{reviewid: 2758665, reviewer: 'Marauder_Weasley'}
14th December 2012:
great story update soon
Author's Response: aww thank you for reading and reviewing! (:
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{reviewid: 2758099, reviewer: 'Hannah'}
11th December 2012:
For the record, I love how Bella's aunt and uncle are named Emma and Rupert after Emma Watson and Rupert Grint, or Ron and Hermione. That's just awesome lol.
Author's Response: Yay! You noticed! I was hoping that someone would because I just love it xD I completely ship Emma and Rupert together so it made perfect sense to me to make that their names when I was struggling to come up with some.
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{reviewid: 2758057, reviewer: 'potterfan310'}
11th December 2012:
OH MY GOD!!!
Harry and Ginny know!! I can't believe it but I'm so glad their ok with it and I love Ginny!! she's so sweet :) - "Now come. Let’s leave the men alone while I go show you some old baby books I still have somewhere." And Harry, aww I love the father-son moment - so cute I think was great.
"Dad, I think I might really love her." - JAMES YOU LITTLE CUTIE PIE!!! I LOVE HIM!! AND I WANT TO HUG HIM AND BELLA RIGHT THIS SECOND!!
11/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x :D
Author's Response: hehehe I feel like Bella deserves some happiness after what happened with her father!
and don't you just LOVE father-son moments?! i feel like we definitely dont have enough of those hehehe
ah xD James xD
he's secretly so romantic lol
thanks for reading and reviewing! (:
Claire
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{reviewid: 2753544, reviewer: 'insert_witty_comment'}
20th November 2012:
This stories so good! I love it!!
Author's Response: aww thank you so much for reading and reviewing! (:
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{reviewid: 2753003, reviewer: 'qtpie6652'}
17th November 2012:
wow. so much i could say but i can't put it into words.
Author's Response: hehe thanks for R+R! (:
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{reviewid: 2752882, reviewer: 'zipzin'}
16th November 2012:
I think it's good. Realistic. If I had a daughter who didn't tell me she was pregnant after 13 weeks I would be pretty mad. But I don't. So yeah. I wish it could have been a happier chapter but this story is turning out really good so far so awesome work!
Author's Response: thank you so much for the awesome review! I was really striving for making it realistic because its not all rainbows and ponies hehe
thank you so much for R+R! (:
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{reviewid: 2752624, reviewer: 'potterfan310'}
14th November 2012:
Aww poor Bella, my heart goes out to her. What a way to tell your parents. I'm glad she went to the Potter's hopefully they'll let her stay without going to insane about the fact she's pregnant if them tell them.
10/10
LOVE IT!
Can't wait for the next one!
-Potterfan310
Soph x
Author's Response: Bella definitely needs all the love that she can get! thank you so much!
I always love your reviews. Thanks for R+R!
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{reviewid: 2752572, reviewer: 'Lyssie%20Black'}
14th November 2012:
Poor Bella! ):
wonderful update, though!
Author's Response: i know, right? D; Bella is in such a horrible position.
thank you so much! thanks for R+R!
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{reviewid: 2746086, reviewer: 'Jenna'}
14th October 2012:
I'm really enjoying this story, read the whole thing in 1 day ... can't wait for more chapters!! (:
Author's Response: WOW!! thanks so much for liking this story! (: thanks so much for R+R!
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{reviewid: 2745998, reviewer: 'qtpie6652'}
14th October 2012:
Wait so was her cousin still in the room at the end?
Author's Response: sorry, that wasn't clear enough. she wasn't! thanks for R+R!
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{reviewid: 2745875, reviewer: 'potterfan310'}
13th October 2012:
YAY!!
I LOVE Bella and James! Especially James, I love how he's so sweet and that he's worried about letting people down, he's deffinatly not cocky and arragant like his name sakes or like other James' I've read.
Can't wait for the next one!
10/10
Potterfan310
Soph xxx
P.s one small thing, each of your chapter titles are spelt out but on chapter nine you put '9' instead of 'nine' like the others.
Author's Response: hehe im glad that you liked that inner look at James because I feel like there's always this stereotype of James in Next Generation stories.
the next one is being put in the queue right now! thanks for reading and reviewing!
and thanks for pointing that out! i changed it now! (:
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{reviewid: 2745865, reviewer: 'bethybebz'}
13th October 2012:
Just wondering if you also belong to another fandom starting with a D..? Oh and great story so far!
Author's Response: well, I am a Directioner! xD If that is what you're talking about. Thanks so much! Thnx for R+R!
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{reviewid: 2744326, reviewer: 'zipzin'}
5th October 2012:
Excellent work! I really like the whole invisibump thing and stuff. I think Bella is almost a Mary Sue, not in a bad way just you know remember realism and all. Other than that I really love this story and you are doing a great job. Keep writing and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: ahhh haha don't worry; if you think Bella is a Mary-Sue, I won't feel bad because I think so too xD the more I think of it, the more I realize that I need some more characterization for her.
thank you so much though! thanks for reading and reviewing! :D
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{reviewid: 2741281, reviewer: 'Nikki%20Howard'}
20th September 2012:
It was all great. Keep up!
XOXO, Nikki
Author's Response: thank you so much! thnx for Reading and Reviewing! :D
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{reviewid: 2741268, reviewer: 'PotterUnited'}
20th September 2012:
Hi, so happy you've updated. :D This is so dramatic! Love all the story lines.
One thing I'm confused about is all the different people the main characters know, and all of the people involved in last chapter's fight. Could you somehow include each of the characters separately in the later chapters, just so we get to know them better? :)
It would be absolutely fantastic if you could- would bring the story to life- even more than it is now :)
I love that other people are starting to know about the pregnancy.
And I'm looking forward to Charlie being back in the story.
Awesome chapter! Well done :D
Author's Response: oh sure! if that would help clarify everything, i'll definitely do that! thanks for letting me know!
your review made me so happy!
i'll definitely keep in mind everything you said.
thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :D
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{reviewid: 2740830, reviewer: 'potterfan310'}
18th September 2012:
Yay :D an update!
I can't wait to meet Charlie's girlfriend, I wonder if she and Bella will beocome friends? or will they hate each other?
I'm glad Grace knows know and I can't wait for the next couple of chapters, when she's at the Potter/Weasley's for christmas. I wonder are Bella and James gonna tell them?
Fav quote -
Last year, I really thought that Rose and Scorpius were always only moments away from shagging each other in public. - Love it :D lol
-Potterfan310
Soph xx
Author's Response: hahaha as for whether Charlie's girlfriend and Bella will become friends, you'll just have to see!
ahhh Christmas will be an event for sure xD
I CAN tell you that the revelation is going to come soon xD
aw! im so glad you like that line hehe
thanks for reading and reviewing! ur awesome hehe
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{reviewid: 2740652, reviewer: 'BBWotter'}
17th September 2012:
Haha I enjoyed this! And man, did I miss this story, maybe it's just me or is it a long time since you've updated? Anyway, I can't wait to meet Charlie's girlfriend and I think it's good that grace finally knows about bella being preggers, because it means she can be trusted and can be fully in their group hope you come back soon!
Beebee xx
Author's Response: LOL well, it's been a while since the last update but it hasnt' been forever. maybe we just missed each other xD
ah charlie's girlfriend! she'll make an appearance haha
yes! I always felt so awful earlier about making Grace seem like an outsider hehe
Thanks for reading and reviewing! (:
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{reviewid: 2737474, reviewer: 'Kenzie%20%3A%29'}
4th September 2012:
Excellent chapter! I love how Bella and James are a couple :D
Author's Response: im glad that you liked it! (: thanks so much for R+R! i like that they're a couple too! hehe
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{reviewid: 2737002, reviewer: 'Black_Tigerlily'}
3rd September 2012:
This is a fabulous chapter! I really don't know what to say cuz it has so much in it, but I love it!! I wish all chapters were like this, emmensly satisfying. Now, all I want is to know what happens next
:))
Author's Response: haha i know the feeling xD
sometimes there is just so much plot in one chapter that it becomes hard to put it all in words, but i appreciate the review (:
thanks so much!
haha the next chapter should be up soon (:
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{reviewid: 2736747, reviewer: 'potterfan310'}
2nd September 2012:
Yay their together!!, I love how they go to the hospital together. Also the drama = brill!
-Potterfan310
Soph xx
Author's Response: yes they are!!! :D
lol im glad that the drama wasn't too much for you!
thanks for R+R, Soph! (:
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{reviewid: 2736558, reviewer: 'qtpie6652'}
1st September 2012:
Wow. so much drama. lOve it.
Author's Response: im glad that you didn't think the drama was an overload! thanks for R+R! (:
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{reviewid: 2735933, reviewer: 'Ilovedaniel'}
30th August 2012:
LOVE IT! Loved the kiss. And keep writing like this and this will be a kick ass story.
Author's Response: im so glad you like the kiss! haha the next chapter's in the queue (:
thanks so much for R+R!!
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{reviewid: 2735927, reviewer: 'Ilovedaniel'}
30th August 2012:
Love it!Omg! Keep writing so amazingly.
Author's Response: thanks so much! (:
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{reviewid: 2735925, reviewer: 'Ilovedaniel'}
30th August 2012:
OMG! I haven't been on i awhile and i come back to this and more chapters ?! But i'm gonna try to review on every chapter. Its amazing!
10/10
Author's Response: haha thanks so much! and no, YOU'RE amazing! thanks for R+R! (:
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{reviewid: 2734969, reviewer: 'squirrelsocks'}
26th August 2012:
I LOVE YOU!! Thank you so much for this chapter - a kiss was definitely the right way to end it! Keep writing!
Author's Response: hehehe i love you too (:
no, thank YOU for reading and giving me such a lovely review! im so glad that you like it.
the next chapter, hopefully, will be updated soon! it's nearly finished now
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