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Review:CambAngst says:
Actually, it should start to make sense in the next chapter... Hopefully. :P Harry should make sense anyway. - I'm going to hold you to that!

So there were a number of things I couldn't quite figure out in this chapter, and now I'm not sure whether any or all of it was by design. For one, it seems like the victim was a man, at least if I'm interpreting Ron's comment correctly. So the waitress from the last chapter who I thought was pretty much done for wasn't the victim. Hmmnn...

You continue to throw all of these troubling little hints about David. He's been away and only just come back. He happened to be at the crime scene, although he doesn't live there. He was just on his way home. And he gives Harry some sort of death stare, at least for a moment before it disappears. Honestly, I think you're trying to throw us off the correct trail! It's just too easy to believe that David is the killer. But that said, he definitely knows something more than meets the eye. I keep going back to the way that Harry's dreading Halloween and not sleeping at night...

The argument with Ginny... well, you know me. I'm a major Ginny/Harry guy, so it wasn't fun to read. That said, I think you captured her spirit and her temper very well. Whatever it is that eats Harry about Halloween, she isn't putting up with it. She pulling out all the stops to try to force him to get over it. And it sounds as though it's something that affected everyone at some point, but others have chosen to move on. Why do I have a very bad feeling about the fact that we haven't seen Hermione yet... :(

For his side of the argument, Harry also seemed very much in character. Putting up walls, denying his emotions and getting angry when somebody calls him out on it. Yep, that's our Harry!

Doggone it, I was going to go to bed! Maybe just one more chapter, to see whether you meant what you said. By the way, this is my review # 699, so I think you're gonna get the lucky number 700!

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