oh my gosh please i am totally and completely begging you to add another chapter i have been totally obsessed with this story and this last chpater just got like oh i don't know... AMAZING! so i know you're probably way busy but please please please please please please please please please add the next chapter i am on my knees begging!!! i love it!Author's Response: I'm so sorry there will be no more :( Report Review
OMG! This is one of the BEST fan fics I have ever read. I love the sarcastic, the love, everything about it. And Sirius with his dress, oh my gawd I almost died from laughing. Very well written, I love it. Update soon!
-The MegsterAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you so very much! Glad you enjoy the humor as well!! Report Review
this is by far my favourite story.Author's Response: Aw, wow, thank you so much :) Report Review
Great story! Oh and I was going to say this before, but are we the only ones who think James went by Jay as well? Gahh! I can't find any other fanfictions where he or someone calls him Jay! I mean, I seriously see Sirius calling him that too (no pun intended).Author's Response: I know, it just makes sense, right?? I would call a James that! Thanks for reading/reviewing! Report Review
WRITE MORE! PLEASE! I love it!Author's Response: I'm sorry there is no more! Report Review
AnnaAuthor's Response: haha thank you so much! Report Review
Love this story! It's great,
:DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
Ok, sorry to review twice within the hour, but I just had to reiterate how amazing this story is. I am hardcore addicted. I read the entire 9 chapters you've written so far in one sitting.
I beg of you keep writing, or I'll have nothing to entertain myself with/to use as procrastination from my homework haha
thanks again for an awesome fic
can't wait to read moreAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you!! Sorry for having nothing more to read.. Report Review
aaah I'm only up to chapter 3 (clearly) but this is awesome. hil-freakin-arious. you have some serious writing talent. keep up the good work! :)Author's Response: Hehe, well I hope you like the rest. Thanks so much! Report Review
I loved it! You have a great story and how she talks to herself in her head is hilarious!Author's Response: Thank you kindly! Report Review
You, little missy, need to update RIGHT THIS SECOND!
... sorry xD
Okay, anyway, I'm a little mad to be honest, that you STILL haven't updated. It's been what, months now? I absolutely adore this story and it makes me a little sad inside that there aren't any new chapters.
Okay, I should get to feedback now, shouldn't I? Yeah, I thought so too.
"Death by desert"
So random, therefore making me laugh out loud. Then again, I laugh a lot. I should start telling you about how I love the way you characterise Lily, hmm? Well, usually when I read ffs, Lily's either Hermione's exact replica, or an incredibly annoying Mary Sue who's undeniably perfect. So, I like how you can make her like an OC in a way. OCs are usually the crazy, fun types who do have a few flaws. That's how you made Lily, and I think that's how Lily really could've been. I mean, if Lily were James' EXACT opposite and really WAS the uptight, always abiding the rules girl, there's really no possible way she would go with the crazy Marauder who doesn't give a damn, am I right? So Lily's characterisation is straight up perfect, in my opinion.
Oh, and then there's the fact that this fanfic makes me laugh frequently. Yeah, that helps me love it too xD
"Makes my life actually seem like a disney movie"
xD See above comment on Lily's awesome characterisation. Oh, did I mention how fantastic it is that you can actually make this in Lily's POV and make it rock? Sorry, getting a little carried away here x)
"Yes, I am still your brother. I will always be your brother"
Awh =) I like how you characterise James, too. You make him sweet at times, but also make him the funny marauder we all know and love.
Oh, and Dylan's awfully cute as well. I can just picture the little boy in my mind... :)
James Potter. He really is a good guy. You just have to get to know him. Or spend a month living in his house.
Well said, Lils xD
"Obviously, Evans. Moony dared me to come over here and convince James that I've decided to start dressing like a girl. Pathetic, I know. But I can't resist a dare. Especially from Remus"
I think I pretty much died at that point: my spirit called 911 xD Ah Sirius, we all love him, no? Okay, to get literal with the laughing, I had tears in my eyes from laughing so hard. I mean, come on? Sirius+Pink dress+LOW CUT= Die hard funny.
"He is dressed in a summer dress. And he is Sirius Black"
I swear, that is EZZACTLY what I was thinking when I read the previous, maybe 5 sentences? Yeah. Lily's a Seer! *gasp* Oh, and I was close to crying from laughing when Lily said something about how he should've been wearing make up with the dress xD.
"Jimmy, I've decided to do something very drastic. It will shock the faces off everyone back at Hogwarts. I'm going to start dressing as a girl. I thought you should be the first to know"
I fell out of my chair laughing at this. 'Nuff said. I hurt my head a little, though xD Just kidding. I really did fall of my chair, though =P I am completely free of injuries, I'm sure you're glad to hear =D In case you haven't noticed, I'm actually re-reading the chapter as I go along with this review. I know a little stupid, but hey, I freakin love this fanfiction =)
Oho, Im loving Sirius right now. I haven't laughed so much in forever. Okay, well, to be honest, I've never laughed so much reading a fanfiction. Because well... my life is rather entertaining xD
I love them giddy airheads =P
And the dare thing they played, lord, I was just like, "Okay... whats going to happen?" And then he's like, "Lemme cut your hair" And I'm like, "...=O" aha, and then he tricked her, cue the laughter xD
OH OH OH! And what Lily did to James for the dare! OH MY GOD I FREAKIN LOVED THAT! I died again, and, you know the drill, my ghost had my back.
"The boy didn't learn his lesson on self restraint. Oh well, I tried"
xD Love this story. Oh, and I apologize for the extremely long review xDAuthor's Response: Yay, I'm glad you like my Lily! She's just so fun and easy to write this way :) And thanks for laughing! Glad you understand my humor, haha some people don't! And ouch thank god you didn't hurt yourself..if you actually did fall out of that chair! So thank you, thank you for all the lovely quotes and compliments, ohmygosh you are too nice! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story, it makes me happy to hear! And NEVER apologize for a long review :) Hugs my dear! Report Review
AWESOME! Omg i luv this story!!!Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading/reviewing!! Report Review
Loving it Author's Response: Loving that you reviewed :) Report Review
i love love love love love love this story so continue it pleaseAuthor's Response: Thanks m'dear! Report Review
great chapter, plz updateAuthor's Response: Thank you so much!! Report Review
Hey this story is so gr8. It's so funny but also serious that is what i love about it.Please please update soon.I can't wait 2 carry on reading.
Munlight12Author's Response: Thank you so much! Sorry though, no more. Report Review
has this story been abandoned?
cos i really, really, REALLY hope not ...Author's Response: I'm very sorry.. Report Review
actually the whole MP movie thing makes sense, it was like super popular in England at that time great job!Author's Response: Hehe, why thank you! Report Review
your so talented.
please keep up with this amazing story
heres my rp xanga.com/lily_lilyevans
i'd appreciate it if youd check it out!Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Report Review
I am totally adicted to your story, it is very cannon James i think. The time setting is so clever. Right when every one grows up. It is great that you included the maurders feelings of ambiguity twards peter and all, where he had been all summer. This is a fab story!!
lot of love-
cocoAuthor's Response: Thank you so much :) Report Review
cool story..but i dont think there were computers when lily and james were suppossed to be alive, not personal computers at least...Author's Response: Yeah, I figure only the rich owned personal ones.. Report Review
ahhahahahahahahahah. that was the cuties thing ever. every girl needs to take lessons on becoming more like lily! i think lily and i are alike cause im always thinking of the wildest things too. i loved that bit with Sirius and his dress! i can actually picture that a bit. but he can pull off anything! and i love how he asked lily so have you realised yet? it sooo cute. like he is trying to get through lily head that james truley loves her. by the way i just read all 9 chapters ina row so im really commenting on everything that has happened. i love lily's thought if i havent said that yet. and kizzy is like the coolest name ever. and im now naming my bed zebra and even though it dosnt look like one i just named it that and i dont care what anyone says! i loved that james didnt cut lily's hair becuase they bith knew that that would be a horrid mistate. james with sissors!!! thats a big no-no. and dylan is the most adorable little boy. he is going to grow up and be such a charmer. aahahah i loved that way you explained the potters manor in the begining of the bool with having different wings! i was laughing so hard! and i also hate how i cant read minds. cause when people say something to me then say like ohh nvm. i get so angery cause i want to no what were goinng to say. then i go craxy, but thats usual. i would go fishing with the any marauder cause that the coolest fishing ive ever read. jezzz being a potter would be the best thingn evr to just dream to be that rich. oh i no this was a while ago but the forest thing...so cute! and i think this story is so AMAZING!! i cant wiat to read the next chapter!!! and pleaseee just make it super dooper long cause thats the way uhuh i like uhuuh. sorry i was singing.akward.but really the longer the better. and i will adore you if you make it long...ill make you one of those crowns or awards that lily has been wanting!!! keep on writing!!
:]Author's Response: haha wow! thank you for the super review! as to you liking the name kizzy..it was my first dog's name! so there's some random information that you didn't ask for, haha. anyhow, thank you for the wonderful compliments, I am very glad that you enjoyed this story! Hugs! and i am forever sorry that there will be no more chapters after this one.. Report Review
I just read from start... To well. This chapter. I love it... Best Lily x James fanfic i've read in... Ever. I couldn't stop smirking and laughing (and having to cry cause I forgot to blink while reading. I'm such an odd-one.) I love how it comes from Lily's thoughts, and it sounds so much like my take of her, its unbelievable. I can't wait till next chapter. It'll be almost as bad as waiting for the 7th book. Which I finished in a 4 day period, 15 hours total. Pity. I can't believe I let myself read it that quickly-
Oh but this is a review. Love the wit, I think you need to add just a bit more description but other then that? Amazing.
If you could, reply to my email:
Much love, keep on the great plot.
Karen Author's Response: Thank you so much! There is no more though. I'm glad you liked these chapters still. Report Review
Damn. What a cliff hanger.Author's Response: Sorry! Haha, I just love them! Report Review
Mary Poppins? Dork. :DAuthor's Response: Pfft, best movie ever! Gotta love the classics :) Report Review
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