OMG! How could you leave it like that? Now I have to wait until you update to find out about Lee. No!
Brillent chapter as always. I feel so sorry for Lee I really do- I know bastian is not a bad guy (like Roger wasn't) but i don't like him. and as I didnt like roger purly because he got in the way of dliver and Jane- I hate bastian for getting in between Lee and Alicia!
When he was talking about settling down i was thinking the same as jane Hook, Line and sinker! I was like- "why did he have to go and say that!" I LOVED how jane tried to redirect the conversation lol but it was too late- he had said it.
I live oliver and I though it was quite brillient that you made him chuck everyone in the water and Bastian didnt join in and he knew that! ADORED that!
And when Bastian was reading poetry i was come on give me a break lol. its all so well writen. I LOVE IT! YOU'RE STORY IS THE BEST!
What do I thinks going to happen? Hm... tricky... I think it'll get very awqward. Poor Lee will just take it while everyones there because hes Lee but He might get angry/and or hurt that bastians there with everyone and NOONE told him, and the fact that he had flowers at the ready made me want to melt in sympathy for him. its so sweet like a little puppy labrador its not FAIR! lol.
Keep it up.
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PPS. The Bastian image is really hot actually!Author's Response: I know what you mean about Bastian. He really is a good guy, but you can't help but feel a little irritation in his direction because of how happy Alicia was before. But it's her choice so she has to pick who makes her the happiest I suppose, whether or not that's Lee. Poor Alicia.
I'm glad you picked up on all that characterization. I do love my charries. :) And I think you're very right on the "awkward" position. Yeah. Things are going to get weird. And amusing. And sort of crazy. Yeah, that's the next chapter in three sentences. But chapter 6 is actually one of my favorites because of the emotion in it so you'd better enjoy it...but that's for another week and a half :)
ps. SORRY! I will today, I promise! :)
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Hi I thought I'd write another Review!
He turned around, annoyed since he was about to blow the whistle and let the first four into the air. “Bloody WHAT?”
“Where’s your broom?” asked the girl with the sign.
I blushed and quickly hid it behind my back.
I ADORED THAT QUOTE! One again you have created an amazingly flawless chapter. with great characterisation, scinarios and of course along ith Janes ever-sarcastic ever-halerious ever-witty remarks which I have always loved! and you know that already. I think it was just pefect how you got oliver to lead her his brrom.
It shows just how much he cares i he trusts her so much with his perfect broom. I love him and i love his charcter.
I felt a bit sorry for jane in this one becayse if it was ame I'd be petrified. but we all know it for the best and that she loves it all really so it all good! i'm hooked to all your stories.
So keep up the hard work! Never give up on them. Update all of them as quickly as you have been and I promice to read them to the end.
Its clear that you are a talented writter and should contiiue till the very end. thank you for all your support and the lovly chapters i can always read!
Number One review,
PS READ YOURM EMAILS :) lolAuthor's Response: Thanks so much, you're the best :) That chapter was so much fun to write because I had no idea yet what I wanted to do with Jane and Oliver's relationship. Especially in terms of what eventually developed out of it. I'm so glad you liked it. I adore jane's humor...which is why it's still in the sequel haha. Thanks! And I'll check my email asap! Report Review
nice chappy! i've responded to your review FYIAuthor's Response: thanks *grin*
i LOVE your story "all was well" !!!
it's great! can't wait for the next chapie, but i really do hate astoria :D:D
thanks again for the review, i really appreciate it! Report Review
Hello, it's maria! We're the hell are you! I need to talk to you because we're gonna loose readers if we dont update sooon! And I dont know whether or not I should write the rest of the chapter and send it in myself or not! I nkow you're busy so this might sound totally unreasonable lol... and I'm not angry or anything we just need to sort something out so that we know where we both stand at all times (writing time wise) andyway i ope you get this!
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I really love this story and you know that!
I think its a very realistic take of what happned that night and you really captured the emotion and actions of the characters, in a beliveable way, while still allowing humour.
And i've emailed you by the way- please get back on that!
Continue to right!
Thanks babe... Am nearly finished with the final installment now. Glad you enjoyed it...
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Love this story! The plot is really very good! I hope Ron and Hermione find her BEFORE the wedding and baby so they can help her through it all and maybe Scorpius should move in with them! That would be my dream come true for this story! if they marry before ron and hermione find them i'll be very dipressed and you wouldn't want that lol! Great story, keep up the good work and update SOON! IF you have the time take a look at our story! Thanks UPDATE!Author's Response: lol sorry but that part of the story is already written so prepare to be depressed lol. i will check out your story cos i always look at new fanfics and i will review as part of my new policy lol Report Review
I love it especially the third chpater- that was my favourite. You must update more often lol it took a long time for this one to get up! I LOVE IT!
If you're still in the need of a banner email me what you want at...
Look foward to your much waited update!
MeNuncle! Author's Response: haha thanks yeah im sooo sorry about the wait it got rejected the first time so i had to send it back in bleh...
3rd chapter was my favorite to write =]
and ill get back to you on that banner thank you =] Report Review
Love the story! Love it- and i would love to make a banner if you like! if you want me to email me at email@example.com thank you for a good read- update asap!
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