{reviewid: 2696482, reviewer: 'AriesGirl40'}
12th May 2012:
Now everyones mix is all talked up... um... yeah. I'm confuseled.Hermione told the truth, so Draco is ticked and taking it out on Hermione? I hope he runs into Ron. I'm positive he will tell Draco why he kissed Hermione, just to gloat and watch the ferett squirm. Everyone made mistakes today, didn't they.
Great chapter, I enjoyed every word.
Author's Response: Well... Not exactly. :3 You'll have to wait and see what happens :) I'm going to hopefully put up the next chapter by (latest) the end of next week. Thanks for reading! And reviewing!!
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2693217, reviewer: 'WOO'}
4th May 2012:
haha omg this story is absolutely awesome r u close to putting the next chapters up?
Author's Response: The next chapter is under validation at the moment :P Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying my story :D
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{reviewid: 2689220, reviewer: 'Lollypop'}
24th April 2012:
how much longer till the next chapter?? i'm lovin the story
Author's Response: Well.. (Blushes) I have already written next chapter.. and the chapter after that... But I want to stay ahead so that I can upload if I lose my muse. (Which I have at the moment...) I have holidays next week so I WILL finish my next next next chapter next week :P And then I will upload... :) I am so glad you are enjoying the story!
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2686640, reviewer: 'plasticpirate01'}
17th April 2012:
cheers up Draco , and thank you so much writer ;]
Author's Response: You're welcome :) Thanks for the review.. There is a lot of Draco in the next chapter... So let's see what you think of the next chapter...
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2686591, reviewer: 'Gee'}
17th April 2012:
Haha i love the story sooo much when will you put the next chapter up, i can't wait to see what happens!!!
Author's Response: I will put the next chapter up soon.. I just am trying to stay two chapters ahead so when I finish next next chapter.. The next one'll go up. :) Thanks for reading! And reviewing!
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2686481, reviewer: 'HuffGriffSlyRaven'}
16th April 2012:
Ron is evil! But it works for the drama, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Yes, Ron is evil. He is a minor antagonist... But he was doing what he thought was right.. He honestly thought that this was best for Hermione.. In a weird selfish twisted way... :D Thanks for reading! And reviewing!!
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2686076, reviewer: 'Amberlinn%20Quill'}
15th April 2012:
I am really loving this story. Please put up the next chapter.
Author's Response: I will soon! Just trying to stay one chapter ahead, so y'all are gonna have to wait until I finish next next chapter :)
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2685782, reviewer: 'Jo'}
15th April 2012:
since when is Hermione on first name terms with Mrs Weasley? Other than that, great story!
Author's Response: Well.. I think that Hermione is at the age where she would call Mrs. Weasley, Molly... She has known her for years.. She isn't a little girl anymore. She is of age and is now an adult... :3 Glad you are liking the story :D
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2685755, reviewer: 'slytherinbadgirl'}
15th April 2012:
okay i think i have a tiny brain i'm soo confused!?!?!
is Ron still going out with Lavender?
and poor Mione she must be as confused as i am!
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Ron is lying to Hermione to get her and Draco to break up because he thinks that Hermione is attention seeking and being stupid.. He is still dating Lavender but has pretended to break up with her until he breaks Hermione and Draco up... D'you get it now? :)
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2685645, reviewer: 'hpfangirl'}
14th April 2012:
well ron is very self sentered this could work
Author's Response: Ron IS horrible :3 I definitely would beat him up if I met him in a dark alley at night :P Thanks for the review!
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2685643, reviewer: 'hpfangirl'}
14th April 2012:
it was kinda funny when she told her what hermione was thinking
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was funny :) I was sort of aiming for that xD Hope you are enjoying my story :D
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2685639, reviewer: 'hpfangirl'}
14th April 2012:
lol at the interuption
"Every bloody time"
Author's Response: Ah Bless :) I really had fun writing that part :D Glad it made you laugh!
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2677458, reviewer: 'AriesGirl40'}
27th March 2012:
You could have had more fun with it... (I say in a sing song voice) Yet this is good too and got the job done quick. She is going to need some payback on this though. This was right up there with a prank. Just yelling at Ginny isn't enough, because what is she going to say? Don't ever do that to me again? She already knows Ginny wouldn't dare. And if you think about it, she already sort of forgave her for being nosey and picking her brain.
It was a good chapter, I thought it cute that she threw in asking if she had romantic feelings for Harry. She will always trust Harry around Hermione forever.
Author's Response: Yeah.. I know :3 But I don't think that Ginny would do that to her friend... She definitely wouldn't let her go rampaging around Campus and show that she was.. 'under the influence' xD It was incredibly enjoyable writing Ginny, interrogating Hermione :) I especially enjoyed adding in all of the little questions at the end.. Thanks for reviewing, thanks for reading!
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2677322, reviewer: 'Subrina'}
26th March 2012:
Ginny's character is spot on. Harry's reaction and deilvery of the veritaserum is a fun twist as well.
2 things regarding the interrogation: It simply makes the user tell the truth. I didn't really enjoy the third person robotic answers Hermione was giving. Also, she wouldn't have known if Malfoy had given her a love potion - Ginny could have done other detective work to find that out.
Great idea, needs just a bit of polish on the execution.
Author's Response: Yeah.. I know about the veritaserum... But as I said in my A/N, there isn't any firm information on the effects of veritaserum, so I put my own spin on it so that I could, 'make it more serious for Ginny to do this to her friend.' I wanted it to show how deep Ginny's worry was.. And her relief and puzzlement when she realised that Hermione actually liked him...
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2677315, reviewer: 'Subrina'}
26th March 2012:
Very cute :) I'm glad to see more of Hermione's friendship with Ginny for once.
Constructively: Try using a bit less punctuation. There are quite a few unnecessary commas, apostrophes, and exclamation marks. Most of your sentence structure is quite good and doesn't need the extra 'bits'. Same goes for capitalization; 'best friends', and patronus figures don't need capitals.
Just a few English nerd fiddly things I can't help notice. ;)
I'm hooked so far though!
Author's Response: My friend always says I use too much punctuation too :3 It is better then what I used to do, which was basically no punctuation... :) I'm glad that you are enjoying my story, thanks for reviewing!!!
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2677292, reviewer: 'Subrina'}
26th March 2012:
Nicely done, very cute reunion of the core group. Sorting Hat's song was good too :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I was a little worried about writing the Sorting hats song.. It is a LOT harder then I first thought :3 So is writing Christmas presents... Spoilers! :)
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2677251, reviewer: 'Lexi'}
26th March 2012:
You must keep writing! the only comments i have are that i would like to read more about what Draco thinks like on the date i wish you could have gotten his view on the date a little more and some grammatical errors should be fixed other than that i love it
Author's Response: I'll keep that in mind on further chapters :) Thanks for reviewing and sorry it took me so long to reply :3
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2675570, reviewer: 'HuffGriffSlyRaven'}
22nd March 2012:
Poor Ginny trying to be a friend. Don't hate Ginny, appreciate! :P
Author's Response: I love Ginny! But she had to do what she thought was right.. Even if it meant going to Ron and Harry. Thanks for reviewing! Hope you are enjoying my story!
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2674377, reviewer: 'AriesGirl40'}
19th March 2012:
I can see Ginny's point. All that stuff in their past and Hermione is just going to let it all go and jump Draco? Ginny going to Harry and Ron, what a tattle tale! Though I'm sure she will regret using the potion on Hermione once she does. I mean, how long does that stuff last? Immagine a Granger hopped up on that stuff going to classes? Hearing random questions in the corridores... Should be good for a laugh! She might end up teaching a class herself if everyone asks questions in class. lol!
Enjoyed this chapter, has me thinking :)
Author's Response: Oh.. I am sure that Ginny sill regret using it too.. She is a good friend though.. I would probably be the Ginny in this scenario... No.. Veriteserum wears off pretty quickly.. There isn't a lot of information on Veriteserum so I kind of expanded it to my needs.. I doubt you will like what I made it do.. I just wanted it to be a BIG deal.. Using a powerful potion on her best friend.. But no :( I forgot about how funny it would be to have her around school with Veriteseum in her system :D Like the Kim Possible episode!!
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2671556, reviewer: 'Alexis'}
12th March 2012:
I really love your story. It's cute, charming, and funny.
Author's Response: Thank you! I have a huge smile on my face now! :D I am glad you are enjoying it! Enjoy Chapter 20!
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2670519, reviewer: 'slytherinbadgirl'}
10th March 2012:
loving the chapter title! XD i'm loving the story so far!
Author's Response: Thanks! The chapter title is a joke with my friend :P Will pop up Chapter 20 soon.
~AussieLottie :D
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{reviewid: 2670456, reviewer: 'magicmuggle01'}
10th March 2012:
Excellent as always. Just what I've come to expect from your work.
I wasn't really surprised with Ginny's reaction, I suppose I'd have done the same thing if I'd seen a friend of mine kissing someone I thought was the enemy.
10/10 and plz update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I am sorry it has taken me this long to respond.. I haven't been able to get onto my account.. :3 I am glad you enjoyed the chapter!
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2669171, reviewer: 'AriesGirl40'}
6th March 2012:
Too funny, I read Draco's mind in my last review! lol
Ginny sure has a way of ruining a good time, doesn't she? glad she's with the program now though.
I wasn't too fond of the last sentance though.:
I simply shared silent laughter with Ginny and left the library, arms linked with Ginny. How about change it to: I simply shared silent laughter with Ginny and, we left the library arm in arm.
“Blessing? What are you getting marries or something?” Ginny sniggered.(You might want to change that s to a d.)
That was the only spelling mistake that jumped out at me.
It was a very good chapter. Malfoy has brought his feelings to Hermione's attention, nice moment. And Ginny protected her friend from the monster she remembersfrom the past. Ginny really is a good friend. If I were out drinking, I would want her with me to watch my back :)
see you next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your amazing review! I can not believe that those mistakes fell through all my Beta-ing. I think I will change the end.. Ginny is quite a party pooper.. xD But she does care about Hermione loads. I am off. I will upload before this week is through. Thanks again!
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2668075, reviewer: 'mikayla'}
4th March 2012:
the entire story was awesome make the next chapter soon
Author's Response: Thank you! I smiled so much at your comment! Next chapter is up! :)
~AussieLottie
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{reviewid: 2667565, reviewer: 'falling%20in%20love'}
3rd March 2012:
OMG CLIFF HANGER! update UPDATE!!!
Author's Response: I will pop up my next Chapter for Validation tonight.. Thanks for reading and reviewing! It means the world to me :P
~AussieLottie
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