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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hello again. I am SO SO SO SO sorry that this review took so long! Real life has been a right pain in the ass at the moment. Sometimes I wish I could just skip school and read and write fan fiction all day. Anyway. Onto this AMAZING chapter.

This was, no doubt, my favourite chapter so far. The flashback was perfect, the present moment was also perfect. I loved it! Benjamin and Roxanne were absolutely perfect in the flashback and I think my favourite line had to be: “He’s a bloke! I don’t hug other blokes—and especially ones that aren’t good-looking enough!” That was such a Malfoy thing to say-such a Benjamin thing to say, too. I also love how spoilt and how much of a daddy's girl you made Roxanne out to be when she was younger, and how Ben noticed it. And I LOVE George and Angelina's relationship-I think I've already said that, but it's so true! I loved this little section: ' “I thought you could handle this on your own, Georgia but apparently not.”

“So I owe you a Galleon?” was her father’s reluctant reply.

“And you’re doing the dishes and painting my toes for a month.” Perfection!

I loved and hated the present day section at the same time. The writing was impeccable (he he that word is so weird!) and I love the new dynamics it brought to their relationship and the plot but HOW COULD BEN DO THAT TO ROXIE?? You have no idea how bad I feel for her right now! I just wanted give Ben a good punch in the face for her...but this section also brought up a lot of new questions, mainly: why was Ben acting that way?

Hmmm.I guess I'll just have to find out!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hello!

Hey there, no bigge on being late with this review, I know that real life can get in the way like its no one's business. Trust me. T-T
Thank you so much for liking this chapter, it wasn't easy to write and I tried my hardest to get it the way I wanted to. I really enjoy writing Ben and Roxanne's relationship in the flashbacks, they're very important to the story actually. I sort of feel bad when I can tell people arent' reading them through all the way...:p
Bwhah, Benjamin has a smart mouth but it was something he would say, wasn't it? Hahah.
Oh, yes, Roxanne is really spoiled! I wanted to show that as much as possible and its actually something that hasn't changed much from when she grows up. Sadly. Hahahha.
Ben comments all the time about how spoiled she is but you know, you take what you can get. Hahahhaa.
Why thank you, I'm a HUGE Georgelina shipper, as you may know! :) They're very fun to write, and very funny too but I've grown so comfortable with them since I've writte them in other fanfics before so their banters comes across really well.
I love those quotes you picked out too, they're my favorites as well. :)
Bwhahah, I think everyone sort of loved/hated the present day chapter. Oh, thank you so much! I tried so hard to make this sound good, I really did.
How could Ben, eh? I think I'll play around with all that later on. Just keep reading! :)
Oh, Roxie punched him for you, no worries there! ;)
Hahahahahhhaha.
Ben is confusing but hopefully, you'll keep reading! :D
Thank you so much darling!
Much love,
Gabbie


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