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Review:Secret Santa says:
I really liked this story. I love one-shots and character studies, and this was both, so yay!

The central concept was a good one and makes a lot of sense. Dominique was heartbroken, and sometimes when you're in that state, it's hard to feel happy for anyone else. Also, I would think that once you got up the nerve to propose to someone, you wouldn't want to wait, so I can definitely see both sides. And Victoire's inner turmoil about being so happy about being engaged, but feeling so terribly about hurting her sister...man, there really is a lot going on in this story!

I loved the hints and details that you included, especially the bit about how Dominique always insists that they leave milk and cookies for Santa.

And I thought leaving the ending on a bit of a cliffhanger was a good choice. Yes, Dominique is back, but I don't think there would have been a way that you could have tied up the loose ends in a one-shot. You ended it just right.

So, basically, I thought this was all around great. I'm really glad I got the chance to read it. Merry Christmas!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D

Thanks again! Wow! That's the first time someone's told me it makes sense! When I wrote it, I had quite a solid understanding of the topic. But people have told me that it was a bit hard to believe that happening :) so, I'm glad u think it's good! :D

Thank u so much! That credit gods to my beta. Grace was the one who told me to add a bit more description and I came up with the stuff on what they used to do :)

Thanks so much. If I had resolved the whole thing, it would have turned fluffy and cheesy. Which I didn't really want- I thought it would stilt the mood and atmosphere of the story !

Thanks so much! That's so sweet!! :D Merry (belated) Christmas to u too! Have a great new year! :D


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