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Review:harrietm says:
Very very nice!! Definitely punchy and dramatic! Hooray that you wrote a sequel and hooray that it all ended well! :D
Just a few constructive criticisms:
- there's a few typos in there, I forget where exactly because I was too into the story to be overly phased haha but a reread and edit would be good!
- Lily convincing Chelsea to talk to James...perhaps not the best dialogue, just maybe didn't put across why James got so angry in the best way, but that could just be me!
Either way I still throughly enjoyed it, keep up the good writing :)

Author's Response: Yeah- this wasn't my best writing. I looked over it, and realised it didn't flow, but it was too far gone to fix... Sorry about that!! My fault for doing to half asleep over a six or so hour drive.

But I'm really glad you enjoyed it!! Thanks for the review, and once again as cliched as it sounds, it made my day! Thank you so much!

Xoxo


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