41 Reviews Found

Review #26, by MiSTY_VoLPe Confession 8 - Of More Secrets, Telling Parents And Wanting To Kill Certain Cousins

25th August 2012:
oh soo sorry for not reading in ages- internet problems...
anyways great chapter! and i'll read the next one asap!

Author's Response: don't worry and thanks :)

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Review #27, by Savvy Confession 1 - Of Sickness, Boys And Shocks

25th August 2012:
Very good edit though

Author's Response: Thank you x

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Review #28, by True Author Confession 2 - Of Friends, Tests And Finding Out

23rd June 2012:
Lilly's life is gonna be change forever!!!

Author's Response: Yep it sure is. And there are a whole lot of changes on the way.

Thanks for revieing :D

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Review #29, by MiSTY_VoLPe Confession 7 - Of Going Home, Secrets And Lies

22nd June 2012:
Oh my gosh! You are so sweet giving me the huge shout out! It's a pleasure to review your story! It's really great!
Thanks for updating! Good chapter! Big shocker about James being a father! Didn't see that coming!
Please update soon!

Author's Response: Yay :) I know, who would have thought it.
I was planning on doing Bee her own story and why she didn't tell anyone etc - so look out for it, but it might be a while

Next one should be up soon :D

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Review #30, by katie Confession 2 - Of Friends, Tests And Finding Out

21st June 2012:
very exciting.love the use of the cliff-hanger!=)

Author's Response: Thanks :D I love my little cliffie

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Review #31, by katie Confession 1 - Of Sickness, Boys And Shocks

21st June 2012:
this chapter was so surprising.

Author's Response: Thanks, there's more to come :D

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Review #32, by True Author Confession 1 - Of Sickness, Boys And Shocks

21st June 2012:
Hi !
This is really cool!
I loved the character of Lilly Luna Potter in your story! I cant believe you have written a whole novella on just one character which is not explained much in Harry Potter! I have been curious about Harry's kids specially Lilly. I really liked the confessions! I read them all at once. But i felt so sorry about Rose!
The banner is attractive.
Keep Writing!

True Author =)

Author's Response: Aw Thanks, this just made my day :D

I love next gen characters Like Lily, because you don't much and you can make them your own and how you see them.

My Lovely banner was made by Naughtforreal @ TDA :)

Thanks again :D
-Potterfan310 x

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Review #33, by MiSTY_VoLPe Confession 6 - Of Crying, Worrying and Jelly Beans

15th June 2012:
Oh I understand why she chose adoption but I think she should think things over more and she needs to talk to her parents and see what they think. Because it would be bad if she rushed into a decision only to realize she regrets it later...
Please update soon!

Author's Response: hey:D

Lily thinks it's for the best and at the moment her mind is decided.

She kinda tells her parents in a way in chapter 11 but because I've had to split chap 10 in half (as It's too long and also a lot of stuff happens) it might not be up soon as I have to edit it/sort things out

I will update pretty soon, hopefull I will put the next chapter in the que later today.

Thank you so much for all your reviews they make my day :D xx

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Review #34, by ScorpiusRose17 Of Yelling, Punches And Broken Noses

4th June 2012:
hi there!

Okay so I know that it has taken me awhile to get to your review, but here I am. I've read the entire story up to this point and I fully intend on reviewing each chapter. As I noticed in the review thread you were most concerned with chapter 8 so that is where I decided to start.

I thought that the characterization was really well done. Al went crazy as any older brother would given the situation, I also thought that you did a great job with Jake. He is very confused and needs to think. These all tie in together as making their reactions feel appropriate for what is happening. I really liked how you made it so believable as to how they would respond.

I felt like I was right there watching this all unfold. It is a real subject in which quite a few people can relate to. This chapter in particular was highly appropriate for a typical response for a guy, but it is also a justifed reaction/response.

I thought that the chapter flowed well. You still have some capitalizations that are missing, but I noticed it was a lot less then before. The chapter isn't confusing when it transitions from paragraphs and feels quite natural.

I really like this story and I will be adding it to my favorites!

Keep up the awesome writing! You're doing great! =)


Author's Response: Thank you :D
I'm glad Jake came off good, since I was concered about him.

I've now got a beta for this story so it should improve even more once they get edited.
I'm glad you like it so far.

Thanks Again ♥ :D

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Review #35, by MiSTY_VoLPe Of Yelling, Punches And Broken Noses

3rd June 2012:
Thanks for updating!
Ok so I'm not a guy either so I'm not sure but I seems pretty realistic. Anyone - no matter what gender- would be freaked out by an unplanned pregnancy while still in school, and he would be confused as well. I know he needs time to think but he needs to go back to lily soon!
Anyways keen to read more soon!

Author's Response: Thanks :D
We shall see, will he go back or won't he?
Next chap should be up soon

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Review #36, by MiSTY_VoLPe Confession 5 - Of Telling Jake,Tears And Being Left Alone

6th May 2012:
keen to read jakes POV! please update soon!

Author's Response: i hope you like jake's POV when it's up

i will try to update soon but i already got a chapter in the que for a different story so might not be for a week

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Review #37, by MiSTY_VoLPe Confession 4 - Of Forgivness, Sneaking Out And Heartbeats

17th April 2012:
Great story so far! Thanks for the preview! Keen to read more soon!

Author's Response: thank you :D
the next chapter will be up next week or maybe the weekend

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Review #38, by ScorpiusRose17 Confession 1 - Of Sickness, Boys And Shocks

17th April 2012:
Hi there!

I really enjoyed this chapter. I was sad for Rose though. I can relate to what she went through and it is a tough thing. You had me in tears at that part.

I thought you did a great job characterizing both Rose and Lily. Rose is that know it all that we love, but she has a sensative side too that we don't always get a chance to see. Lily was also fun to read. She had that I'm like my mother if you disturb me I will curse you into oblivion bit to her, but yet like Rose she had another side to her also.

I really like the plot and how it is progressing so far. I am curious to know how Jake is going to react when Lily tells him the news and what she decides to do. I also think you did a wonderful job portraying the symptoms of a pregnant person. The moment Laura walked into the room with the plate of food I was mentally yelling No! No! =)

Again, the flow of the chapter is disrupted by the uncapitalized words and spacing issues between commas and periods. This is something that you can easily fix which I explained in my last review. I wouldn't let it discourage you in any way. I think that your story has a lot of potential and is doing a wonderful job keeping with a fresh idea that it draws me into it.

Overall, I really like your story so far. I think that your idea is fresh, fun, and interesting. I am highly intrigues with what is going to happen and I thought you paid quite a but of attention to your facts. Your description of them and how a person would react was well done. I liked the characterization of Lily and Rose. I think that it is progressing well and the plot is coming together in a nice way. You could still use some work on the flow of it, but other than that you did a great job!

Keep up the good work! =)


Author's Response: i'm sorry about the tears, and thank you, thank you for the tips and reviews :)
- pottefan310
p.s lily tells him in chapter 7

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Review #39, by AJPotter Of Charms, Family And My Boyfriend

7th April 2012:

I have to say, I like the longer chapter. That is probably just me though, I just love reading. This chapter is my favorite so far and I can't wait for the next one. I started reading this because of your forum posts. I have to say I have seen your growth as an author.

Keep writing. I hope this helps keep you encouraged.


P.S. I have decided to add you as a favorite Author. I believe I will be the first person to do so.

Author's Response: thank you so much for adding me , that has literally made my day :D
i also prefer longer chapters and they get longer (i think) as they go on
thanks for the lovely review :)

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Review #40, by ravenclaw_slytherin Confession 2 - Of Friends, Tests And Finding Out

17th March 2012:
OMIGOSH! Cliffhanger!! Update very, very soon!! I love this story so far!

Author's Response: thanks xxx :)

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Review #41, by ravenclaw_slytherin Confession 1 - Of Sickness, Boys And Shocks

13th March 2012:
This chapter was really awesome! post more really soon! :D I've never read anything where a next gen character miscarried, so...wow, Rose, was something new...very unique! Ican't wait to meet Jake!!

Author's Response: thanks again xxx
i have read one where rose miscarries, and then she has more kids later on in life, but i thought it would be different if someone else apart from lily recognised if she was pregnant.

i have at least 5-6 chapters already typed up on my laptop, so its just a case of checking them and then uploading them for validation, next one should be up thou
potterfan310 xx

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