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Review #26, by Starkidgleek Sorting

10th February 2012:
Didn't we all think she was supposed to be a ravenclaw? lol... once again you amaze me with your wonderful writing style... I'm actually writing a first-person point of veiw story (but its set in 5th year with some OC) and I use your style as something to look up to because it's just that good.
Can't wait for more story.. andI can't wait to see how you make her interact with Harry!

Author's Response: Yes!! All throughout the books I kept thinking to myself that she should've been a Ravenclaw. :P
Aww oh goodness, you really do know how to flatter a girl. You are too kind. I shall check out your story. :)
I'm so excited for everything from this point on. :D Thank you for reading and reviewing, yet again. It really does mean a lot to me.
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #27, by Gin-gin06 Sorting

10th February 2012:
Mischeif!!!

That was terribly short! :(

Yay! She's in Gryffindor! Although I think I'd be put in Slytherin.

I love how you right young Hermione. She sounds so intellectual and Hermione-ish.

I think in the movie she says the line apart the sky being bewitched to Pansy... but atleast Harry listened to her! :)

And now she's officially at Hogwarts! OH MY GOD! I can't wait for the rest!

And as rgards to my story, I could NEVER kill Scorpius! I would have to killl myself if that happened. So don't worry.

S2, S2, S2,

Gin-gin

Author's Response: Gin-gin!!

I KNOW!! BUT! Did you see that I updated Fallin' and All This Time? :D There's more for you to read!! I think there's actually 2 more chapters for each. In fact, there are! SO READ!! :D :D

Why do you think you'd be a Slytherin?

Aww really?! Thank you missy! Haha I try. I mean if I had her the same as any normal character, it simply wouldn't work...

She says it to someone but I didn't feel like writing that. :P I felt like she said it more to everyone but maybe that's just in my head. xD

I know!! :D I'm pretty darn excited myself! I can't wait for everything to start! Yay!

Hahaha okay good!! :) :) Oh gosh, me too. I would be so upset!! D:

S2 S2 S2 S2,
You're amazing!
~Mischief_managed18

PS: Go read the other chapters for Fallin' and All This Time!

PPS: Shoot me something on my Formspring if you ever want to talk, it's on my author page. :P

Again,
~Mischief_managed18 S2


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Review #28, by TaylaBraxton Sorting

10th February 2012:
Really good chapters so far, can't wait to read more =)

Author's Response: Why thank you!! It's nice to hear that someone is enjoying them. :) It makes me a happy author. I should be updating fairly frequently. :) Thanks for reviewing, it means a lot.
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #29, by KxxDxx Sorting

10th February 2012:
Awesome :D x
Love it :D x
Post again soon please :D x

Author's Response: Aww!! Yay!! Goodness, every time I see a review from you I get super excited. Thank you so much for continuing to read and review. It really does mean a lot to me. :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #30, by DracoM4eva Sorting

10th February 2012:
yay! short chapter but a good one. i think it is soo cool that u live in america. all my favorite shows are american so i cant watch them here and that is sooo annoying!!! anyway post soon i cant wait till she starts classes!

Author's Response: Aww! Well, I'm glad it was at least well done. I hated how short it was but liked that ending... Dilemmas. Really?? Oh no!! That sucks! Can you watch them online at least? Oh I shall! don't worry. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing again, and for actually reading my responses to your reviews. It means a lot. :D
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #31, by i freakin love malfoy Sorting

9th February 2012:
wow you really captured Hermionie's character!!
keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: Ohh gosh! This is one of the most flattering reviews I've ever received. Hearing that means a lot to me!! Thanks for being so darn awesome my dear. I shall try. :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #32, by DracoM4eva Lightning

31st January 2012:
YAY! SHE IS FINALLY IN HOGWARTS! 5 SECOND DANCE PARTY! anyway great chapter! thank you for understanding. i live in australia and unless i am wrong i think u live in america? am i right? i love the way you reply to all your reviews. i love to read your responses as much as i love reading your story and writing the reviews. and might i add, i love the way you write "Until next time, Mischief_managed18" right out of the mouth of professor lupin and it sounds really cool!!! can't wait till the next chapter!

Author's Response: I know!! I'm so beyond excited, it's not even funny!! :D Now is where the real fun will begin, I'm just as excited as you. :) :) Do you really? Awesome! Yes I do actually haha I'm guessing it's the spelling? Aww. I just feel that if people are taking the time to review my story, it's only fair to give them a response. What kind of author would I be otherwise? :) I can't believe how happy it makes me knowing that someone is actually reading my responses. It's definitely a comfort and it makes me feel even better about responding. Hehe it feels so appropriate. :) Anyways, thank you, yet again, for reading and reviewing my story. It means a lot.
Until next time,
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #33, by claudiaandizzy Lightning

30th January 2012:
YES YES YES S2 I love it!! Im so slow at putting up chapters lately:/ but this brought a few tears to my eyes just remembering the beggining:D

Author's Response: Awww I'm so glad you did!! Especially since it was mainly just a filler chapter. I'm so happy! Aww did it???! :D I love knowing that I'm getting emotions out of you readers. It's okay, we all have our slow update times, I know. :P Thank you again for reviewing! It means a lot. :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #34, by dramione_Lover225 Lightning

30th January 2012:
I love you how you describe the scenary in this chapter. my favorite part was when hremione was comparing herslf to hagrid :D
I really believe that you are doing suberb 9/10

Author's Response: Why thank you!! :D I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I hope it wasn't too much. :P Haha right? Oh dear that Hermione has so much going on in her head. Love her. :P
Thank you so much! I'm beyond happy right now, having someone tell me that means a lot. I hope you continue to read and review my stories, it's greatly appreciated! :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #35, by Gin-gin06 Lightning

30th January 2012:
Yumm! Cookies!! :p

Okay, so i LOVE Hermione's reaction to Harry. I'VE READ ABOUT YOU! lol, I can't stop smiling, it's so Hermione-ish.

And Hermione's inner rant of Knowledge when she learns Draco's name. :) It's like she's constaly being distracted by her own smarts. Poor girl.

There were two tiny grammar issues. When Hermione says 'A good 4 or 5 feet taller than the taler kids, I think to make it flow better, it should be 'A good 4 or 5 feet taller than the larger kids. And it looks like there were a couple words ommited during the Harry conversation.

I love this as always and I'm greedy for another chapter in any story *cough*(Fallin')*cough*

S2, S2, S2,

Gin-gin

P.S i think the Scorose will be about Titanic, since I love that movie and It's coming out in 3D.

P.S.S. Have you ever wondered what would happen if a wizard like Lucius ever saw a 3D movie?? Sorry these random questions are the ones that keep me up at night. lol

S2, again cause your AMAZING!

Gin-gin

Author's Response: Right?! I want a cookie now. *sigh*

Hahaha I felt it was Hermione appropriate. :P I honestly think that's exactly how her brain would work. Totally Hermione. xD

Blehh I know, I don't have a beta, so I know a lot of stupid errors get through. Thanks for pointing out that sentence though, it is quite awkward sounding. I'll have to go fix it. Were there?! I can't find them! :(

Yay! I'm so glad you're enjoying it my dear. I know... I know... Good things come to those who wait. ;)

OH!! That actually sounds kind of awesome. But Scorpius can't die. :( That makes me sad.

Haha I wonder quite often what wizards would think of some of the things we do and create. Lol you aren't the only one!!

S2 S2 S2 S2 S2 (because you're worth it! ;) )
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #36, by KxxDxx Lightning

30th January 2012:
I found hermiones and dracos small encounter quite interesting, he wasn't rude to her in a mean way, just dismissive... gets me wondering x

Author's Response: Did you? I hope it's interesting in a good way. :P I guess we shall see what Draco's angle is. ;)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #37, by Starkidgleek Lightning

30th January 2012:
Cookies are yummy... lol... i really actually enjoyed this chapter, despite the fact that it was a filler one. and YAY shes at HOGWARTS! haha... i feel the excitement rising...

Author's Response: Aren't they?! I love cookies!!! Did you?! Aww I'm so glad. I was worried everyone would be disappointed or not bother to respond. So, thank you for responding, it makes me so happy! And I know!! :D So excited for her to be at Hogwarts! NOW it gets fun. :) I'm super excited. Anyways, thanks again for reading and reviewing. I hope you continue to do so. :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #38, by dramione_Lover225 Scarlet and Toads

30th January 2012:
Just like i had expeted this chapter was just. just. so wonderful. Will the bloned boy fall for hermione? will things happen at Hogworts that onone knows about.
you have my blood and heart pummping with excitment on what will happen next. I need more this story is like a drug to me lol. 9/10

Author's Response: Gah, thank you!! Oh gosh, I'm so flattered, it means a lot to me. Oh you can bet things will be happening that no one knows about. ;P Yay! Wow, you sure know how to make a girl happy when you're reviewing her story hahaha.. Thank you for continuing to read the story and for leaving reviews as you read. That's what makes me want to continue writing. :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #39, by dramione_Lover225 Diagon Alley

30th January 2012:
Wow that was fun. I cant wait to see what is waiting in the next chapter. Will the blonde boy reconize her will she be able to leave her parents??? I really love your story its getting more and more exsiting as i read...
9/10

Author's Response: Why thank you!! Haha I'm glad that I'm leaving you questioning what the next chapter holds. That makes me happy. :) I'm so happy to hear that!! :D Thank you so much! Not only for leaving a review but for reading my story and taking the time to leave the review. It means a lot. :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #40, by janeaustenfan5 Realization

26th January 2012:
whoop whoop! another chapter and I am starting to really love it!! :D I thought that Hermione's parents reactions to her receiving the letter was slightly unbelievable because as far as I know they don't believe in witches or wizards so I would've thought that they would've tried to make tell her that she was imagining things and it wasn't real or something like that. I just thought that they believed her a little too quickly than I would've if I were her mother. I'm really excited for the next chapter though and can't wait to see where you are going to take this :)

Author's Response: Wooo! Chapter 2 down! :P Yeah just wait, just wait. :P I know I would be freaking out if I were her mum but I don't think I would do it in front of her... It would be behind closed doors then I would calmly sit down later or something. I mean your daughter just told you she's a witch. o.O Anyways, thanks for reviewing!! :D I love this story. I'm so excited to be writing it.
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #41, by janeaustenfan5 The Letter

26th January 2012:
sorry this took so long! but i thought it was a very good start and I'm excited to see where its heading :D one thing I wanted to say was that it was difficult to believe that she was ten years old because her voice sounded a lot older than that. so just try to make her sound her age but otherwise its a great start and I'm excited for more :)
p.s. i said the review was gonna be long but im leaving one for each chapter so it'll add up to one super douper long one!

Author's Response: Haha yeah you brat. S2 (Just kidding, I love you) Yay!! Why thank you my dear! :D I know, I know. Lol I always have some issues with that. I mean I know Hermione would sound somewhat smarter than most 11 year olds but not necessarily at this level. I shall work on that. :)
That's fine, I love getting reviews!! :D I love you my dear. Thanks for the review! :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #42, by Bella Bug Scarlet and Toads

23rd January 2012:
Now this is were it gets tricky haha not stealing the words of fabulous Jo but still making the story close enough where the original amazing story isn't lost. This is amazing I love how she's already attracted to Draco haha ;) You need to write woman!! I want to see how you get Hogwarts written :D

10/10 lovey love haha

Bella Bug

Author's Response: Hahaha right?! At first it was rather difficult but after working with it a little, it became quite easy. :) Lol I do as well. :P Oh miss Hermione, if only you knew what you were getting yourself into. :P
I shall I shall!! Should have a chapter in the queue in the next couple days. :D
Thank you missy for reviewing!! :D
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #43, by Bella Bug Realization

23rd January 2012:
I cannot wait until she gets to school :D

10/10 Lovey!!!

Bella Bug

Author's Response: Oh gosh, believe me, I can't wait either!! :D
Gahhh!! lol
Thank you my dear!
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!! :)
Thanks for the review,
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #44, by Bella Bug The Letter

23rd January 2012:
Ok at work but now I can review lol *heart* this chapter is absolutely adorable! I love that you focus on Hermione it makes it seem innocent and a change of perspective but still just as enchanting. I always wanted to know how Hermione recieved her letter and this kindof gave me a really sweet picture!

Love bug I have to say this is my favorite story :D

10/10
Bella Bug

Author's Response: Yay for reviews! They make me a happy author! :D Awww!! I'm glad you think so! Oh goodness, I can't even tell you, I absolutely LOVE writing from Hermione's POV. I find it extremely easy, and I love being able to create and bring to life pieces of Hermione we don't really know but that we get to kind of guess at. I'm glad that you're liking it so far!! :)
Yay!!! :D It's definitely my favorite as well. :) Anyways, thanks for the review my dear.
S2
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #45, by Lou Scarlet and Toads

23rd January 2012:
Really good! Can't wait till the new chapter comes out, I'll be bookmarking your page waiting every day to see when it comes out :) Well done again.

Author's Response: Why thank you!! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Oh my goodness, thank you so much! I can't tell you how extremely happy that makes me, knowing that people are anxious to read more. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story, it means a lot!! :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #46, by Gin-gin06 Scarlet and Toads

22nd January 2012:
Mischief!! She's Almost To Hogwarts!! YAY! :D :D *Happy Dance*

I'M SO EXCITED! lmao

And Of Course I Want To Join A Quidditch Team With You!! That Be AMAZING. Do You Know If There Is Really Going To Be A Quidditch Game At The London Summer Olympics??? I Heard There Was, But I'm Not Sure. I Know, I'm A Dumbass.

What I Liked: Neville, He's So Shy, And Then Talkitive, Then Shy Again. I Also Like the Cliffie,, With Harry. *gasp* I Know I'm Not Mad At A Cliffie For Once. It's A Miriacle! LMAO!

What I Didn't Like: That Blond Boy Is Smug And That He Laughs At Hermione. *sigh* Why Does He Have To Be Sooo Mean???

What I Want: The Wingardium Leviso Scene, When Hermione Becomes Petrified, Buckbeak, S.P.E.W, And Whatever Cute, Romantic Scene With The Blond Boy You Can Think Of. ;)
I Started Writing A Scorose Today. No Real Plot At The Moment, Just Kinda Seeing Where It Goes. :)

Write Soon,

S2,

--Gin-gin

Author's Response: I KNOW! I'M JUST ABOUT AS EXCITED AS YOU ARE!! IT MAKES ME SO HAPPY!! Okay, done with all caps. :P
I love Neville, I hope I did a good job capturing his character. I feel like that's kind of how he would act, especially around someone new. Definitely shy at first, but slowly warms up but then realizes he's said too much and goes back into his shell. *gasp*!! You actually LIKED one of my cliffies?! Yay!! I'm so happy!! I pleased Gin-gin!
Because he's so bloody gorgeous and he can get away with it? *sigh*
Oh I will most definitely include all of that! Don't you worry your pretty little head off. :) Especially the stuff that involve that little blond boy. ;)
Gahhh!!! I WANT TO READ!! lol You'll have to let me know how that comes along.
I shall of course!
Until next time,
~Mischief_managed18 S2


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Review #47, by DracoM4eva Scarlet and Toads

22nd January 2012:
YAY! I've been waiting so long for this chapter. i literally check every 5 minutes to see if it has been validated yet and when i checked this morning it had so i was really excited! another great chapter and i know the next chapter is going to be brilliant! i was asking about you age so i can kind of get an idea of how you were thinking when writing the story. and now that i know how old you are the story seems different, good different. before i knew how old you are i was thinking as if somebody my age was writing it. i'm 14 and how a 14 year old thinks is way different from how a 19 year old thinks. i know i'm weird. trust me i'm not a stalker or anything. i know form the way you spell a few words that you don't live in the same country as me. can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Aww I'm so glad to hear that you're enjoying my story. :) Your reviews make me so happy every time I see them, you know how to flatter a girl. Aww well, I'm glad that it was a pleasant surprise then. And I'm glad to know that you read the responses I give to your reviews. Know that I will ALWAYS respond to my reviews, that's one thing you can count on. :) You aren't weird, I totally get that different ages definitely think and write differently so I can understand the curiosity. :) What country are you from?? Well, it shouldn't be too long until the next chapter. :)
Thank you, yet again, for reading and reviewing my story. It means so much to me!! :)
Until next time,
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #48, by Lana Scarlet and Toads

22nd January 2012:
Yay, the first meeting of the historical Golden Trio! I'm excited! I'm anxious to see her first thoughts of them... i'm pretty sure she hated Ron, when she first met him! Post more soon! Loved this chappie!
Lana

Author's Response: I know!! I was so excited! I had to stop myself from making this chapter like 8000 words. I figured this would be a good ending. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story, it really means a lot. The reviews keep me going and are the reason I write. Thank you thank you!! :) I hope you continue to read. I shall post more in a week or so. Glad you enjoyed this chapter! :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #49, by KxxDxx Scarlet and Toads

22nd January 2012:
I love it how you've changed it, very interested to see why you have! Post soon x x

Author's Response: Why thank you!! I'm really glad that you're enjoying it so far and that you like the changes. Thank you, yet again, for reviewing my story. Honestly, reviews are what keep me going. :) I shall be posting soon, I promise. :)
~Mischief_managed18


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Review #50, by Starkidgleek Scarlet and Toads

22nd January 2012:
i love the little feelings she has for draco... its cute... I also can't wait to see what the sorting hat says when she is getting sorted! should be interesting... I love the way you portay hermione.. you're very good at it... please update again soon!

Author's Response: I think so as well. Have to start out with the little things right? :P Gahh I am actually quite excited for that part myself. :) It shall be interesting indeed. Awww. Why thank you!!! I can't even tell you how amazing and flattering that comment was. I'm pretty proud of how I've been portraying her, but I didn't know if others liked it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing again, it makes me happy and makes me want to continue writing. :)
~Mischief_managed18


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