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Review:CambAngst says:
You are absolutely determined that I am never going to figure out this David character, aren't you? :p

OK, so scrap what I said about Hermione at the end of the last review. Ugh, poor Harry. No wonder he can't deal with Halloween parties. I'm kind of surprised, actually, to see the other characters being so unsympathetic toward him. I realize that Ginny probably feels like she's given him all the time in the world, but to threaten him with divorce over something as small -- in the great scheme of things -- as a Halloween party? It seems a bit over the top to me. Maybe there's more context that I'm missing here.

I thought you did a really good job writing Harry's side of the conversation in his office. He seemed genuinely broken up, and there are obviously a lot of feelings inside his head that he's never dealt with properly. It would be nice if this was the start of something good for him, but I can't shake the feeling that he has a lot of darkness still coming.

I'm still struggling to put more context around David, I think. Why are he and Harry so seemingly close? What history do they share? And where did David go before he "came back" and why? OK, I'm going to put my Guessing Hat on here: David is actually Teddy, isn't he? I don't know whether David has always been Teddy, but the David who "came back" is definitely Teddy. As to whether he's also the killer, I'm not ready to go there. I'm still halfway convinced it's Harry.

You and your beta did a great job with this chapter. It read really smoothly. More, more, more!

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