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Review:Tazzi says:
Darn this was a good chapter! I wished it wouldn't end. So much happened and the part with Remus and the Malfoys was killing me. You sure know how to make things intense because I was just waiting for Remus to figure out Peter was RIGHT THERE!!! It kills me.
I think the two Malfoy boys are interesting -which I noted before. Are they going to be a bigger part later? I mean besides hiding Peter. I just want to see how Draco turns out and even how his attitude might have changed toward Harry. Like I've said before - he seems less snobbish and more mild or even nice?
I was also wondering if Tonks was going to catch on. I love big relieves and I was wondering if one of the other werewolves were going to slip. I also love how werewolves are the majority of the search party.
I must admit I was really sad to see the chapter end - but that just means your story is that good!
I'm so excited for the next chapter and can't wait for Sunday!
As always keep up the amazing work!
Thank you so much for the constant updates,
Taz

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you think so! :D Haha, sorry, but it had to. :P I know - I really wanted him to work it out, but at the same time, I didn't. In the end, I decided it wouldn't work with my plans for some of the later chapters and I had to let Remus remain oblivious. It kills me a bit too. :S
Yes, they will have a bigger part in later chapters. Hiding Peter is important - out of curiosity, have you worked out whether it's Draco or Hydrus who has him yet? - but they will play a different role too... I'm looking forward to the way both of them turn out. I suppose he is a bit nicer, but he's only really been shown interacting with his own family and pureblood circle, so that's probably a bit of a factor.
Not yet; Tonks is clever - no doubt of that - but she hasn't had a lot to do with werewolves yet, and even if one of them slipped with something, werewolf isn't going to be her first guess. :P Once she gets to know them a bit better though... who can say? Haha, I thought it was fitting to have quite a few werewolves, since they're Remus' friends and people he wouldn't be afraid to ask a favour of. Besides, they probably need the work. :S
Aww. Haha, thank you! :D
Yes, Sunday as usual! :)
I will! :D Thank you so much for the constant reviews! Any review is wonderful, but yours are always so long and detailed; as an author, it's wonderful, because it means you're really engaged with the story. I can't even begin to explain how brilliant I think that is. :D
Thank you so much for the review!
MarauderLover7.


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