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Review:CambAngst says:
Just when I thought you couldn't trick me any more, Sam! Just when I thought you were out of surprises... This was supposed to be the last chapter! Augh! How am I supposed to find out how this ends???

OK, need to calm down. This means I get to enjoy more chapters, so I'm happy about that. For the first time in the whole story, it seems like Simon has lost control of the agenda. The element of surprise and superiority is gone and it obviously bothers him a great deal. Still, he's a very menacing, dangerous guy. I feel really worried for Healer Graham and, by extension, for Harry. He doesn't need to lose anybody else in this story. :(

You got the whole band back together for this one, didn't you? And the trio has been expanded into a quintet! It was great to see all of the people closest to Harry stepping up to help solve this mystery that's endangering all of them. I also liked the fact that you bundled all of the kids back to Hogwarts. That was an anxiety that I wouldn't have liked dealing with. The tension in Harry's office was bad enough as it was.

Also, you got Healer Graham out of imminent danger. Unless Healer Graham isn't who he appears to be... Hmmnn... The photograph of Simon Ross that was left on his desk made me very suspicious. Either the mysterious ally who left David's file for Teddy to find is once again back and helping, or there might be more to this than meets the eye.

OK, so we get a little more of Healer Graham's back story. That left me feeling a little better about the guy. If Simon Ross is impersonating him, he's done a very thorough job with his research. An Auror, a Healer and a Medical Examiner, all before age 32? This guy is Doogie Howser-esque. Are you even old enough to know who that is? ;) So get this. You know Barney on How I Met Your Mother? Well he used to be one heck of a geeky kid...

OK, one small typo and I guess I'm going to go for the complete set.

"I am running up and down the Ministry, going through the archives and any department that hold records for a Simon Ross." - that holds records

Such a good story. You'd better finish this soon! Don't tease me, Sam!

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