That was crazy! I can't believe that Lucius would do that! And she didn't even scream... Oh my god. Gisela is fabulous. I love her character, and how she still wants to do the right thing, and not become a Death Eater, even if she is going against all of her family, friends, and house. Can't wait for the next chapter! 10/10
Cassie :)

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Well, Lucius is a terrible guy, to put it nicely! and I'm glad you like her, she is definitely a tough one ha! Next chapter is awaiting validation so check back soon! and thank you!

Vicki :)

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Argh. Lucius is a right tosser. What a twat.

I can't believe she doesn't believe Sirius! I mean, surely she realises how horrid they are?! Bleugh. But, I really liked how she got her memory wiped, because it adds depth and a twist! Well, not really a twist, but whatever. Also! Is the prologue coming up soon?

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Author's Response:
I know, i really hate him.

I think she does deep down but she's scared of leaving the only life and friends she has ever known. i know what you mean. i didn't plan on the memory loss but i had that part of the story wrote for ages and i needed to fit in somewhere but i didn't want the story to develop too fast so that's how i came up with it.

and yes it is, it will appear the chapter after next. i am so excited to get started on it!

next chapter is ready to be vaildated!

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That was a really great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! I think that Evan's isn't going to be too happy with Gisela and he's going to make sure she knows that... Just my thoughts :) and I like that Pedro was fine with Gisela's relationship with Rastaban! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response:
Thank you! well the next chapter should be validated today so you'll be able to see it soon! I am not going to spoil anything so you'll just have to wait ha! well, i didn't want him to be the cliché over protective brother, well too much anyway so i thought it would be a good idea for him to cool with it. and thanks again.

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Good chapter!! Interesting thing with her and Rabastan. I can't wait for more, update again soon please! =] ~

Author's Response:
Why thank you! I always think Rabastan is under used in the marauder era stories so i thought i would give him a part in my story. A chapter is waiting for validation so keep checking back :D

Vicki :)

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oh.. wayhey! gi and sirius action!

i really liked this chapter. i love the whole background story between gi, evan and bas, because it shows why evan would want to get 'revenge'..

oh! the last line is great.

great chapter. update soon!

Author's Response: Well, i thought i would treat you guys haha ;)

Well, i knew had to include it because in the first chapter i included a little Gi and Bas moment so i thought i would expand on that and why Evan gets like he does...one minute being nice to her the next trying to cause trouble...its just because he has feelings for her that she doesn't reciprocate.

Why, thank you!

The next one is already written so i am about to add it. Hopefully it should be up in a few days!

Thank you for reviewing!

Vicki :)

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Oh my gosh! That was a really packed chapter! And I love how we see the darker side of James and especially Sirius. I wonder what's going to happen between him and Gisela. And Evan's character is fabulous. I love how innocent Lola is, especially considering her surroundings. Great chap term hope to see more soon! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Well i wanted to show a different side to Sirius because everyone portrays him as a womaniser (which he is) but after all he has been through with his family, he must have some anger issues and darkness in him so i thought i would show that side of him! Gisela and Sirius have a rather strange relationship...so who knows what will happen! I'm glad you love Evan, i love him too, definitely my favourite character apart from Gisela. And i wanted to keep someone outside of all the bad things happening, someone that could keep Gisela feeling..human, if that makes sense , so that's where Lola steps in. Thank you so much and i'm really glad you reviewed...reviews are always nice. Next chapter should be up soon!

Vicki :)

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Hmmm, I wonder what she's gonna do. how long can she pretend? Well, update again soon please, I really wanna know what happens next! =]

Author's Response: Ah, all these answers you will find out soon ;) The next chapter should be up soon!

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wayhey! great chapter, i really liked it. i quite like how sirius hasn't told james what she said to him. is that because he doesn't believe it, or he's not too sure..

OH. does sirius actually believe her and tries to get her to join the order, but she won't because she wants to protect them! or she does, and she's like, a spy.


good god, ignore me. i'm quite hyper.


UPDATE SOON, YEAH?!

Author's Response: Why thank you, gad you liked it! I think he hasn't told him because he wants to handle it on his own, Gisela was his friend once upon a time so i think he believes he can get through to her...and also i do think he is a slightly weary of what she is saying because her father's commitment to Voldemort is very strong and he's worried she has been influenced by him.

Well, i'm not quite up to that part of the story yet and i don't want to spoil it so you'll just have to find out, although both ideas are very plausible

haha, i don't mind at all!

i will definitely try to, the next chapter has been started so keep an eye out for it!

Vicki :)

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really great chapters! I can't believe pedro is going behind her back, I actually liked him! Well update again soon, I can't wait to see what going to happen! =] ~

Author's Response: Why thank you! Haha, you're not the only to say that you liked him and that you can't believe what he is doing to Gisela! Well, the next chapter should be up shortly, i'm just waiting for it to be validated

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That chapter was great! I LOVE Evan's character. He's so charming, yet almost condescending at the same time. It's reallyintriguing, and I hope you write a lot more of him! Gisela is a fascinating character as well. She's so torn between her family and what she thinks is right, its hard to tell who she feels more loyal towards. 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you like him, i definitely have a soft spot for him so he should be showing up in a couple of more chapters, in fact, he is the next one! I'm glad you like Gisela, i really tried to make her a character that is pretty much like all of us - human. And yes, her loyalty is really torn, i'm having fun writing what she should do next!

Vicki :)

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oh, i don't like pedro right now.


still, i like how she listens in to the conversation, you know? it adds depth. well, i think so, anyways. i'm really looking forward to the next chapter, UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: Haha, me niether!!

Well, i wanted her to hear it so that she would come up with a plan to get them off her back...and something that would lead her to the night of the first chapter! I couldn't just have her run away from them straight away! And thank you, i really value your opinion!

I'm glad you are and it should be up soon!!

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oh, i liked this. i like how she knows she doesn't really want to be a death eater; that's always good. i also like the relationship between her and her brother and sister, since they all get along- most times they don't, so it's a nice change!

i really liked the end:D.

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Author's Response: Thank you! I wasn't too sure about this chapter because it has so much dialogue and i am not good with dialogue in stories! I'm glad you like that she doesn't want to be a death eater, at first i thought it was far too cliche but i went along with it anyway. And yeah, well i get along with my family so i wanted to reflect that in the story!

Thank you so much for reviewing, it means a lot :)

and i will...the next chapter is waiting to be validated!

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I really like this story so far! Gisela is a really fun character to read, and I love how smoothly you transition between her emotions. It makes her realistic. I love her exchanges with Sirius and with Evan, who I picture as charming and devilishly handsome, but with the darker Slytherin aura about him. I can't wait for more of this, it's awesome! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! it really means a lot that you like the story so far. I also picture Evan like that, and i think that's what makes him fun to write. And i am glad you find Gisela realistic, that's how i wanted her to be, seeing as i love her character and wanted to do her justice! And there will be more soon, a chapter is waiting to be validation so keep checking back!!!
Vicki :)

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yes! you update quickly!


i really liked this, it was good. i like how you show all the characters! can't wait for the next chapter, UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) And the next chapter should hopefully be on its way! I'm just waiting for it to be validated!

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aha! this is awesome xD please write more :D for me??? ;) i love her character and i think the start was pretty awesome

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot :) Haha, i will definitely try and write more. As we speak, i have another chapter waiting for validation but the queue is 3 days so it may take a while! I'm glad you like Gisela, I'm beginning to like her more and more as i write!

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That was an awesome first chapter! Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked it. :) And i hope i do!

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Interesting! I can't wait to see what's happening and where this story will go. Update again soon please!! =] ~

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm glad you find it interesting :). And there will be a new chapter up hopefully later on today, i'm just waiting for it to be validated!!!

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Wow, you write really well, and the story is great so far!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, it means a lot with it being my first story!

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