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Review:Avis123 says:
I'm really excited to carry on reading this story, as you have portrayed the characters really well, and i LOVE your tone of writing! Just a few questions:
-How old is Nelissa?
-Who is Josie's dad?
-Did Nelissa/Josie/James know eachother in Hogwarts?
Fantastic job so far, well done! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

I'm glad you like it :) that means a lot because I try really hard with the characterisation and making sure it all flows well from Nelissa's p.o.v.

Nelissa is twenty four and so are Josie, Cassie (when you reach that part), Tina, Hugo and Greg. James is older than them, being twenty eight, verging twenty nine.

Josie's dad is high up in Nimbus brooms company. But Josie's grandfather was one of the original founding directors for Nimbus brooms. His daughter, Josie's mother, married a muggle psychiatrist with the surname Lively. Josie took her father's name. Did that make sense?

Josie and Nelissa went to Hogwarts together, along with all the people I listed above and were in the same year. James was four years older than them and knew them vaguely by sight, but because of the age gap never spoke much. James had graduated when they were entering their fourth year. Josie came to know him because of parties and social events on the Quidditch calendar. But Nelissa got to know him from conferences and trips to England Quidditch club.

Thank you so much and keep reading and reviewing. If you want to ask anymore questions please do! I'd love to hear some more ;)
- Kelci x


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