You are bloody amazin!
I love your writing and i love this story!!!
I can't wait for th enext chapter!!!
i read the entire thing in one sittin!!!
thats how obsessed i am about it!
thank you for writing this story!
thank you thank you thank you!

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much for the lovely review!
I am very glad that you like the story and happy as a clam that you enjoy reading it so much!
Next chapter will be up soon, I promise!
Lots of love,
Kate

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But she IS a kind of auror,isn't she?xD
-“Naomi, it’s dangerous. You are not prepared and you know better than anyone that we never let aurors come to missions when there are personal reasons involved”- he told me.
I think that because of this part.That wasn't just about her father,wasn't it?Narcissa will do something against her on that match,I can feel it.xD She'll hex Lily or Rhea or something like this,'cause she wants revenge.

I'd like to discuss about this in your Meet Author Page,but I have some problem with posting on forum,so...that's only solution.;)
LovingMarauder
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Author's Response: Hahaha well she does know things, you'll see in the next chapter :)
I don't have a Meet the Author Page, I'm sorry about that but I am really busy and I cannot afford to spend time in forums :(

Ah, Narcissa... you'll see :) I can't tell you anything!!
Lots of love,
Kate

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Thank you for updating,I couldn't wait anymore.xD

Sirius shared his secret with two girls,and that girls are Naomi's 'friends'.Perfect,huh?I think,that Narcissa said something to Meg (for example:She's just manipulating all of you.She doesn't care for you,but I would care and I cared.),so she get mad.-.-

AND NAOMI WAS A BIT OF WARM QUEEN!!!TO LILY!!!AND REMUS KNOWS THAT SHE HAS SOME EMOTIONS!!!Isn't that great?xD

That girl is really looking for trouble.If they killed Lulu H,they can kill Naomi Ivy too.It's not big deal.And please,don't say me that she's an auror too.'Cause,if she is,then you are the best author on Earth.(I'm sorry J.K. Rowling.)I could guess some things,but that-not.;)

I like Walter a lot,too.Can he be more present in story?=)

Don't kill Naomi,her father or somebody else in next chapter (I know,I know,that's impossible,but try xD).

10/10
Update soon.
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Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review!!
Yeah, Sirius had to admit that he loves her at some point and, since Rhea is his best friend, who better than her to help him out? Lily was just in the right place at the right time ;)

Hmm, I would love to be the best author in the world haha but sadly I am not. Naomi is not a real auror, but you are up for some surprises in the next chapter, that's for sure!

Can't promise I won't kill anybody but I'm not saying that I will either! You will have to read on ;)
Lots of love,
Kate

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Can Naomi be a little bit of Warm Queen in next chapter?Just for 3,6 seconds,please?*puppy eyes* And,can you put some Naomi-Sirius-Secret-For-Secret part in next chapter?=)

I expect from you that you'll update soon.=)
LovingMarauder~
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Author's Response: Thank you for the review!!
Haha well, I'm updating right now ;)
Lots of love,
Kate

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I saw NOW,after 5 days,the new chapter.Lulu H died,'cause she liked wrong guy.And Naomi can be scared of falling in love now.And that's wrong,because we all know (except her minions,Lily,Rhea,The Marauders,whole Hogwarts and her) that she has SOME feelings for our dear Sirius.

I liked the Sirius-Naomi's father part.It's somehow...relaxing.xD
I think,Lulu H had disappointed Naomi,because they are Ice Queens,and Ice Queens are not falling in love.Never ever.
Narcissa's POV was also good,but poor Narcissa doesn't know that the beautiful animal is her worst nightmare.

Update soon =)
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Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review!!
Haha yes we all know she has some feelings for Sirius, but she is absolutely confused and I don't think she'll see it any time soon :)
Narcissa's POV is just a short introduction to what her life will become, we will be seeing more and more of her in the upcoming chapters. I hope you like it!
Lots of love,
Kate

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Oooo! A cliffy with Narcissa's P.O.V I see this becoming deadly!!! And omg! Lulu was killed! Awww, I'm so glad she accepted Sirius' help, he was so nice to be there for her. And I'm happy that we got to see Naomi in a vulnerable state! I can't wait for the next chapter Kate! Truly amazing! 10/10

XOXO WildFlower!

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review!
I really wanted to show my readers that Naomi is still a human being capable of normal emotions, I am sorry I had to kill Lulu for that but it is the only situation in which someone like Naomi can become vulnerable...!
Sirius... oh, he is just amazing, isn't he?! I must admit I am in love with my own character lol
Next chapter will be up soon, promise!
Lots of love,
Kate

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This chapter was ok,but I didn't like it like the previous.The whole that itchy-bitchy thing with hexing poor Charlie was brutal,but Naomi Ivy and Lulu H are just cold as Antarctica,and it will stay so,so long until Naomi understands,that she's in love with Sirius.
And shag with James?!When I saw her dream,I thoudh 'Oh dear God,now is over,Sirius will be deep hurt,she'll lost her only friend and second person about who she cares',and than,I mention that you wrote that part other than rest of story.
I'm sorry for my bad English,it isn't my nativ language.
Update soon.=)
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Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Well, Naomi and Lulu are really cold and don't usually think about anyone else. Naomi is mean and we know that; the fact that she can be nice too will not suddenly just change who she is.
The dream is the first manifestation of the goodness in her; she was afraid and felt bad when she thought she'd lost Sirius but I couldn't just happen because she isn't aware that she likes him yet. Dreams come from the subconscious part of the mind and so Naomi has no control of them; thus anything can happen, even her breaking down.
With regards to James... well, she's mean, selfish and beautiful and James is popular, charming and very attractive. It is just natural that they feel this attraction for each other. Had Naomi been a nice girl she wouldn't have touched him but like I said, she is not.
Lots of love,
Kate

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No - no - NOOO! It this can't it! OMG, someone has over heard their secret didn't they - ahhh! I could be wrong, but I want to know! To be honest, although I love her and Sirius completely - something just captures me between her and James since the beginning -damn, if he wasn't meant to be with Lily! *shakes fist*

I am absolutely hooked on this story, you are such a great job Kate! I'm loving it, enjoying it - just waiting impatiently until the next chapter! Brilliant story so far! 10/10

XOXO WildFlower!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and writing so many reviews! It really, really, makes my day! Next chapter will be up very, very soon!!
Oh, I'm trying my best but I have to admit that I do love this story and I have a thing for getting people in trouble... James and Naomi are good together... but also is Sirius... and James' supposed to be with Lily... how complicated ;)
I hope you like what's coming next!
Lots of love,
Kate

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Hmmm, I think - I don't know if it will happen - but I think Naomi will be kicked off her pedistal somehow. I just have a feeling. Not sure what you have up your sleeve so I'm very curious.

Aside from that

HOLY CRAPY DOODLES!

The moment between Sirius and Naomi was spot on perfect! I loved, loved, LOVED it! Those two just need to admit they are in love with each other, but I love how they still have their guards up, love the banter between them - ugh, perfection!

XOXO WildFlower!

Author's Response: HiiI!!
I just realised I never replied to this review! How horrible of me! I was so sure I did!!!
How are you!?
I am so glad you are liking this so much!
Please keep reading and enjoying!!
Lots of love,
Kate

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What more can I say? This chapter was Perfection in writing. Such a great job! I love how everything is coming together - the flow, the characters - everything! It's just engrossinly beautiful!

XOXO WildFlower!

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WOW! What a twist! So Sirius has already met Naomi then and is already head over heals! Oooh I must keep reading!

XOXO WildFlower!

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I really loved this chapter! Switching to James P.O.V was really well done, you handled it very well it flowed awesomely. I'm kind of happy you made it in his P.O.V than Sirius' - which with other fanfic's it would have surely gone. This chapter also made me laugh in various places, Sirius and Naomi were just hilarious here - the humour is starting to rise and I can see Sirius and Naomi push each others buttons in a good way, Sirius makes us see a little of Naomi's vulnerability - two strong personalities are bound to cause cracks. I can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve. I would love to see more of Narcissa's bitchyness - especially since her position as Queen Bee in jeopardy.

Off to the next chapter with much eagerness!

XOXO WildFlower!

Author's Response: Hi again!
Thanks once more!!
Well, Narcissa is important but in this first half of the fic we won't see her much... I have a special surprise prepared... but I can't tell you anything else :)
Lots of love,
Kate

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Aw behind that tough exterior and that huge goal of her's to be Queen Bee, Naomi is such a ... well ... sweetie lol! I guess she is so focused she doesn't see how caring she really is. I think everyone else see's it but her really. Loved the small moment with Sirius, just the right amount of time for them together - for a moment in the previous chapters I thought she was going to have a crush on James, and strangely I wasn't going to protest! However, I probably read it wrong haha! But that's okay, Lily and James are suppose to be together :D

I'm loving it so far, especially your OC's, you've given them all a special charm to their personalities which makes them really stand out from each other. I'm very fond of Rhea - she's adorably lovely! I can just picture this entire story as a movie in my head - you're doing such a great job Kate!

Off to the next chapter I go!

XOXO WildFlower!

Author's Response: I so adore your reviews and your honesty! Thank you so much!
Yes, I do love Rhea as well, she is quite an important character but that doesn't mean she can't be the sweetest thing in Hogwarts =)
Lots of love,
Kate

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Loving it! I love how you've written Naomi, writing girls with such attitude can either be extremely good or extremely bad. But the way you've written Naomi is down to a T. You just can't hate her, she's ridiculously delicious! The other characters, such as the Marauders and Lily and the OC's personalities are already taken off to a wonderful start. Perfection once again Kate! I'm eager for more - so continuing on!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! =)

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Hey Kate! Do you remember me? Long time no see huh? Hahaha! But enough of that - O.M.G Kate! This first chapter is simply amazing! I can tell you've worked so hard on this and it shows! I'm going to continue reading immediately! I think I'm going to really like this!

Good start!

XOXO WildFlower!

Author's Response: Hello!!
Yes I do remember you! Thank you so much for the review! I really hope you like this fic, I personally think it's better than the first one! :)
Lots of love,
Kate

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i love this!!! but i dont like james and naomi together. not right.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!
I know it's not right, but our Naomi wouldn't be Naomi if she played by the rules all the time =)
Lots of love,
Kate

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Story is great!I adore Naomi,she's so...perfect.=)
But,can you PLEASE write more chapters in month?^^
Thanks.=)

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review!
I am glad you like Naomi, I like her too!
I am so sorry it takes a while to write but uni is crazy and I have loads of work. I promise I will try to update more often!
Lots of love,
Kate

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I like this story so much.I love the way you built Naomi and Sirius and I like that you're keeping it quite real with Naomi not becoming all lovely and nice and totally changing her personality with her liking Sirius!!! Keep going, I cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the lovely review!
Yes, I think it is important that Naomi's personality changes slowly because, well, she's very mean and cold you can't just get rid of it because of a crush :)
Next chapter will be up soon!
Lots of love,
Kate

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could you please write more?!

Author's Response: Hello, thanks for reviewing!
Next chapter is coming up =)
Lots of love,
Kate

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10/10 for the whole story. I love it and Sirius/Naomi would have one of the funniest/sweetest relationships cause she would be nice only to him but somehow still manage to be a bitch ahhaha can't wait for lily/james though! love this, keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review =)
Haha yeah, Sirius and Naomi are a very particular couple... we'll see how they handle their relationship :)
James and Lily... ah, the bad thing is that everyone knows they'll end up together no matter what so I'm gonna try to make it as exciting as I can :P
Lots of love,
Kate

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Kate, this story is really the only story on this site that i check daily to see if there was a chapter added. Naomi is thee person I always wished I was and I love the way Sirius is presented. I also think that this story is a refreshing change from the James-Lily diluted stories that are supposed to be S/OC fanfics. I love James in this story because he is far more masculine than the whiny, "I'm so in love with Lily" James in other stories. You are an AMAZING writer. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Oh my God, thank you so much for this review. It has made my day :)
I am very happy that you like the story so much, I do enjoy writing it and try to do my very best.
Next chapter will be up soon, I promise!
Thank you again,
Lots of love,
Kate

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can you message me when the next chapter comes out?

Author's Response: Sure, I will :)

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gosh i cant wait till part 2 comes out! hope it wont take that long because i really liked the chapters so far!

Author's Response: Don't worry, Part II is awaiting validation so it should be out very soon!!
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i really love how all of your chapters are nice and long and detailed! i also how you do other characters POV! definitely 10/10!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review every chapter, it really makes my day =)
Lots of love,
Kate

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i really loved this chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review =)
Lots of love,
Kate

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