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Review:ValWitch21 says:
You promised hectic chapters, I'm left a bit hungry!

Kidding, of course. This was a great chapter -- I loved this snarky side of Alice. Her parents sound absolutely terrible, almost like Belle's by some aspects (though to a lesser extent).

EEP EEP EEP Sirius and Belle action (sort of) at the end, HOORAY!

And more Olivia and William, I'm so happy to see some more of them :)

This was truly a great chapter, I'm now really waiting for your next update, even more so than usual.

(And, this was coming, Bellatrix. UGH. That is the best description of her I've ever seen. It was so flawless and perfect through and through, I just can't.)

&hearts

Author's Response: Hi Val!!! Ahh I know what you mean, though. I kind of felt the same after this. But a lot of things connect together in the next chapter, like we have to know what one character is doing while we know what the other is, so I have to tell both stories at much, and it just was getting WAY to long to have everything in this chapter.

YOU WILL NOT be left hungry at the end of next weekends, pinky promise :P

I KNOW!!! I got excited to! I mean, it's just a kiss cheek, but it's something, right?!

Your compliments about Bellatrix! Thank you so much!! Her crazy self is really fun to play with, haha!

Thank you so much for your review, and I'm heading over to your story first thing in the morning ♥

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