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Review:Lululuna says:
Hi there! :) One of the things which is so cool about the fourth prompt is how it's a little darker than the others and there are so many ways to approach it, and I felt like yours was really original. :) I really liked how the relationships between the sisters was established and how close they clearly are, such as with Victoire keeping a picture of her sister in her wallet. I felt so sorry for Victoire, thinking that it was all her fault when really the boyfriend is the bad guy in the situation. The portrayal of Victoire was great as she seemed like such a caring, genuine person, and her and Teddy were very cute together.

I also felt like Dominique was being quite selfish and a little unhinged in how she saw her sister's happiness as being an insult to herself. That characterization was great and though I hoped they would find Dom, I was a little annoyed with her for causing so much drama! I think Teddy was too, with how he wondered how Vic could put up with Dominique and her moods all the time.

Well done with this! :) It was a great read, and good luck with the Duel! :D

Author's Response: Yeah- I loved the fourth prompt. And since they added it in last- god! It was definitely love at first sight! ;)

Thank u, yeah, Teddy is a bit of weird character in this one. In a way, he's still the type of young male- who doesn't think a lot about others.

Thanks so much, I was so scared when writing her. There are so many different versions of her!

Dom, she's a drama queen. Especially after her break up, she's on a bit of an emotional roller coaster and just wanted to get away :)

Thanks so much! You did one too. I'll get to reviewing it soon :) Good luck to u too!

xoxo


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