reading it all day and I love it!!! I can't get enough!!! A good birthday story...(its my bday clearly haha) Yet again, I love the last line!!!
Def 10/10 :)
Can't wait for an update!!!Author's Response: xD thanks!!
what will Blaise do. what a good question. lol.
I'm so glad i made your birthday! happy birthday dear! Report Review
Great story...again haha. You are a great great writer!!! I can't wait to read more. And at least i'm not confused (yet) like usual haha. Update soon :)
10/10!!!Author's Response: i hope you don't get confused at all when you read my story, if you do please just email me at email@example.com and I will do my best to explain things to you. Report Review
OMG What a beautiful story!!! By the end I was crying many happy tears!!! You are a great writer!!! It was just absolutly wonderful!!! You def get 10/10 :)
BTW: I absolutly LOVE how you made Draco a Veela. Because it's so believeable, I mean the whole holier than thou attitude j.k.r brings to life in the books, the stunning good looks with the blonde and perfect body and such and lastly the flaring temper. I can completly see him being a Veela. I love that you recognized that!!!
I can't wait to read your third story!!!Author's Response: Ah, that is so sweet, I am glad that you liked the story so much. The part of making Draco a Veela was something I sort of just threw in there at the last moment, but then once it was out there my mind went crazy with ideas of how to make it work. I am so glad that you liked the story, i hope you will read the third story, it's called We're Finally Home. Report Review
okay so i'm probably just missing something but i'm reallly confused as to what happened when Mione and Pansy went to lunch. Crabbe wasn't there? She made the bet with Draco? Because I thought that the bet was made during like lunch in the Great Hall or something...i'm just really confused :) But other than that it is a great great story!!! I really love it!!! I can't wait till I read the sequel!!
10/10Author's Response: the way the story was told when Draco told it was wrong, he couldn't or didn't want to remember what he had done, but he is the one who made the bet with pansy. Report Review
What a great story! By the time I got to the end I was laughing so hard I was crying!!! Just imagining all this was great. Can't wait for the rest!!! Report Review
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