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Review:CambAngst says:
Ooh! What an interesting premise. Some sort of post-apocalyptic war story, it would seem. I am already intrigued.

We know very little about what's happened or who the narrator might be, but you slipped in a few tantalizing clues. Is Harry the protagonist's great-grandfather? Is he referring to Harry's father? Either way, it seems that we're pretty far into the future. The creatures who are stalking him were difficult to pin down. Perhaps werewolves, especially based on the way you emphasize their sense of smell and hearing. But perhaps not. It's too early to tell.

I loved the sense of loss and dread that you created. The whole world feels dark and oppressive. The narrator is obviously on the brink of losing everything -- his life and the last shreds of his humanity. He's fighting to keep the light alive, and this reads as though there isn't much of the human race left to save.

I really can't wait to see where you're planning to take this. I'll be keeping an eye out...

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