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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey Curie! Itís nice to read some more of your stuff as itís strange not talking to you since SS is over. :P Iíve always had a soft spot for Sirius and Marlene so I couldnít resist reading this.

Gah, there were so many emotions and feelings in this story I donít really know where to begin. The beginning of this one-shot was so sweet and lovely with the way Sirius proposed and they were both so excited and happy I just wanted to hug them because they were all so adorable. I really liked how you worked their backstory into that section too because I really got to learn a lot about them which was really great.

I think the second section when they were come across her parents was even more chilling because it was so unexpected as it went from fluff to death in minutes and it was horrible. I liked how you worked in the backstory about Natalia though as it really helped me get the later scene and have an emotional connection with them all. I just knew that when he turned her to stay there and donít go in it was going to be bad and the foreshadowing there was great.

Gah, the scene with all the Marauders was so sweet and happy it felt so weird to be awing over that I was just like ah Marleneís parents just died I canít be coping with all of this. I thought you wrote James and Lily really well and I really liked reading all about them. Poor old Peter being left with Harry though as the others got the action, but it was a nice nod to canon.

The ending scenes were heart-breaking. I liked how you added in a reason for them being killed with Marleneís sister being a squib as that was a nice twist, and their closing moments were so adorable and really made me want to cry. Then Marlene was a fighter until the end and I felt so proud of her and the way her last thought echoed Siriusí was just so cute. Though Siriusí pain was a little too heart-breaking.

Great one-shot Curie!

-Kiana

Author's Response: HI KIANA! I know right! It's been so so strange! :(

Thank u! I was scared whether or not the backstory would work! After all, it's SO hard to incorporate backstories!!! :D So, thank u for that HUGE compliment!

Thank u! That was another huge fear! It would be terrible if there wasn't enough emotional connection :/Thank u! :D

Thank u! Gah! It was so scary writing Jily! I was so scared it wasn't going to be in canon (basically I was scared of the whole story!)!

Aw, I kind of understand too! i hated writing them and was so scared that the scene at the end would be too abrupt! It actually was quite abrupt, so I had to go and add in more :)

Thanks for the super awesome review Kiana!! :D

-Curie :)


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