Poor Hermione :(

10/10
Great chapter!

Can't wait to read what happens next!
-xoxo-Liza

Author's Response: i know, haha. thanks!

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Great chapter!
keep up the good work.
10/10
-xoxo-Liza

Author's Response: No problem doll!

Thanks for the R/R!

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Ahh...best chapter ever!

Previews are evil, particulary good ones... needless to say I can't wait to read what you come up with next!

You still rock my socks!
10/10
-xoxo-Pink

Author's Response: aw thanks!!! hahah. =]

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"oh poo" I say it about a hundred times a day... and then you used it in your story and it made me laugh (srry that was really random)

Despit the fact that James and Lily have managed to piss each other off...again it was a very good chapter.

I still don't know how your sneak peak makes me feel. Actually i am rather worried about it : (

10/10
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
-xoxo-PINK

Author's Response: Hehe, well you know 'oh poo' just has so many contextual uses! I usually say it in the presense of teachers so I don't get in trouble, but I suppose Lily used it to herself! Yes, pissing each other off, its so silly, I wonder when they will finally just get on (ok well I DO know hehe)! Hmm yes, next chapter starts off quite intense, that's all I'll say! Thanks for the lovely review xxx

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Another glorious chapter!

Personally I thought the fight between J & A was much needed. And I thought that you did a fab. job with it... it is hard to write those kinds of things without getting OOC. You did a great job with writing the fight from both perspectives.

Well anyway, you still rock my socks!
10/10

-xoxo-PINK

Author's Response: aw thanks!! i know, i know, it was hard to write. thanks!!!

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One of the best stories I have seen in a while

11/10

Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more!
-xoxo-PINK

Author's Response: Wow! Thankyou! And thanks for the *high* rating!!! ^_^ Updating after exams!!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Lv Wizardora

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Hmmm... I still don't know what to think.

Your story line is great and well thought out. And your writing is descriptive and deep.

I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!
-xoxo-PINK

Author's Response: Aww thanks love! Well I don't know what to tell you to think? LOL but I'm glad you like it, and more is on it's way, i promise!!

Thanks for the R/R!

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Yeah I got the first review!

I have a feeling this story is going to get pretty interesting

Great chapter I can't wait to read more!
10/10-xoxo-PINK

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yeah, this story is definitely going to get even better with each chapter. I'm glad you liked it so far. ~Jen

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Another wonderful chapter!

keep up the good work. I can't wait to read some more

10/10 -xoxo-PINK

Author's Response: aww thanks!

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I hate you and I love you at the same time.
But I won't lie, I would have done the same thing :)
Great chapter!
10/10 -xoxo-PINK

Author's Response: Aw well, sorry about that :D Hehe yeah, I had to do a cliffhanger, or else the next chapter would blend into this one and it would've been too much action all in one go ;) Thanks for the review xxx

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Okay i must confess that i am 100% hooked.
I will be your devoted reader untill the end...
Your writing still blows my mind. Keep up the good work!
11/10 -xoxo-Pink

Author's Response: aww thanks!!!! YAY! aww thats so nice. =D !!

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hmm... I am intrigued. Sounds like a great start to a story! I love your writing style and can't wait to read more!
10/10 -xoxo-Pink

Author's Response: haha. thanks!!! =D

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Very nice! I can't wait to read more of your writing.
Keep it up :)
-PINK

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I have 25 or so other stories ranging in ships. I do hope you get a chance to read some more.

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21/10 is what i would give you if i could. You are a wonderful writed and i hope to read more of your stuff

Author's Response: Thanks hun :) Glad you liked it - and please do read more, I'd love to hear your thoughts.

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Not the kind of story i normally read but now you have me hooked. I am interested to see where this goes. You are doing a great job, Keep it up!

Author's Response: =D Yay!!
I'm thrilled that you're hooked =]
Thanks muchly for the review

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I have to give you two thumbs up for the Quidditch scene; I know first hand how difficult it is to write a quidditch match. You did a fabulous job and I can't wait to read more.

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I loved it from the beginning and had to force myself to stop reading so I could get to my classes on time. I give you an A++ for sticking close to JKRs original story line and still making it your own! Cant wait to read more, GREAT JOB!

Author's Response: Well thank you very much! I do try to, I don't like it when people change it because it just doesn't seem possible in my mind- like if I'm reading a J/L and there's mention of a hair straightener, then I'll refuse to read the rest! Thanks for stopping by to review xxx

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i LOVED it! Great job! I can't wait to read more of your work!

Author's Response: thank you!

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I am in awe! wonderful job!

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OMG had to read it twice just to make sure i took in its complete greatness. Great Job!

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