Hi Sam!
SO MANY FEELS WITH THIS CHAPTER. I cant believe they graduated! And there's only one chapter left :( I just love Ciaran and Louis together! And I also love how unique all the members of the Weasley/Potter families are. All of your characters really stand out, which I love! Time for the final chapter! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hey!

I'm glad you love them and my other characters. Thank you so much for leaving a review. :)

Sam.

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OH MY GOD SAM. SO MANY FEELS! SO PROUD OF YOU FOR FINISHING THIS STORY, YOU'RE UTTERLY AMAZING.

But I will say, I was a bit distracted while reading the A/N and lines merged together in my brain and I read "Enchanted 2..blah blah Louis/Frankie" and I swear I had a heart attack.

Cannot wait for the sequel! Congrats for finishing,

Liz! *had a heart here but forgot it doesn't work*

Author's Response: AH! THANK YOU, I'M SO EXCITED!

Haha, it is a bit distracting, but fear not, Louis/Frankie is a completely different type of story. It's weird to write, I keep thinking that Louis is cheating. :P

Thank you for leaving a review. :)

Sam.

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Wow. I'm not sure how to react. It's a super sweet ending, but I'm sad it's over. But there will be a sequel, right? And you'll eventually add some more onto Charmed? I'd love to see some Louis pov. This has been a wonderful story to read, and I've really loved it. It's what got me hooked on the rest of your writing. I love that you take plotlines that are similar tonality many other fanfics and really make them individual and unique to your style of writing. Thank you for a great story, and I'll see you next update, where ever that may be.

Author's Response: Hey.

Yes, there is definitely a sequel. I'll be writing it while posting Charmed, Silver Linings and my new Louis/OC, so hopefully there'll be a few chapters written by the time I post it. Which will be soon. :)

Thank you so much for the lovely compliments and for sticking with this story. I hope you enjoy the sequel just as much. :D

Sam.

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OMG
I loved this story!
It was so cute!
(Major overuse of exclamation marks...)
Key was so majorly cynical and Louis so cute, I love them, immensely.
Put part 2 up quickly please!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'll have part two up soon. :)

Sam.

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This was a really great chapter can't wait for the next one! :)

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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Zomg. THE BAD GUY. I SEE NOW. Not a fan of Ellis, at all. At the same time, however, I want to know more about him. But he's still a meanie. :c

One chapter left? D: SO SAD.

Great chappie as always,
Liz.

Author's Response: You see! Ellis is very bad I'm this and two. You will definitely find out more about him. :)

Thank you so much for leaving a review.

Sam.

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This is by far my favorite story on this site, you really know how to build awesome characters that people can understand and relate to!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it!

Sam.

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If heaven became a fanfiction chapter, this would be it. I LOVE skander and have a bit of an inappropriate crush on him, despite not seeing much of him. Hugo's being an idiot but bless him, he's lovely. And I like Logan as well :)
The presents are perfect and honestly we all wish we had a relationship like Louis and Key's. *coughjealousycough* But seriously I cannot wait for this to continue. Although I wouldn't blame you if you gave up on this and actually became a writer (when it happens I want a signature by the way). So thanks for an awesome chapter :D
Asher

Author's Response: Aww, that's so sweet. Thank you.

Haha. Skander is awesome and you'll see more of him as the series continues. Your crush won't be inappropriate soon. :P Hugo is just adorable. And I'm so glad you like Logan, he's one of my favorite characters ever.

I do want to be a writer, but don't worry, I'll never give up fanfiction. Even if I do make it as an author, I'll still be here. :D

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Sam.

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YAY. NEW CHAPTER! asdfghjk...
Okay, so in the typical Liz fashion..this review isn't going to be very coherent. It's not going to "flow" and all that. But whatever, I'm still sleepy.

"I think I've turned into moral support. I'm not sure how I feel about that."
Key, you are so cute. :3

Luka and Kyle? Even cuter. But mostly Kyle.

ScoRose? Well, Key is becoming quite the match maker, isn't he? Whether he likes it or not.

And he's leaning how to read? Yay for Key!

Um. That's about it.

Liz.

Author's Response: Awww. Yeah, Ciaran and Kyle - two of the cutest characters in the fic and the ones who try hardest not to. :P

Yeah, he can't help it. He tells them what they want to hear, so they'll leave him alone, but it never works. He's stuck. :D

Thank you for the review.

Sam.

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Whoop whoop! That was as adorable and amazing as I thought it would be and I'm SO glad that they finally worked it out. All I can say now is that I'm glad you're writing a sequel because I'm not sure what I'd do with just 33 chapters. You know what, just change the names and publish this (only joking don't sue me oh great lawyers of JK Rowling). But seriously, this story is really good.
Asher

Author's Response: Yep, they worked out. The end is near, they just had to. :P

Thank you so much for the huge compliment. I love reading your reviews so much, Asher.

Sam.

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Love it! It's the perfect resolution to kyle and luka's relationship :)

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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Several things need to be said... one, AWESOME CHAPTER! I've said it before and I'll say it again, my OTP because they are the cutest couple EVER!!! Secondly, sequel? You have no idea how happy that makes me, talk about an epic christmas present :D Thank you. Thirdly, Kyle and Luka are two of my favourite characters in this (besides the main two) and I was just wondering whether they were going to sort things out, being so adorable and all.
Thank you for writing this, it's amazing.
Your loyal fan
Asher

Author's Response: Yay, I'm happy to hear they're your OTP. They're two of my favorite characters to write.

Yes, sequel! There'll be three stories altogether as well as the missing moments collection, Charmed. So, four! I hope you enjoy them!

Kyle and Luka are awesome, I'm glad you like them. I love them. :)

Thank you so much, Asher.

Sam.

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It's not often that I review a story the first chapter in, but I think this one deserves a review- 2817 words in and I'm already hooked... Keep up the excellent writing!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it and I hope you continue to. Thank you for leaving a review. :)

Sam.

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Hello there :)
So, I have been reading this story practically since you started it, but I've never actually taken the time to review, which I now greatly regret. Seriously, I literally do a happy dance whenever I see an update on this. Anyway, I'm going to try and sum up everything in here.

First off, I'd like to say that when I started this, I wasn't very big on slash. It's not that I had issues with it, I just never found any story with it that seemed to have an original plot and would avoid cliches. When I read the summary, I decided that this was an idea that I haven't ever stumbled upon, and, after reading the first chapter, I decided that it had great potential. So I kept reading it, and it was no more than four chapters before I was hooked (I now read slash very often and have even taking to writing it, so I owe you for that one).

All of your characters are very believable, and it didn't move along too quickly, making everything being completely sudden and uncalled for. You eased Louis and Ciaran into their relationship, you didn't force them together. That's something that I love seeing when I read stories (and I must admit, making everything move too quickly is a fatal flaw of my own writing). Not only that, but you managed to include realistic conflict and didn't decide to just kind of forget about Ciaran's blindness. You kept it there and didn't take the lazy way out by trying to get around it and try to make the readers forget about it.

Which brings me to how you write Ciaran. The first thing that I wish to say on this topic is that he is probably the absolute best OC that I have ever read. He's witty, sarcastic, and totally awesome. The way in which you write him, especially with his blindness, is, in my opinion, perfect. You often reminded us about how his other senses are heightened, which is something that I have often seen neglected in blindness stories. In addition, I want you to know that I could practically feel my heart breaking when you were telling how he lost his sight.

If I tried to say everything that I love about this story, we'd probably be here for a long while (this review already is very lengthy). This is, without a doubt, the best fic that I have ever read, and I am not kidding in the least. Often times, I forget it's fanfiction; I just sit in my chair thinking about why it hasn't been published yet. I want to take my own writing and bury it deep in the ground (in case that causes some confusion, that was indeed meant as a compliment). And naturally, when I saw the word 'sequel', I did yet another happy dance.

Keep up the amazing work, as well as your other fics that I absolutely love to bits, and I look forward to not only the sequel to this, but also to any future writing of yours!


~Anna :)

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Come on Asher, don't cry! But damn this was the sweetest thing I've ever read. I want to keep all of them in a room somewhere. Those glasses were a great idea, although my new least favourite word is 'technically'. Please keep going I'm dreading the end and yet can't wait to see what happens. It's just so nice that CJ can finally (sort of) see everyone. I'll just go and die now of happiness and squeeing..

Asher

Author's Response: No, don't cry, Asher! Yeah, I hate the word 'technically' now. But it's very true and it's one word Ciaran knows he can't forget. He's wanted to see for so long that he knows he'll could easily forget that it's not real.

Don't die of happiness and squeeing - the next chapter is up. ;)

Sam.

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Ohmygod! Ohmygod! Ohmygod! I swear I am slightly addicted to this story! Such a good chapter and I really want to know what Louis is planning! I made the mistake of reading your other stories the other night, and I think I might be hooked on those too! Looking forward to the next update. 10/10
Mae :) xx

Author's Response: You'll know what Louis has planned in the next chapter, I promise. I hope you like it. And thank you; I'm glad you liked my other stories, too. :)

Sam.

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Ohmygoodness!!
This first chapter was amazing! I'm already in love with Ciaran and I want more!!
I am definitely going on to read the next chapter...and then the next chapter...then the one after that...then. Okay. You get the picture.
Now on to a proper review.
I think this is a really interesting concept. I've never read a fanfictiom-or anything for that matter-where the main character is blind, and it really changes the dynamics of the story. I think other people would struggle where you have succeeded-it must be hard to 'describe' stuff, and fit in some imagery with a character who can't see, but somehow you have done it!
I also love the characterization of Ciaran-he is just so adorable and perfect!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliments on writing this story and for loving Ciaran. He's one of my favorite OCs to write, so it's awesome to hear.

Thank you so much for leaving this wonderful review. :)

Sam.

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AT LAST! The long awaited sex and I wasn't disappointed. I love this chapter and the relationship those two have going on, the sweetest pair ever and my OTP. If I could draw or any equivilant artform I'd draw fanart inspired by this story but since my skills in that department are severely lacking I'm afraid you'll have to suffer another poem. Basically because I can't spend all of this ranting at you about how much I love this fiction.

Hidden sight,
forever night,
Reach forward and touch to see his light.
Stars in the sky growing clearer now.
Will he end his true loves blight?
Eyes will see when they know how.

Much loveness and thanks again for the fiction,
Asher

Author's Response: AT LAST! It only took how many chapters. :P

Aww, thank you so much. I love the poems. :D

Sam.

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Hello :) I love this story, I really do, I read it all in one night on my phone when I couldn't sleep (I read some of it before, but you've updated like a machine since then so I started again ;D) and I loved it so much. Louis is wonderful, I love his character, I like how different he is from Ciaran, yet they still work so beautifully together. The concept is so different, I wondered how it could work having a blind character narrate the story but you've made it work really well. It's interesting and I'm always curious on what will happen next! I love Lucy and Jack! They're so different yet they seem to work in a weird way. And I'm so glad they didn't break up, I would have probably cried if that happened! But their make up scene was adorable, because Louis loves Ciaran for who he is and you've just got to love that. I hope you update soon because I'm loving what you've done so far! xx

Author's Response: Hey!

I'm so glad that you love this story. Yes, they so different, but they still understand each other and what they need, which is definitely a good thing in their relationship given their insecurities.

The concept was something so new to me when I started this, so I'm really happy that it works, that people like this story.

Thank you so much for leaving a review and saying such nice things about the characters, I love them, too! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

Sam.

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Well now I'm curious and won't be able to concentrate for the next week or so. At least now I know who to point the finger at when fail my A levels. Ah me, but what is a slash obsessed boy to do? Oh yes, forget education and write more slash. :)
A little haiku inspired by my favourite fiction for you. (by the way I mean this fiction)

Red and blue entwined,
Clearing the darkness from sight,
Open eyes can see.

Thanks again for a wonderful chapter
Asher

Author's Response: Hello, Asher!

We shall be slash obsessed, forget education, fail our A Levels and write/read more slash together! :D

Thank you so much for the haikus, I love them, and for reviewing this story. I'm glad you're liking it. I hope you like the rest, and the sequels. :)

Sam.

(P.S. No failing. That is bad. We can be good. :P)

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Very interesting concept! I love your main character! I think he is very interesting and original and has a great voice! His friends sound interesting and like they are on opposite ends of the spectrum. Lucy seems a bit more reserved than Jack who seems to be a very loud and joking around type person, or at least this is what I'm getting from your descriptions. I can also tell that there must be something going on between Jack and Lucy if she doesn't usually call him by name. I think that this is a good beginning to your story, it really sets up your characters very well! Altogether, this was an enjoyable first chapter! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Hey.

I'm glad you like Ciaran, because he's my favorite to write. Yeah, Lucy and Jack are completely different, but there's just something about them that they must like... ;)

Thank you so much for leaving a review. :)

Sam.

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If this chapter hadn't progressed as it did, I would have murdered you. So congratulations, Sam, you saved yourself from a slow and painful death (and added another awesome chapter to an already amazing story).

Author's Response: *wipes brow* Phew. Thank you so much for reviewing and for loving the chapter enough to save my life. :D

Sam.

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What an emotional roller coaster! Throughout this I hated your characters then loved them then melted in a confused puddle on the floor so here's a haiku to express my love for your stories.
Sam, Slytherin's heir
wondrous is your enchanting
fiction, thanks again.

And since that one was awful, have another.
Thank you for writing,
Your characters, delighting,
My life enhancing.

Basically, thank you so much for putting the time and effort in to write this and update fairly quickly and regularly.

Your loyal reader
Ash

Author's Response: It's definitely a love/hate relationship when they're being silly. The hate never lasts, though. :P

Thank you so much for the poems, I love them. And for reviewing. You're awesome!

Sam.


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Who! Update! I really nearly hated you because I thought that they were going to break up! But its good now :) Epic chapter and I can't wait for the next update! I really want to know what happened with Ellis, and Kyle and Luka need to get back together! Mae :) x

Author's Response: A similar response from others. I'm glad you loved the chapter enough to not hate me. I could never break them up, not when it took me do long to get them together. :P

Ellis will come up soon. :)

Thank you for leaving a review.

Sam.

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Sam, how could you do this to me? They're finally dating, and I can stop bugging you about it, but now things are going badly... Gahhh. Now I'll just have to bug you until they have a good, happy, functional relationship and everyone supports them :) I love, love, love Louis's character, especially the way he defends Ciaran. This chapter was just so good! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hey, Cassie.

Thank you so much for reviewing. Maybe things will work out. ;)

Sam.

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