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Review:CambAngst says:
Gah! My poor brain! More twists and turns than I can keep up with.

So we have potentially two antagonists? Or do we have a killer with multiple personalities? Hmmnnn... Timing-wise, it would be difficult for another person to be shadowing our maniacal killer, taking credit for his crimes, but not completely impossible. You really know how to keep me guessing! The only thing I'm completely sure of is that this killer you've written -- maybe Theo Moon is his name, or maybe that's the guy who's taking the credit -- creeps me out to no end. You've done an amazing job of making him dark and menacing and very disturbed.

I still think your characterization of Harry is really good. He keeps putting off the things that he doesn't feel like dealing with, choosing to lose himself in his work, instead. I loved the way he treats the pursuit of criminals as a game, and how that segued right back into his memories of Teddy. The boy was obviously very bright and insightful. I'm sure that some of that comes from having that ability to change his appearance. Subterfuge and hiding in plain sight would be second nature to somebody who could do that, wouldn't it?

OK, so I am more convinced than ever now that David is Teddy. Even Harry seems to be getting flashes of it, but he's either too sleep-deprived or too stubborn to see it. The affection that David has for him is so genuine-feeling, along with the way that he gets frustrated as he watches Harry dance on the edge of messing up his marriage. All mysteries aside, I do hope that Harry's able to pull out of this funk and fix things with Ginny. And it would be nice if that could happen before Halloween, but I suspect it won't.

And we get another twist right at the end! You are just reeling me along, chapter after chapter. This story is so addictive!

Once again, very nice job by you and your beta reader. No spelling/grammar problems that I could see. Well, might as well read the next one. ;)

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