ok.gmzjxhoeokyhshshit omg okay I have a veRY STRONG FEELING THAT THE RING IS SCORPIUS' AND I WON'T BE aBle to rest until the neXT CHAPTER I SWEAR TO GOD

Author's Response: shhh... we're meant to keep the language 12+ ;)

NEXT CHAPTER IS IN THE QUEUE NEVER FEAR, M'DEAR! ;D

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Wow. Dramatic! Please please update soon. I. Just. Can't. Take. The. Pain. So yeah, update soon. And btw your an amazing writer and all the techniques you use are awesome. You can really build atmosphere. Anyway your by far the writer of one of myfavourite stories so once again I will say: UPDATE NOW

Author's Response: Aww thank you! :)

I will update (hopefully) soon! I'm glad you like the techniques I use. :p

WOW. THANK YOU SO MUCH! *chases trying to hug you*

I'll try to get the new chapter out as soon as possible - just for you! ;)

Thanks for the lovely review! :)

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the only bad part is i now have to wait for an update. (also some grammar issues)

Author's Response: ahaha thanks!

Update will (hopefully) be soon!

Yeah, there's a LOT of errors actually, I don't really edit it mainly because I don't have any time, but when I finish it and/or get some time I'll go through and give it a thorough edit. :D

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THIS CHAPTER!!! ASDFGHJKL!

Louis and Colleen, Lily's letter, Albus sending Lily pictures of cats, Reese finding the ring box!!! So much stuff, so little time to fangirl.

I have doubts about who's the ring is. It may be James' (which I hope it is) since it fell from his stuff but what if it fell from Scorpius' jacket and it's meant for Rose. I have all these feels right now and it's just asdfghjkl!!

You wondeful/evil person for leaving such a cliffhanger!
Seriously in need of the the next chapter or I might go insane/die. I need my Jarissa ♥ ♥

12/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xxx

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!

All will be revealed in the next chapter, never fear! :D

Thanks for the lovely review, again! :D

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OH MY GAWD!! HOLY CRAPPITY MERLIN!!!AAA-AAA-AAA-AAA-AAA-AAAGHASDFGHJKLLDCXN oh my golly gosh oh my gosh, bloody hell, A FREAKIONG ENGAGEMENT RING!!! *hyperventilates then dies in a corner*
1000/1000

Author's Response: muahahahahahahaha :p

Glad you liked it! :D

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LOVE IT. LOVE IT. LOVE LOVE LOVE IT.

Author's Response: ♥

I'm glad you do! :D

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Will there be a chapter 24. Im so exited. Because this is the Best Story i ever read. I love it.

Well i hope that there actually will be 1000 chapters more. Because first you read this, you will never get enough.
Seriusly, i think you should be an author.
😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

Author's Response: igufdgtwdgwiedbkjxgwudskghewdsgdsbxjdbxcvhbkx

THIS IS THE BEST REVIEW I'VE EVER RECEIVED! ♥ ♥ ♥

YOU'RE FAR TOO KIND, MY GOD! JUST LET ME LOVE YOU PLEASE.

Saying that I should be an author, AHHH! IT JUST MAKES MY HEART GO ALL FUZZY AND I'M FLAILING.

Seriously, this is the best review I've ever received. You're just too kind! ♥

Thank you so so so so so so so so so so so so much! :D

Also, chapter 24 had been in the queue for about three days now, so it should be up really soon! *fingers crossed*

Thank you for this amazing review, it's really put a smile on my face! :D

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please, please update this story. Im really enjoying it.:)

Author's Response: aww thank you!

The update is in the queue, so it should be validated in about two days! :D

Thanks for reviewing! :)

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This story is just so funny and awesome!!
When is the next chapter?
Cant wait XD
Keep writing and being awesome!!! ^_^

Author's Response: aww thank you! :D

The next chapter is in the queue! So it should be validated in about two days, never fear! :D

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Great chapter as always.
Is that old reporter Reeta Skeeter?
I recognized the HIMYM pool anology.
Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Nah, she's just a strange old lady ahaha. :p

Glad you recognised it. ;) I love that show. :p

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The crazy woman shouting random stuff at them, Lol :)

I love James!!! - "No, I’ve got three other children. I suppose I should have mentioned that to you." He is just so bloody amazing!!! ♥

So much Jarissa, Can't cope with it. Dying with cuteness/awesomeness of Jarissa ♥ ♥ THEY ARE SO PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER I COULD CRY!

11/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x

Author's Response: ahaha she was put in purely for comedic relief. :D

Jarissa is adorable! AND I FINALLY REMEMBERED TO PUT IT IN MY A/N!! :D

Thanks for the lovely review! :)

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This was an amazing chapter!! I was laughing so much when they spelt her name wrong, given the circumstances that's all that she could think about!
Think you are a great writer and I absolutely love this story! One problem though...
WHEN IS THE NEXT UPDATE!! I can't wait to read on!

Author's Response: ahahaha thanks! I know whenever people spell my name wrong I get so mad, I forget about other things, so I just tried to chuck that in there. :p

Aww thank you! I actually don't know when the next update will be. :/ I have written about 500 words of chapter 23 but I do have limited time and imagination at the moment. :p

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Hey Kayla!

Oh-kay, now where to begin? Well, first thing is first, I really, extremely hope she plans on telling James soon. She can't exactly keep hiding it from him, and while I know for certain he'll probably accept the truth with open arms (like Blake), it bothers me that she hadn't spilled the beans yet. Then again, I'm not a pregnant teenager, so I wouldn't know how scary it would be...

I love Reese's sarcastic attitude upon things. It's rather quirky and I enjoyed her little rant on the weather. It's true though, people over dramatize pregnancy scares in movies, and I can only imagine her irritation.

And the love of food! Oh my gosh, that's exactly how I am when I get bored.just eat EVERYTHING. I'll just be sitting there on my couch, and then I'll get the idea to have a simple snack, which then turns out to be an expedition of rummaging throroughly every corner in the kitchen. Yep, I can relate to Reese there. :)

And I love Blake being the supportive (yet over-protective) bro. It's so cute.

And I love the little things in the story too, like how there's some conflict between James and Lionel.

Anywho, it was a great chapter dearie! :D

Author's Response: Hey, Pearl! Sorry for taking so long to respond! D:

James will be told soon, very soon, don't worry! :D

Whenever I read stories like that, I feel like screaming, "JUST TELL THEM!" but when I was writing it, it just didn't feel right. :p

Also, I'm quite different to Reese personality-wise. :p So that might be a factor ahaha.

I can't NOT write a sarcastic character. Sarcasm comes very easily to me (a little bit TOO easily :p) so it's just so natural to write it ahaha. :p

Pathetic fallacy, it lives up to it's name. ;) So I put that little tidbit in there ahaha. :p

I'm half Italian, half Greek so I ADORE food. :p I just had a quick little break to eat before answering this review ahaha. And I'm about to have lunch soon as well! :p I think all my characters like to eat because that's just who I am and I have to relate to them in some way. :p

Blake is a cutie, I just love him. :'D

The James/Lionel conflict is throughout the whole story, I just can never picture them getting along. :p

Thank you for the lovely review! ♥

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N'aww poor Reese :( James is such a sweetie.

I'm annoyed her dad stood her up, if he relly wanted to make amends then he would have gone.

Totally shipping Jarissa!!♥ they're just perfect for each other.

I love Reese and Louis moments, they're brilliant together and I'm so glad their friends since Louis is normally Al's age and not older.

Oh deary me, in nearly every review I've spelt Reese's name wrong and put a C not S. Whoops, my bad. I generally don't know why I done it :/

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x

Author's Response: James is a sweetheart, isn't he? :p

I'm keeping my lips sealed about her dad. Muahahaha. :p

DARN IT I FORGOT TO ADD THAT IN MY AUTHOR'S NOTE. I PROMISE IT WILL COME UP NEXT CHAPTER! I love that ship name, but I keep forgetting it ahaha. :p

I really like Louis' character, in any story. :D I just find him so much fun to read/write. :D

Don't worry about it! A few people did it and then that side plot came up to me! So I should really be thanking you guys ahaha. :p

Thanks for the lovely review! :D

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I really enjoyed the chapter
please continue as often as posable

Author's Response: Thank you!

I'll try and continue as soon as I can but a major personal issue has just come up and I don't know what's going to happen. It's thrown everything out of whack, so this will probably be the last thing I'll be thinking of.

Thanks for the review! :)

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I have read all the chapters in less than 24 hours, this story is really good !!! And plis really find some time si you can update faster :D

Author's Response: :O WOW!

Thank you so much! I'm going to try and find as much time as I can but something personal has just come up so when I'm not doing school work, I'll probably be trying to deal with that, I'm so sorry. I just won't be able to write in a while. :(

Thanks for the review, I'll try and get a chapter out as soon as I can. :)

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I have tears from reading this chapter, I just want to give Reece a huge hug, she really needs one right now. Sending lots of hugs for Reece xxx

I Love James for sticking up for her ♥ and I'm sorta glad her dad's come around.

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xx

Author's Response: Aww thank you! James is a real sweetheart, isn't he? ;)

Thanks for the review! :D

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We call them track suit bottoms. Great story btw

Author's Response: I thought so! I just wanted to make sure. :)

Thanks for letting me know and thanks for the review! :D

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I'm so glad you actually posted this!! I also, however, need more of Larissa Rizzo and her unexpected pleasures :D

Author's Response: Well, it might be a while because of school (UGH) but I'm going to try and write as much as I can!

Thanks for the review! :D

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That actually made me cry ...

Author's Response: I'm so sorry! :(

(Also sorry for how happy that made me - I like when my writing makes people emotional :p)

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♥
Oh god Al and James' competition. Have to say I think Al's is the best :D

And the baby names, so cute!
Just some ideas - Ryan James Potter/Ryan Blake Potter and Sasha Rose Potter :D

OHMYGOD! Cliffhanger! Are you trying to kill me??? Like why is her dad here now?? What does he want?? Is he here on his own accord or had Blake sent him?? Arghh!!! so many questions..

11/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xxx

Author's Response: Al's are the best. I had quite a lot of fun writing that ahaha. :p

THOSE ARE GREAT IDEAS! If I use them, I'll DEFINITELY credit you! THANK YOU! :D *hugs tightly*

eehheheheheehheheheehe you'll have to wait and see. ;)

Thanks for reviewing! :)

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That's just a pure evil way to end a chapter :(

Author's Response: Muahahahahahahahahahhaahahahhahahaa

don't worry dear, the next chapter is in the queue - ALREADY! :D

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Oh, my feelings! My heart! I want to cry so bad for Larissa! x(

Her mother! I want to just grab her mother and wring her neck. To be honest, I think Larissa did just fine, putting her parents into place. How dare her mother do that to her, just blame her daughter for everything! That's proposterous! To be honest, I might've reacted the same way. The absent of a parent is damaging, and I can totally understand where Larissa is coming from.

I wish her dad could've been more supportive though. It saddens me that though he's dissapointed, and obviously still cares for Larissa, even for just a bit, he wasn't able to handle his biotch of a wife.

I just...I'm mad right now. I'm probably going to go scavage the internet for some crack-fics before I can come back and read the next chapter. Larissa's mom just pees me off!

But despite my crushed feelings, I just want to say, yes, I still liked this chapter very much. It was...intense!

Author's Response: Hello there, Pearl. >:)

I'm deeply sorry for your feelings, I don't mean to crush them.

And ew, her mother. Yucky. But for some reason, some mothers ARE like that. I didn't think it was possible but I've indirectly heard it and it's just awful. :( I've luckily got both my parents by my side, but I know too many people who don't. And sadly, they're the ones with issues, like Larissa. :(

Her dad. I'm keeping my lips sealed for now. ;)

Sorry about the angry emotions, dear. I didn't mean it to be that bad.

(Jokes, I totally did but I still feel awful)

I'm glad you liked it though, thanks for the review darlink! (from the show Angelina Ballerina)

:D

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I love this story! The characters are awesome :) keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it! :D

Thanks for the review! :)

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This is lovely :D! I really loved the connections to everyone and how it wasn't all perfect etc :)

I think Resse should let James pick a godfather - as I believe she's a lovely girl and would think that's fair - if you think this is good for your story :)!

Bar the odd spelling mistake - this story is wonderful and I think you should add more :)!

Author's Response: See, when I originally started writing this I had everyone perfect and dandy and puking sunshine and rainbows but then I took a step back and realised no one's life is perfect and dandy and puking sunshine and rainbows. :p

Don't worry the godfather bit will be coming up soon! Maybe in chapters 24-25? I'm not too sure yet! But it will be happening! :D

Yes, sorry about the spelling mistakes/grammar errors, I usually write this at 2-3am so my concentration level isn't that great ahaha. :p

Thanks for the review! :)

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