Reading Reviews for Playing House with Malfoy
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Review #26, by missronweasley22 Sleepness Nights

3rd February 2014:
PLEEEAASSEE update soon, I'm a huge fan and I've been dying to read the next chapter! You're definitely one of the best and most original storytellers on this site, thus why I keep coming back to this story time and time again. Keep up the great work, you've got a real talent!

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Review #27, by Quinn Sleepness Nights

23rd January 2014:
I'm happy to hear that chapter 21 will be up soon. Love your creative writing! I am following this story to the end, no matter how long it will take.

Sending you loads of luck, chocolate frogs, and a charm against writer's block via electronic-computer owl.

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Review #28, by Viggar The Parenting Project

15th January 2014:
Omg I just love this story allready xD
So funny! Great plot! And very well written too! Great job!

*moving on to next chapter*

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Review #29, by 3sth3r Sleepness Nights

15th January 2014:
please update soon...I really like this story.

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Review #30, by StoryLover Sleepness Nights

6th January 2014:
Hi so i found this story a while ago and i really love it and i reread it all the time. Sadly every time I find that you havn't updated it yet. I just wanted to let you know that I'm still waiting for this story to be finished.

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Review #31, by a fan Sleepness Nights

30th December 2013:
I am so glad you are not leaving this story...
I had to find it to see if you are doing ok

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Review #32, by Emma Sleepness Nights

30th December 2013:
Please finish the story i love it .I can't wait until the next. Please update!

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Review #33, by Friega Kahlo Sleepness Nights

27th December 2013:
Hi, i think you describe Crissy perfectly well, my last review was on the first chapters, but not that the story has progressed i think you're portraying a 13 month old very well. I can't wait for the next update

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Review #34, by Friega Kahlo The Parenting Project

26th December 2013:
Love your story so far. But as a mom and a Harry Potter fan, i have to give you the heads up that at 13 months they are already cruising and eating finger foods, and drinking less formula.

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Review #35, by mistletoe XD Sleepness Nights

18th December 2013:
Pls update! Ur story is amazing! I hav been waiting for so long for an update!

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Review #36, by Jamie Sleepness Nights

2nd December 2013:
PLEASE, for the love of God UPDATE!!!

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Review #37, by Mione_Malfoy Sleepness Nights

25th November 2013:
Where's the next chapter I've been here since 1st chapter I miss this story

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Review #38, by london_lover Sleepness Nights

22nd November 2013:
Please, please update when you can! I realize that it's been a while, so I hope that this story isn't abandoned! In short: please update! :)

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Review #39, by Lily Sleepness Nights

29th October 2013:
Please update!! I love your story and I can't wait anymore!

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Review #40, by wolfgirl17 Sleepness Nights

24th October 2013:
So there I am scrolling down, smiling like a fool so much that my face hurts, just like i have been for this entire story, getting to the end of the chapter and preparing to hit next, when lo and behold, there is no more next. Therefore I must insist that no matter how busy you are (and trust me I know how life gets in the way of writing) That you simply MUST update immediately, preferably with all of the chapters left in the story because I think the wait may kill me.
Also, and please don't be disheartened or offended by this, but could you pretty please check your spelling/word use. I've notice a lot that some of the words you use don't match up with the sentence. I can usually work out which word you meant... but it does interrupt the flow of the story a little. An example would be the word Withering. The word wither means to dry up and shrivel. I think you meant writhe, which means to move/twist. Another was when you've used the word Stocked while actually meaning Stalked.
You also have a tendency to jump between past and present tense in ways that can be confusing at times, so try to work on sticking to one consistently (I've found that past is easier to write with).
Like I said, not big things, just little ones that will improve the story in the way it flows and clarify exactly what you mean. Maybe even consider getting a Beta reader to clear it up for you (Which BTW I'm Totally available for).
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP. I know I'm not the only fan of yours begging for more of this All-consuming Dramione masterpiece.
Much love Cherub,

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Review #41, by griffindorechicky101 Sleepness Nights

17th October 2013:
Soo amazing pleasse please please update soon!

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Review #42, by Ash Sleepness Nights

15th October 2013:
I kept re-reading this story and always waiting for the new chapter.. So pls update soon.

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Review #43, by GoldenFanFic Sleepness Nights

29th September 2013:
Please, please, PLEASE continue this fic. There hasn't been a new chapter since May, and I really like how it's going so far. So pretty please continue!!!

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Review #44, by minicheddar14 Sleepness Nights

8th September 2013:
I love this story and i know all my friends do too!!! We are all eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!!

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Review #45, by Perdaha_Obssesed Sleepness Nights

5th September 2013:
O mi gosh I can't stop reading. This is so cool. Please keep writing...


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Review #46, by prefectperfect Sleepness Nights

2nd September 2013:
Why? So long with updates? Please don't say you've abandoned this story!! Or if you have at least say so :( I'm getting impatient with waiting for more of this story

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Review #47, by DixieGirl Sleepness Nights

31st August 2013:
What is up with the long updates?? I hardly ever visit this site anymore, except to check if there is a new chapter on this story, and there never is..

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Review #48, by a fan Sleepness Nights

28th August 2013:
just checking in.I hope all is well...
I just got done reading your story again..i don't know for how many times.I love it...
take care..please don't leave this story

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Review #49, by Jayde Sleepness Nights

16th August 2013:
Ahh no! How dare you end it like this! Just joking but please please have a new chapter out soon!! :) x

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Review #50, by Jess Sleepness Nights

6th August 2013:
I love this story, please write more!

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