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Review:800 words of heaven says:
REVIEW SWAP!

Pippa's a reporter? That makes far more sense than vengeful assassin, but somehow, I still would have preferred vengeful assassin :P

Wow, everyone in this story is a little... wild with their emotions. James goes from hating Pippa to becoming friends with her incredibly quickly! Just a weird character trait? Let's hope his faith is not misplaced.

I did think it was a bit strange that Pippa was marrying Peter, whom she obviously didn't actually like in the first chapter, but then she turns around and writes that scathing article, and then I thought she did. But THEN it turns out that she in fact doesn't like him and was doing it for secret reasons that are secret! Mystery! Intrigue! In some ways, both James and Pippa are quite evenly matched in the way they view people and how quickly their opinions seem to change!

Hopefully Pippa's secret is revealed in the next chapter? The plot seems to be going in an interesting direction!

Author's Response: Haha, I agree with you on that one! Vengeful assassin is much cooler!! :D

I know right. I need to work on the transitions! :/ But, it is meant to be a character trait- easily trusting :)

Haha, she's half hearted :D She does sort of like Peter, and then doesn't. Haha, yeah, they are sort of like each other :D

Aw, I'm afraid not. Its a bit bigger secret, so there is a bit of a wait :)

Thank u for the amazing review swap! :D

-ReeBee :)


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