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Review:marauderfan says:
Ooh, I like this. You did quite well depicting Victoire's heartbreak at her sister's leaving. So sad that that had to drown out what should have been happiness at her engagement. What should have been a really special day for Victoire got totally turned around when Dominique ran away and I think you portrayed her feelings of loss really well! The flashback was well integrated too.

Your portrayal of Teddy and Victoire is really cute, even though they can't be as happy about their engagement as they would be in other circumstances. They do seem like the sweetest couple here and seem so loving - evident in how much he takes care of her here :)

I think my favourite part of this was the last few paragraphs where Victoire reflects on past Christmases with Dominique! It was really cute and I liked the details you chose to bring out. Dom's fashion taste, Christmas carols, the snow, the hot chocolate. It made for a nice wintery scene that contrasted Victoire's sadness about her sister leaving.

Aw, I'm glad she came back in the end!

Thanks for the review swap, it was fun!

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, i guess it is :( I'm glad I did! After all, that was the main point of this! I'm glad!

Thank u! That honestly was a concern for me, how I could get the romance to shine through when the main plot was about sister love :)

Thank u! That credit goes to Grace :) She was the one who told me to add more description :D

Thank u! I really enjoyed the swap too!


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