omg really good story. i was nearly crying. Amazing descriptions. please update soon

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Next chapter is in as soon as the queue opens :D

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That was so, so sad. You really hate Karlie, for what she's doing, but feel bad because she has a problem. Poor Kadyn... she must feel so sad.

Author's Response: I know. I can't stand Karlie, btw. I just can't. LOL Even though she's my own OC, I just hate her. She just can't die quick enough! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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seriously, omg damn. very very well-written. i was absolutely in awe. and your descriptions are just so.. real, in a way. i've got goosebumps and tears in my eyes now.

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heh, great work, poor Karlie, is she really going to be pregnant,
i don't know if you've heard this song, it's called 'Sophie' and it's by Eleanor Mcevoy, it's really good. It's about a girl who was 19 when she died of anorexia, look it up on youtube, the sims 2 version is really good!
Good luck on ur story

Author's Response: Thank you very much, and I'll do just that :)

Oh, and no, she doesn't get pregnant. xD

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short .but good. very short, by the way. But, i am glad you got this in before it closed. and, by what happened in this chapter, im guessin the next will be very...interesting? im hoping Karlie will confront her sister. hopefully another fight will not break out.

Author's Response: Well, what happens in the next chapter...Eh :/ I know it was short, I'm sorry. But thanks for reviewing!

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kinda short but great as always!!!

her being friends with bella really gives a good twist fyi

UPDATE SOON!
~clover

Author's Response: Well, thank you very much! I know it was short, I apologize -.-

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I actually don't care if it was short, it was still great!
I'm actually getting so addicted to this story, I actually love it
And I really like how you portrayed Bellatrix (not the usual crazy, physcotic bitch that everyone else does)
Pahahaha-> "You're Mum is crazy," she said, emphasizing with her fork. "But, God, do I love that woman."
Absolutely hilarious
xx

Author's Response: Haha, I love Bellatrix, actually. Something about her just intrigues me (and i love that Helena Bonham Carter portrays her) so I like having fun with her ;) I'm soo soo sooo glad you like the story. xD

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I never thought this is the type of story I would read - but it's awesome. (:
I want more lol

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this is making me really, really sad. i want karlie to get better. :(

im just wondering... how do you feel about mirrors in real life? like, are you super opposed to them, or are you just using them as a symbol?

Author's Response: Hmm...Well. Personally, I hate them. Like, I really am opposed to them. However, I do wear makeup and I do do my hair, so I'm being sort of a hypocrite, but I'm not one to sit in front of one and just critique myself. That's just not me. So, I hope I answered your question! :-) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Yay! I was so excited when I saw this story had been updated, I love it!!
Poor Kady/Karlie. I feel bad for Kady who's sister was being a bitch to her but then I feel bad for Karlie who's obviously got an eating disorder and is trying to deny it :[
But in a weird kind of way, I LOVED her fight with Sirius - it was so violent and great :D
Update soon! xx

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Wow, is Kalie going to like become anorexic, and that's how Sirius killed her? I totally agree with Kaly, I hate mirrors, our place has a million of them, and i hate it. Mirrors are cursed, they never let you see what you actually are, no i try to not look at them. They only show you what is wrong with yourself.
Good luck in this fanfic and update soon.

Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see... :-) And I'm so glad you share my point of view! I've never met anyone who thinks that way about a mirror before. It makes me feel not so alone. So thanks for that! Thanks, also, for reading and reviewing!

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fantastic as usual...its really sad though i am guessing she is anorexic or has an eating disorder for the signs in the chapter.

UPDATE SOON!
~clover

Author's Response: Thanks so much! And you'll seee :) -sing song voice- Laaa. Haha, I'm glad you enjoyed it and I will soon!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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oooh, the chapter told alot, but it was SO short. Is that how you planned it to be? Or just wanted to get it out there? I'm just curious, sorry if I offended you or something, it was a nice chapter.

Author's Response: I know, I'm sorry :/ I did plan it that way and I currently have no access to my computer (I'm using one from school) and I haven't had the chance to prolong it. So I'm sorry if it was short :/ I know. I'm sorry. But thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Wow; it's totally awesome =]
I can already sense the tears coming when Karlie dies cos you are just THAT a good a writer
And I love Kady as well
Update soon ;]
10/10
Effy xx

Author's Response: WOW. Thanks so much! I've been having such a crappy day, that totally just made it better :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Asbolutely fantastic. I loved it, it didn't matter that it was short it had such an impact on me anyway. I really like that the person who is telling the story isn't the main character, that she's telling someone elses story. I also like that she hasn't looked in a mirror for thirteen years - it makes me feel for her at once like I know her and knows what she's (her sister) been through. Brilliant.

Author's Response: Wow! You're my favorite new reviewer! Haha. I'm really glad you like the plot and how it's written. And the whole thing with the mirror- I'm really really glad you like that part! I do actually think that some people think I'm weird for picking it apart like I do, but it's just my belief. So, thanks for reviewing!! You really made my day!

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hahahah i love it :)
please update??
with a cherry on top??

Author's Response: Ahem, maybe.? >.

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ahh i love it. soo much i havent been on hpff in forever and i love your stories! :)

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wow. this story is pretty good. i like the plot and i like how you're moving the story along. just it seems that Kadyn is a bit controlling over her older sister. i mean i get that she's overprotective, but it seems like she is gonna go crazy with keeping her sister away from Sirius.

Anyways over all i think it is really good and i'd love to see more of this.

Rosie

Author's Response: Aww Thanks so much! And, yeah- that's what I wanted to get across; she's really protective, and yes, she's going crazy. Keep that in mind ;] Thanks so much for reviewing!

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is very good i must say and i want you to write some more
id love a story where the girl isnt perfect.

Author's Response: Thanks very much :] I will definitely be writing some more. And that's the entire thesis of the story- Kadyn is NOT perfect. I'm so glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing!

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This is cool. Little weird, but cool.


--Tomi

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Hey Britt :) Connie told me this was going to be a good story. You and your...WORDS! Britt, it's a freaking mirror hun. You make the weirdest things turn out to be evil. It's not healthy and I'm seriously pondering calling up your mother telling her that you're making stories up about evil mirrors and how they make every one vain. Babe. Please.

Okay. Here's my honest to heaven opinion: It's okay. Don't hit me on Monday, okay? It's an okay start. I'll have to read the next chapter, because this was kind of like a Prologue. So I hope this whole story won't be about symbolism. Oh the wonders of Mr. Eggengrate's English class. He brings the worst out in me :) But anyway. Sirius Black actually a murderer?! Say it isn't so! You're going to give me a heart attack chubba wubba. Seriously. You shouldn't do that the the woman who is going to die and be reincarnated as a fictional character and be made as Sirius Black's wife. Nuh uh, that's not a good idea.

Okay. Sigh. I lied. Maybe it is a good idea. But I wish you'd just not use symbolism. We spend wayy too much time in English class. Honestly.

And now I'm on the phone with Felicia who is saying the exact same thing- YOU AND YOUR SYMBOLISM. God. You should expect a review from Miss Jones in a few moments. She just said she's reviewing too.

And, just a quick statement- all (Well, okay, most) of your reviewers don't have accounts. That's pretty weird. I wonder why that is. And don't berate me for not having an account, please hun. I don't have the patience to wait for chapters to be read by the staff members and then all that blabbity hoop blah... yeah :)

I'll call you later chubba wubba :) See you on Monday!

`Kelly Belly

Crap. I just realized I have to read the next chapter too. Okay, save my salutations for the NEXT chapter review. :)

Author's Response: Well, Connie often tells the truth :) Hahaa jk jk.

WHAT DO YOU MEAN?? Kelly, really think about a mirror. Seriously. I'm not a freak, that's not nice sweetie. =/ And, please- don't call my mommy. I don't think she knows I do this and that would be fairly awkward... =/

Well- I would have expected that from you. You're unbearably honest sometimes. But if you say it's 'okay' then I must be doing something right, right? Yeahh, this is the prologue- the real true and blue story doesn't start until I get to the 7th year and Karlie is dead already. I'm just trying to catch everyone up. So calm down biffle :) Okay, and if Eggengrate ever saw what I've been writing, he'd probably suspend me and never let me stay after again. And that would totally suck monkey balls :[

And yes, muahaha, Sirius Black is a true murderer! Hahahaa. Okay, okay, so I'm exaggerating- only a little. AND I SAID TOO MUCH. So, take what you will out of that and make it what you want.

And you know what Felicia? YOU CAN GO SUCK A MONKEY BALL! hahaha just kidding, love herr 143! And I have yet to receive a review from Jones, the liar. I'm going to have a few words with her >.>

I know, I caught that too...That is weird, I don't know. I mean I have some that have accounts, but most just...don't. I dont know why... weird.

And I'm talking to you on the phone right now biffle wiffle! :] Hahaa.

And yes. I am awaiting your next review ;]

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whoaa. that makes soo much sense!! i never thought of a miror that way before. and now it makes me mad >:( thats very truue. wow. im a little speechless i think i dont know what else to say. sirius killed her sister? really? thats not like sirius... :/ i want to know howw. and why. that's really weird of him. but hes your character soo... ill keep reading.

Kally

Author's Response: Haha I'm so glad I've gotten that reaction out of people. And I know Sirius is a little OOC- sorry =/ I'm glad you're still reading though! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Hey Britt! Wow, this is the story you were talking about? I really like it so far. You've got some vendetta against mirrors, don't you? haha my wittle chubba wubba 143!! lol. I'm off to read the next chapter and find out why Mr. Black killed her sister! Arsehole, why'd you do that??!!
Love your biffle wiffle, Connie

Author's Response: Miss Connor! hahaaa, yes this is the story. You know me. I must make a spectacle out of nothing. And this time it's mirrors. But I have truth in my words. You know that. =[ I thought you weren't gonna call me that anymore. LOL whatevs. 143! LOL

Love your chubba wubba =/

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whoaaa. a little intense. can't wait to read the next chapter. I give you a 9/10!

~~~Shinaa~~~

Author's Response: Thanks! But why a 9/10?? Tell me how I can improve, I'd totally appreciate it! BTW- is your penname referring to Jeffree Star? Love her! Pretty awesome ;]

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this is greatt.
i love itt.

=D

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