Eep! More more more! Thank you so much for this story, I'm absolutely loving it. =) I'm glad that Lily can stick up for herself, and the whole POV of James thing was really interesting, you should switch off and on throughout the story, yea? Thanks again, and post more soon!!

Author's Response: Your welcome :D I don't think anyone has said thank you before it makes me smile :D I want to thank you for reviewing! not too many people do and it makes me feel all warm and gooey inside! I just added the next chapter in the queue!! So it should be coming soon :D I'm glad you liked James POV i liked it too :D and I'm planning a switch soonish...ish haha

Lily is amazing she's strong and independent having to help her family after her dad died so she's a really strong person and I love her!

Thank you again for your review :D

Bella Bug *heart*

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Nice!
You write very well. I like Lily and her new friends. I like James, too. His point of view was very good. I especially liked the second to last paragraph. And I'm wondering where they'll go from there. I hope it's not real hate. Or pretend hate, in James' case. But whatever it's going to be -it sure will be interesting. ...I wonder what it's about her that James sees. Is she so powerful, or so different, of does she just have such a strong personality. I can't wait to find out.

Good job!

Author's Response: Omgosh Thank You so much for your review it makes me smile!!

I'm glad you like my writing style and this story is my baby. I am so proud of this one and I'm really glad that you like it.

Lily and her friends make me smile my favorite is Avi so far she's just so cute! I really like James but Al is giving him a run for his money in my book.

It's not real hate just James being the oldest of the golden trio's kids knows all of the stories so he really hates Bellatrix. He finds Lily powerful and different and a stong personality. He sees her as a kind of rival and in the upcoming chapters it intensifies. :D

Thanks so much for the review it means a lot!!

Bella Bug

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My dear Bella, you've done a good job with this story. It kind of makes it a little odd though with "Blake" and "Black". Unless you were going for them to be quite similar. Keep in mind that your character is only 11. Most 11 year old kids don't use big words like that, especially in their thoughts, heck, most 18 year old kids don't. Really good so far, few typos and such but most stories on here are that way. As I said previously, I'm always willing to help you out with that. :)
~Mischief_managed18
P.S.: Read my other stories woman!! S2 (it's a heart!)

Author's Response: I was trying to make it so that the two of them are almost like brother and sister Mr. Blake is supposed to be more along the lines of Lilyanna's father because hers died. Soon that will all be explained...the back story is what makes it interesting!

Thanks for reading and I'm reading yours now!!!

*heart*
Bella Bug

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Oh god, amazing chapter!! I can not wait for the next one :) I'm like, sooo excited right now :D really, soo good :)

Besides the whole story, I really liked that it starts at a regular school, but you only let small hints drop... I didn't figure that out (even though you wrote her age and she was using her phone) until she was talking with the secretary and then it made click ;)
oh my, I am soo looking forward to an update and I can't wait! :)

Author's Response: I swear this just made my day!!! Thank you so much for that amazing review!!! The next chapter is in the queue so hopefully it wont be too long!!! I love the fact that your excited :D it seriously puts a smile on my face *heart*

Bella Bug

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